Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, with a good topic sentence and supporting reason. To improve, make your sentences more concise, avoid repetition (e.g., "store bought" vs "store-bought"), and add a linking phrase to connect past and present practice. Also vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., "occasionally" → "from time to time").

Ví dụ: I used to make paper crafts as a child, and I still make them from time to time. For example, I often make handmade birthday cards and decorative envelopes because I find personalized gifts more meaningful than store-bought ones.

Gợi ý: Good direct answer and a specific mention of recipients. Improve by combining ideas into one or two concise sentences and using a linking phrase to explain frequency and reason. Avoid filler words like "honestly."

Ví dụ: I only write physical letters occasionally, usually to my mother or close friends when I give them gifts, because a handwritten note feels more personal.

Gợi ý: Your idea is strong but the answer is a bit repetitive and grammatically uneven. Improve cohesion by using linking words and clearer grammar (e.g., "more meaningful than"). Provide a specific example of why letters are kept to strengthen content.

Ví dụ: Yes, many people still keep handwritten letters because they are more meaningful than social media messages; for instance, I keep notes from friends as sentimental reminders of important events.

Gợi ý: Clear and directly answers the question. To improve, make it more concise and use linking phrases to present the exception. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., "borrow them" rather than "borrow it").

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually carry paper and pens because I rarely need them; however, if I do, I can easily borrow them or buy a notepad on the spot.

Gợi ý: This is a strong, detailed answer with clear examples and reason. To further improve, tighten the structure slightly (combine similar ideas) and use a linking phrase to connect activities and motive. Consider adding one brief example of a memory to make it more vivid.

Ví dụ: As a child, I loved making papercraft, especially origami stars and three-dimensional hearts; I would decorate them and give them as small gifts because I enjoyed crafting and loved seeing my family’s happy reactions.

× I often create handmade birthday presents or envelopes because I think this is more personal than store bought items.

✓ I often create handmade birthday presents or envelopes because I think these are more personal than store-bought items.

The demonstrative should agree in number with the plural noun 'presents or envelopes', so use 'these' instead of 'this'. Also 'store-bought' needs a hyphen when used as a compound adjective before a noun. Suggestion: match demonstratives to plural nouns and hyphenate compound adjectives.

× Honestly, I occasionally write physical letters, but not very often.

✓ Honestly, I occasionally write physical letters, but not very often.

No grammar error that matches the provided list; the sentence is grammatically correct in present simple for habitual action. No change required.

× I still write them to my mother or friends when I give them gifts.

✓ I still write them to my mother or my friends when I give them gifts.

The original is understandable but parallelism is improved by adding 'my' before 'friends' to match 'my mother'. This is a stylistic improvement rather than a grammatical error from the list; maintain present simple for habitual actions.

× I think yes, they still keep them because I do it and it means a lot for me more than a message on social media because I think in handwriting letters have some emotions in them.

✓ Yes, I think people still keep handwritten letters because I do, and they mean more to me than a message on social media; handwriting conveys emotion.

Multiple issues: awkward 'I think yes' and unclear subjects. Replaced with 'Yes, I think people still keep handwritten letters' to clarify subject and tense. 'It means a lot for me' is incorrect preposition and pronoun use; change to 'they mean more to me'. 'Because I think in handwriting letters have some emotions in them' is ungrammatical: rephrase to 'handwriting conveys emotion'. Suggestions: simplify sentences, ensure subject clarity, use correct prepositions ('to me'), and use concise expressions.

× No, I don't carry paper and pens with me when I go out because I usually don't need them.

✓ No, I don't carry paper and pens with me when I go out because I usually don't need them.

This sentence is grammatically correct; pronouns 'them' correctly refer to 'paper and pens'. No change required.

× But if I need them I can borrow it from somewhere or I can buy it for that moment.

✓ But if I need them I can borrow them from somewhere or I can buy them at that moment.

Pronoun agreement error: 'them' should be used to refer to plural 'paper and pens', not 'it'. Also 'for that moment' is awkward; use 'at that moment' or 'for the moment'. Suggestions: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and use natural prepositional phrases.

× When I was a child, I loved making papercraft, especially origami and three-dimensional stars and hearts.

✓ When I was a child, I loved making paper crafts, especially origami and three-dimensional stars and hearts.

'Papercraft' as a mass noun is acceptable but 'paper crafts' (plural) is clearer when referring to multiple items. This fits article/word-choice category. Suggestion: use 'paper crafts' to indicate various individual items.

× I often decorated them and gave them a small handmade gift for my family and friends because I enjoyed making things by hand and seeing how happy they were to receive them.

✓ I often decorated them and gave them as small handmade gifts to my family and friends because I enjoyed making things by hand and seeing how happy they were to receive them.

Original 'gave them a small handmade gift for my family and friends' is unclear about who received gifts. Corrected to 'gave them as small handmade gifts to my family and friends' clarifies that the decorated items were given as gifts and fixes the prepositional phrase. Suggestion: use 'gave X to Y' structure and pluralize 'gifts' when giving to multiple people.