Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
I like wear sports style clothes, for example Nike or Adidas. I think they can make me free and comfortable so I like I like wear them.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I think these kinds of clothes can make me free, relaxed and comfortable, while smart clothes like high heel shoes my feet will.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
No, I don't like wearing T-shirts. I like wearing sports style clothes. I think they make me feel relaxed and comfortable and free. I think, uh, I already choose them for everyday wear.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
No I don't cause no matter how much time I spend on choosing clothes I just end up choosing Nike or Adidas clothes.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
No, I don't wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends. I wear sports style clothes from Monday to Sunday. I think they are comfortable and free. I like this feeling.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
I like bright colored clothes like pink or yellow. I read some studies that bread colors can make people feel happy. I think I wear bright color clothes can make me have a sense of happiness.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 用更完整、语法正确的句子回答并减少重复;提供一两点具体原因并用连接词衔接。例如说明哪类运动服的特点或适合的场合。注意动词形式和句子流畅性。
Ví dụ: I prefer wearing sports-style clothes, such as Nike or Adidas, because they are lightweight and allow me to move freely. For example, I often choose breathable jackets and running shoes when I go out or exercise.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁并完成未说完的句子;用连接词给出对比并举例说明具体不喜欢智能服装的原因(如高跟鞋如何影响脚部)。避免重复表述“comfortable”。
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me relax and move easily. In contrast, smart clothes like high heels are uncomfortable and can hurt my feet after a few hours.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答可以更逻辑化:先直接回答,然后给出简洁原因并举例说明什么时候穿运动服而不是T恤。减少犹豫词和重复。
Ví dụ: Not really. I usually prefer sportswear because it’s more comfortable for my daily activities. For instance, I wear tracksuits or hoodies when I go shopping or meet friends.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 句子应更自然并解释为什么总是选择同样品牌,可加入具体选择标准(如面料、款式)。用连接词说明过程而非口语化缩略。
Ví dụ: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually prefer Nike or Adidas. I pick them quickly since I know their styles and fabrics suit me.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 76.0Gợi ý: 可以更具体说明为何不区分工作日与周末(例如工作类型、休闲习惯),并用连接词把观点和原因串联起来,避免重复“comfortable”。
Ví dụ: No, I wear the same sports-style clothes all week because my daily routine is casual. Since I mostly work from home, comfortable clothes are more practical for me.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 注意拼写和语法(比如“bread colors”应为“bright colors”),并用更具体的表达说明为什么颜色会影响情绪,可引用一个简短例子或场合。句子要连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer bright colors such as pink and yellow because they cheer me up. For example, I wear a yellow sweater when I have a busy day to boost my mood.
× I like wear sports style clothes, for example Nike or Adidas.
✓ I like wearing sports-style clothes, for example Nike or Adidas.
动词 like 后通常接动名词(-ing)表示喜好。应使用 wearing 而不是原形动词 wear。另外 sports-style 作复合形容词应连字符,clothes 前不加冠词。建议:like 后接动名词,注意复合形容词写法。
× I think they can make me free and comfortable so I like I like wear them.
✓ I think they make me feel free and comfortable, so I like wearing them.
同样 like 后应接动名词 wearing;并且动词 make 后常用结构 make somebody feel + 形容词,而非直接 make me free。修正重复的“I like”。建议:使用 make me feel + 形容词,避免重复短语。
× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I think these kinds of clothes can make me free, relaxed and comfortable, while smart clothes like high heel shoes my feet will.
✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I think these kinds of clothes make me feel free, relaxed and comfortable, while smart clothes, like high-heeled shoes, hurt my feet.
原句结构混乱,“make me free”应改为 make me feel free;表示鞋痛脚应使用 hurt my feet 或 hurt my feet 的结构,原句把词序弄乱且缺少动词。high-heeled 为复合形容词需连字符。建议:保持并列结构清晰,主从句中保持完整谓语。
× I like wearing sports style clothes. I think they make me feel relaxed and comfortable and free.
✓ I like wearing sports-style clothes. I think they make me feel relaxed, comfortable and free.
句子主要问题是标点与复合形容词写法。sports-style 用连字符,更自然;并列形容词之间用逗号分隔使语义更清晰。建议:注意复合形容词和并列形容词的标点。
× I think, uh, I already choose them for everyday wear.
✓ I think, uh, I already chose them for everyday wear. / I have already chosen them for everyday wear.
这里表示过去完成或经历应使用过去式 chose 或现在完成时 have chosen,而不是现在时 choose。建议根据语境选择过去式或现在完成时(强调结果用现在完成时)。
× No I don't cause no matter how much time I spend on choosing clothes I just end up choosing Nike or Adidas clothes.
✓ No, I don't, because no matter how much time I spend choosing clothes, I just end up choosing Nike or Adidas clothes.
因果连词应为 because 而非口语缩写 cause;动词短语 spend 后直接接动名词 choosing,不需要介词 on。还需添加逗号以改善可读性。建议:使用 because 表达原因,记住 spend + -ing。
× No, I don't wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends.
✓ No, I don't wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and at weekends. / No, I don't wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends.
原句可接受,但若需强调英式用法可以在 weekends 前加 at。此条可视为无重大语法错误,保持原句仅微调标点。建议:在正式写作中可加逗号分隔短语以提高可读性。
× I wear sports style clothes from Monday to Sunday. I think they are comfortable and free.
✓ I wear sports-style clothes from Monday to Sunday. I think they are comfortable and make me feel free.
comfortable 与 free 作为形容词并列时通常用 make me feel free 来表达“让我感觉自由”,直接说 they are free 容易引起歧义。sports-style 需连字符。建议:用 make me feel + 形容词 表达感受。
× I like bright colored clothes like pink or yellow.
✓ I like bright-colored clothes, like pink or yellow.
bright-colored 为复合形容词应连字符;可加逗号引出举例。也可使用 brightly colored(副词+过去分词)但在此 bright-colored 更常见。建议:注意复合形容词的书写与标点。
× I read some studies that bread colors can make people feel happy.
✓ I read some studies that say bright colors can make people feel happy.
原句有拼写错误 bread 应为 bright,且从句结构需要引入动词 say 或者直接用 which 表示这些研究表明。建议:注意拼写并使用合适的引导动词或关系代词。
× I think I wear bright color clothes can make me have a sense of happiness.
✓ I think wearing bright-colored clothes can make me feel happy.
主句结构混乱,think 后若接从句应使用 that 或将动名词短语作主语:Wearing bright-colored clothes can make me feel happy. 同时 bright-colored 用连字符,make someone feel happy 更自然。建议:要么用 I think that... 要么用动名词作主语,保持语法一致。