Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, correct grammar, avoid repetition and finish the thought. Start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific supporting details (materials, why you prefer them) and finish the sentence. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer simple, comfortable clothes. For example, most of my clothes are made of cotton or linen because they are breathable and easy to wash. Consequently, they are practical and usually affordable, so I don’t worry about wearing them often.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and fix grammar (subject–verb agreement). Give a brief comparison and one reason with a linking word (e.g., however or although). Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are easier to wear and wash. Although smart clothes look better for formal events, they often require special care and feel restrictive, so I only wear them on special occasions.

Gợi ý: This answer is clear but a bit repetitive. Combine ideas, correct phrasing (e.g., 'temperature is fairly constant') and use linking words to make it concise. Mention one or two specific reasons and an example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I own many T-shirts in different colours and wear them almost daily because they are comfortable and easy to care for. Moreover, Singapore’s fairly constant warm weather means I can wear T-shirts year-round.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, avoid fragmented sentences and unclear phrases. Give one clear reason plus a short example. Remove unclear phrases like 'buy a scene' or 'our identities'.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t. Because my wardrobe is simple, I usually replace items rather than agonise over choices. For example, if a T-shirt wears out I just buy a similar one, so I rarely spend much time deciding what to wear.

Gợi ý: Clarify and complete the answer. Fix grammar and remove repetitions. State whether you change styles or not, give reason (job dress code) and an example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t usually change much between weekdays and weekends because my workplace has no strict dress code. So most of the time I wear the same simple, comfortable clothes both at work and at home.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and fix grammar ('adapted to other colours'). Give a short reason and one example of how you combine white with other colours. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer white because it looks neat and goes well with many other colours. For instance, I often pair a white T-shirt with blue jeans or a coloured scarf to create a simple, clean outfit.

× I like a simple but comfortable clothes because wearing these clothes is comfortable and easy to wear and wash.

✓ I like simple but comfortable clothes because they are comfortable and easy to wear and wash.

Using 'a' before the plural noun 'clothes' is incorrect (article error) and 'comfortable' should describe 'clothes' without an extra article; replace 'wearing these clothes is comfortable' with 'they are comfortable' for conciseness and correct subject reference. Suggestion: Remove the unnecessary article 'a' and use a plural subject pronoun 'they' to refer to clothes.

× Most of them are made of are made from cotton or linen.

✓ Most of them are made from cotton or linen.

The sentence repeats the passive verb phrase 'are made' causing redundancy. Use a single correct passive form 'are made from'. Suggestion: Keep one occurrence of the passive construction: 'are made from'.

× So most of them are not are not very expensive.

✓ So most of them are not very expensive.

The phrase duplicates 'are not' which is a repetition error. Remove the duplicate to make the sentence grammatical and fluent. Suggestion: Remove the repeated words.

× So if I were out

✓ So if I go out, I can wear them without worrying about damage.

The original is an incomplete conditional clause lacking a main clause, producing a sentence fragment. Provide the result clause to complete the conditional. Suggestion: Complete conditional sentences with both 'if' clause and main clause.

× The smart clothes looks better look better, but most of them is hard to wear and and you have to worry about some special care

✓ Smart clothes look better, but most of them are hard to wear and you have to worry about special care.

'Clothes' is plural so the verb should be 'look' not 'looks'. 'Most of them' is plural so use 'are' not 'is'. Also removed duplicated 'look better' and duplicated 'and'. Suggestion: Ensure verb agrees with plural noun 'clothes' and remove repeated words.

× Yes, I like wearing t shirts.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts.

This is mainly capitalization/style: 'T-shirts' should be capitalized and hyphenated. Use consistent form. Suggestion: Use standard form 'T-shirts'.

× I almost wear t shirts every day because they are so comfortable and don't worry about special care especially in Singapore temper the temperature is constant.

✓ I almost wear T-shirts every day because they are comfortable and do not require special care, especially since Singapore's temperature is fairly constant.

Sentence had missing subject for 'don't worry' — clothes do not worry is incorrect; use 'do not require special care'. 'Temper the temperature is constant' is ungrammatical; replace with 'since Singapore's temperature is fairly constant'. Also normalize 'almost' placement. Suggestion: Use appropriate verb for inanimate subjects ('require' for clothes) and correct clause linking.

× I can wear t shirts all the year.

✓ I can wear T-shirts all year round.

'All the year' is nonstandard in modern English; use 'all year' or 'all year round'. Also capitalize 'T-shirts'. Suggestion: Use natural time expression 'all year round'.

× No I don't spend much time choosing clothes because most of my clothes are simple but comfortable and they don't have many styles so if I wear out one t shirt.

✓ No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because most of my clothes are simple and comfortable and do not have many styles, so if I wear out one T-shirt,

Original ends with a fragment after 'so if I wear out one t shirt.' The plural/singular are mixed but corrected sentence still ends incomplete; need main clause to finish. Also capitalize 'T-shirt' and remove redundant 'but'. Suggestion: Complete the conditional: add result clause, e.g. 'I can just replace it.'

× I can buy a new one. I can buy a scene. I can buy our identities. I can buy a new one to replace it and don't have to consider many options.

✓ I can buy a new one to replace it and don't have to consider many options.

The original contains irrelevant and incorrect phrases ('I can buy a scene', 'I can buy our identities') that break coherence and are likely errors; condense to one clear sentence showing the result. Remove nonsensical repetitions. Suggestion: Keep clear, concise result statements and remove unrelated fragments.

× Now I usually wear some types of clothes on weekdays and weekends because my job is tailed has no strict or regulations about our clothes.

✓ Now I usually wear the same types of clothes on weekdays and weekends because my job has no strict regulations about what we wear.

'Tailed' is incorrect; probably meant 'tailed'->'detailed' but better to say 'has no strict regulations'. Use 'what we wear' to express clothing rules. Also change 'some types' to 'the same types' for intended meaning. Suggestion: Use 'has no strict regulations about what we wear' for clarity.

× So it is It is it is our freedom to wear what to wear what slight most time I wear simple but comfortable clothes because

✓ So it is our freedom to choose what to wear; most of the time I wear simple but comfortable clothes because...

Repeated phrases and confusion between 'what to wear' and 'what' create a run-on and redundancy. Use a clear connector and complete the sentence. Ellipsis indicates continuation. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and use proper connectors like 'most of the time' and complete the reason clause.

× I like white clothes because white clothes look neat and can be adapt to other colors of clothes can be adapted to other color clothes.

✓ I like white clothes because they look neat and can be adapted to other colors.

'Can be adapt' is ungrammatical; use passive 'can be adapted'. Remove repetition and redundant phrases. Use pronoun 'they' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: Use correct passive participle 'adapted' and avoid repeating the same idea.

× I have many white clothes like t shirts or trousers and skirts.

✓ I have many white clothes, like T-shirts, trousers, and skirts.

Add commas for clarity and capitalize 'T-shirts'. This fixes listing structure. Suggestion: Use commas to separate list items and correct capitalization.

× I think they are they are.

✓ I think they are versatile and easy to coordinate.

The original repeats 'they are they are' which is a fragment and meaningless. Provide a complete adjective phrase to state the intended opinion. Suggestion: Replace repetition with clear adjectives describing the clothes.