Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has many grammar, vocabulary and coherence errors. Aim to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct past tense and appropriate nouns (e.g., "paper butterfly", "children"). Keep to 3–4 sentences and avoid unnecessary repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to make paper crafts, especially paper butterflies. I painted them with bright watercolors and added glitter to make them more attractive. I even sold some to local children who enjoyed them and often asked me to make different designs.

Gợi ý: The response needs a clear, direct statement and concise reasons. Use present simple for habitual facts ("I don't write physical letters") and give specific examples of alternatives. Avoid vague phrases like "our universe is all in online" and unnecessary repetition.

Ví dụ: No, I don't write physical letters anymore because everything is digital now. For example, I use WhatsApp and email to communicate quickly, and social media for longer messages.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contradictory. Start with a clear position (yes or no), then explain and give a specific example. Use linking words (however, although, because) to show contrast between old and new practices.

Ví dụ: Some people still keep handwritten letters, although most communication is digital nowadays. For instance, people often save old letters for sentimental reasons, even if official correspondence is sent by email.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer using present simple, then give 1–2 specific reasons. Use clear vocabulary ("notebook app") and avoid repetition. Keep sentences coherent with linking words like "because" or "so".

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually carry paper and pens because I use the notes app on my iPhone. It is faster and more convenient for saving reminders and information while I'm out.

Gợi ý: Your answer conveys activities but is disorganized and has grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence about what you liked, then give specific examples and use linking words. Use correct past habit phrasing "I used to..." and name crafts precisely (paper airplanes, paper butterflies).

Ví dụ: As a child, I loved making paper crafts. For example, I often folded paper airplanes and painted paper butterflies, then played games with my friends using these creations.

× Yes, of course I had made a butterfly with paper.

✓ Yes, of course I made a butterfly out of paper.

The past perfect 'had made' is unnecessary because the speaker is simply narrating a past action without referencing a prior past event; simple past 'made' is correct. Also 'out of paper' is the usual phrase for material. Suggestion: use simple past for single past events (I made).

× I painted with various clothes and made extra attractive fathom and I sold it into the young children.

✓ I painted it with different colors and made it extra attractive, and I sold it to young children.

Multiple preposition and word choice errors: 'with various clothes' should be 'with different colors'; 'fathom' is incorrect word choice; 'sold it into the young children' should be 'sold it to young children'. Use 'to' for the indirect object. Suggestion: choose correct nouns and prepositions: 'painted it with', 'sold it to'.

× They liked them a most, and they asked me to make the extra variety of crap to make their happiest.

✓ They liked it a lot, and they asked me to make more varieties of crafts to make them happy.

Pronoun and agreement issues: 'them a most' is ungrammatical — use 'it a lot'. 'Extra variety of crap' is wrong word choice and countability; use 'more varieties of crafts'. 'Make their happiest' should be 'make them happy'. Suggestion: match singular/plural and choose appropriate nouns and idiomatic phrases.

× No, I didn't like to write a physical letter because nowadays our universe is all in online.

✓ No, I don't like to write physical letters because nowadays everything is online.

Tense mismatch: the question asks about current habit, so present simple 'don't like' is correct. 'Physical letter' should be plural 'physical letters' for general statement. 'Our universe is all in online' is ungrammatical; use 'everything is online'. Suggestion: use present simple for habits and general truths.

× We can send many mail or any informatic information without any quick matter like in WhatsApp, emails or any activities.

✓ We can send many emails or other information quickly using WhatsApp, email, or similar apps.

'Many mail' is incorrect; 'mail' is uncountable, use 'many emails' or 'a lot of mail'. 'Any informatic information' is awkward; use 'other information'. 'Without any quick matter' is incorrect order — use 'quickly'. Suggestion: choose correct quantifiers and adverb placement: 'many emails' and 'quickly using'.

× All matter or letter matter is.

✓ All correspondence is digital now.

Fragment and incomplete sentence: 'All matter or letter matter is.' lacks a verb/object and is unclear. Rephrase to a complete idea that fits context: 'All correspondence is digital now.' Suggestion: ensure sentences have a subject and predicate and convey a complete thought.

× Yes, nobody in or any government work or any field work the people used to write handwriting, handwriting letter or any program they used to provide the handwriting letter.

✓ Yes, in most workplaces and government offices people no longer write by hand or provide handwritten letters.

Confusing pronoun and noun phrases: 'nobody in or any government work or any field work' is ungrammatical. Use clear subject 'people' and specify places 'workplaces and government offices'. 'Used to provide the handwriting letter' is awkward; use 'provide handwritten letters'. Suggestion: simplify clauses and use consistent nouns/pronouns.

× Because if the modern days are also here, but the but we don't need to forget the old one.

✓ Although modern methods are common now, we should not forget the old ones.

Mixed conjunctions and tense: 'Because if'+'but the but' is redundant and incorrect. Use 'Although' or 'Even though' to contrast. 'The old one' should be plural 'the old ones' to refer to older methods. Suggestion: use a single contrasting conjunction and match number.

× No, I didn't carry any penal paper.

✓ No, I don't carry any pen and paper.

Tense/auxiliary and word choice: question is about present habit so present simple 'don't carry' is correct. 'Penal paper' is wrong word; use 'pen and paper'. Suggestion: use correct nouns and present tense for current habits.

× When I go out, go out because I have iPhone which are with our notepad because we're because in notepad I can write any information or any things that I have forgot or any further information that our parents used to bring or any activities because iPhone made us easy.

✓ When I go out I have my iPhone with a notepad app because I can write down information or things I might forget; my phone makes things easier.

Multiple pronoun, verb and sentence-structure errors: 'iPhone which are with our notepad' misuses plural verb and possessive pronouns; use 'my iPhone with a notepad app'. 'I have forgot' should be 'I might forget' or 'I forgot'. 'iPhone made us easy' is incorrect; use 'makes things easier'. Suggestion: use correct possessives, modal verbs for possibility, and simple present for general truths.

× What did you like to do with paper as a child? I used to make many play work or any paper paper craft in my child or otherwise.

✓ As a child, I used to make many paper crafts and play with them.

Awkward phrasing and redundancy: 'many play work or any paper paper craft in my child' is incorrect. Use 'used to' for past habitual actions and 'paper crafts'. Suggestion: reorder to 'As a child, I used to...' and remove redundancy.

× I I paint on that paper with colors or different different where we can play butterfly games or any other games.

✓ I painted on that paper with different colors, making butterflies or other shapes to play games.

Tense and repetition: 'I I paint' duplicates and uses present instead of past. Use past 'painted'. 'Different different' duplicated; use 'different colors'. Suggestion: use past tense for past habits and avoid repetition.

× We make the airplane with the cow paper and we blast them like.

✓ We made paper airplanes and flew them like that.

Odd phrase 'with the cow paper' unclear — probably 'from paper' or 'from old newspapers'—and 'blast them like' is ungrammatical. Use 'made paper airplanes' and verb 'flew' or 'launched' to describe action. Suggestion: choose correct prepositions 'from paper' and use appropriate verbs 'flew/launched'.