Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Réorganisez et simplifiez votre réponse : commencez par une phrase directe répondant à la question, puis donnez un détail précis et utilisez un mot de liaison. Corrigez la grammaire (temps verbaux, articles) et évitez les hésitations et les répétitions inutiles. Par exemple : dites que vous n'avez pas fait beaucoup d'arts du papier, puis mentionnez une activité précise à l'école primaire avec une phrase de liaison (e.g. "However,...").

Ví dụ: No, I haven't done many paper crafts. However, in primary school my teacher asked us to fold and draw a paper cube as homework, and I remember colouring it carefully.

Gợi ý: Répondez clairement et corrigez la grammaire : utilisez le bon vocabulaire (« letter ») et une structure simple (affirmation + détail). Évitez les répétitions et précisez la fréquence et le contexte. Utilisez un lien pour ajouter un exemple précis.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do sometimes write physical letters. For example, I enjoy writing handwritten letters to my brother when I have free time because it feels more personal than a message.

Gợi ý: Présentez une opinion claire puis justifiez-la avec des raisons précises et un exemple; corrigez les formulations (par ex. « fewer people ») et utilisez un connecteur logique. Évitez les erreurs de préposition et de collocation.

Ví dụ: I think fewer people keep handwritten letters nowadays because most work and study are done on computers and people communicate via social media. For instance, I rarely see my classmates writing letters; they prefer emails or chats.

Gợi ý: Répondez directement puis expliquez brièvement la raison en évitant les hésitations et répétitions. Utilisez un mot de liaison pour la conséquence et un vocabulaire précis (e.g. « notes » « notes app »).

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually carry paper and pens because I use my phone to take notes. So if I need to write something down, I simply type it in a notes app.

Gợi ý: Commencez par une phrase claire au passé (liked) puis donnez un détail précis et évitez les répétitions. Utilisez des connecteurs si nécessaire et corrigez la grammaire (past tense, possessive forms).

Ví dụ: As a child, I liked drawing on paper, especially portraits. For example, I often drew my brother, trying to capture his curly hair and facial features.

× When I, when I in my, my primary school, I draw, I draw, uh, cube with a paper.

✓ When I was in primary school, I drew a cube with paper.

The sentence describes a past time (primary school), so past tense is required. Use 'was' for the past state and 'drew' as the past form of 'draw'. Also use 'a cube' (article) and 'paper' without 'a' is acceptable, but 'a sheet of paper' would be more natural. Suggestion: 'When I was in primary school, I drew a cube on a sheet of paper.'

× My, my teacher give me a homework for.

✓ My teacher gave me homework.

This refers to a past event, so the verb should be past tense 'gave' (Past tense issue). Also 'homework' is uncountable in English, so omit the article 'a' (Article errors). The trailing preposition 'for' is unnecessary and should be removed. Suggestion: 'My teacher gave me homework.'

× Yes, of course, sometimes I, I, I draw a physical lesser, I write a physical letter when I in my free time, I love spending my time for write physical, uh, physical letter, especially when my, when, when I we, when we, when I with my brother.

✓ Yes, of course. Sometimes I write physical letters in my free time. I love spending time writing letters, especially when I am with my brother.

Several tense and form issues: 'sometimes' and 'in my free time' require present simple for habitual actions ('write' or better 'write letters'). 'Draw a physical lesser' is incorrect vocabulary; 'write physical letters' is correct. Use gerund 'writing' after 'spending time' (Verb + -ing form). 'When I am with my brother' requires present continuous 'am' for the state. Also plural 'letters' is more natural for general habit (Singular and plural issue). Suggestion: 'Sometimes I write physical letters in my free time. I enjoy writing letters, especially when I am with my brother.'

× I think no, because people today practice their work and studies for with with computer and headphone and social media.

✓ I don't think so, because people today do their work and studies on computers with headphones and social media.

The response requires present simple negative 'I don't think so' not 'I think no'. Use 'do' for activities 'do their work and studies' (Present tense issue). Prepositions: 'on computers' and 'with headphones' are correct (Incorrect use of prepositions). Remove redundant 'with'. Also 'computer' plural or 'on a computer'—use plural for general statement. Suggestion: 'I don't think so, because people today do their work and studies on computers using headphones and social media.'

× So the little people use handwriting today.

✓ So few people use handwriting today.

'The little people' is incorrect; use 'few people' to mean a small number (Quantifier error / Singular and plural issue). Also word order: 'few' before 'people'. Suggestion: 'So few people use handwriting today.'

× Really, I, I don't, uh, I don't carry paper and pen with me because, uh, I, I have my phone.

✓ Actually, I don't carry paper and pens with me because I have my phone.

Minor number agreement: 'paper and pens' is more natural than 'paper and pen' for general habit (Singular and plural issue). Use 'Actually' rather than 'Really' for spoken correction. Tense is present simple, which is correct. Suggestion: 'I don't carry paper and pens with me because I use my phone.'

× So when, I, when I, when I need to, to write something, I write it, write it in my phone.

✓ So when I need to write something, I write it on my phone.

Use 'need to write' (infinitive) is correct; 'on my phone' is the correct preposition for devices (Incorrect use of prepositions). Avoid repetition. Suggestion: 'When I need to write something, I write it on my phone.'

× When I'm trying I love to draw draw person in in in the people in the paper.

✓ When I was a child I loved to draw people on paper.

The question asks about childhood, so past tense 'was' and 'loved' are required (Past tense issue). Use 'draw people' (plural) and preposition 'on paper' (Incorrect use of prepositions). Remove repetitions. Suggestion: 'When I was a child, I loved to draw people on paper.'

× Like draw my brother he have he have curly hair and I I try to draw draw him.

✓ For example, I would draw my brother; he has curly hair and I tried to draw him.

Subject-verb agreement: 'he have' should be 'he has' in present, but since speaker describes past activity use 'he had' or 'I tried' (Past tense issue and subject-verb agreement). Repetition removed. Suggestion: 'For example, I would draw my brother because he had curly hair, and I tried to capture that in my drawings.'