Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence naming your general preference, then give 1–2 specific examples with linking words. Correct verb agreement and choose precise vocabulary (e.g., ‘rash guard’ not ‘rush guard’). Avoid unnecessary repetition.

Ví dụ: I choose clothes based on the occasion. For example, I wear comfortable pajamas at home, but when I go to the university swimming pool I wear a rash guard and my swimming trunks.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly (state a clear preference) and avoid saying only ‘yes’. Use one sentence for the main idea and one for supporting reason, with correct grammar and clearer linking (e.g., ‘because’). Replace vague phrases like ‘those kind of clothes’ with ‘comfortable clothes’ or ‘smart clothes’.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable clothes at home but smart clothes when I am at work or university, because as a tourism student I need to dress formally for classes and practical activities.

Gợi ý: Give a concise direct response and explain reasons with clearer vocabulary. Avoid unclear words like ‘blonde’ and incorrect prepositions. Use linking words (e.g., ‘because’, ‘so’) and one or two specific reasons.

Ví dụ: Not really. I avoid T-shirts because I don't think they suit my body type, and I find them too plain for my style.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer and then give a clear reason. Use precise phrases (e.g., ‘I often rush and end up with wardrobe problems’) and avoid informal fillers like ‘kinda’. Keep to two sentences with logical linking (e.g., ‘because’).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often rush when getting ready and sometimes have wardrobe problems because I want to look good and avoid wearing the same outfit twice.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and organize the explanation: state what you wear on weekdays, then contrast with weekends using a linking word (e.g., ‘whereas’, ‘but’). Correct small grammar issues and avoid repeating ‘because’.

Ví dụ: Not really. On weekdays I wear smart, formal clothes for university, whereas on weekends I usually stay in comfortable pajamas at home.

Gợi ý: Be concise and accurate: state your preferred color and give one clear, logical reason. Avoid awkward phrasing and unsupported claims about psychology; if mentioning color psychology, phrase it carefully and briefly. Use correct grammar and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: I prefer blue because it looks clean and professional. Many people also choose blue for interviews because it can convey confidence and reliability.

× The kinds of clothes I like to wear is the pants on the occasion or the event where I will be going.

✓ The kinds of clothes I like to wear are the pants for the occasions or events I will be attending.

Subject 'The kinds of clothes' is plural so the verb should be 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'the pants on the occasion or the event where I will be going' is awkward; use plural 'occasions or events' and 'attending' for natural phrasing.

× So for example is I will wear comfortable clothes such as pajamas whenever I am at home, but whenever I will be at our university swimming pool is I wear my favorite rush guard as well as my swimming material.

✓ For example, I wear comfortable clothes such as pajamas whenever I am at home, but when I am at our university swimming pool I wear my favorite rash guard and my swimming gear.

Do not use 'is' as filler. Use simple present 'I wear' for habitual actions. 'Whenever I will be' is incorrect; use 'when I am'. 'Rush guard' should be 'rash guard' and 'swimming material' is better as 'swimming gear'.

× Yes, I prefer to wear those kind of clothes, just like I wear comfortable clothes in our house while I wear the casual clothes and smart clothes whenever I'm on my office as well as on our department.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear those kinds of clothes: I wear comfortable clothes at home, and I wear casual or smart clothes when I am at my office or in our department.

Use 'those kinds of' (plural) and 'at home' not 'in our house'. 'On my office' and 'on our department' are incorrect preposition/pronoun uses; use 'at my office' and 'in our department'. Also simplify redundancy.

× Because as a tourism student is we have to wear something formal.

✓ Because as tourism students we have to wear something formal.

Remove redundant 'is' and match subject and verb: 'tourism students' (plural) with 'we have'. The original had incorrect word order and extraneous 'is'.

× Not really, it's not my preference to wear T-shirts.

✓ Not really; T-shirts are not my preference.

Original sentence is understandable but awkward. Rephrase to avoid 'it's not my preference to wear' and to place 'T-shirts' as subject for clarity.

× I don't have any T-shirts on my clothing drawer because it doesn't suit me well, especially on my body type.

✓ I don't have any T-shirts in my clothes drawer because they don't suit me well, especially for my body type.

Use 'in' not 'on' for 'drawer'. 'Clothing drawer' is better as 'clothes drawer'. Use plural pronoun 'they' to match 'T-shirts' and 'for my body type' is natural preposition.

× And if ever I wear T-shirt I feel like it's a kind of blonde and I don't want to feel plain.

✓ If I ever wear a T-shirt, I feel it looks bland and plain, which I don't like.

'If ever' is informal—use 'If I ever'. 'T-shirt' needs an article 'a'. 'Blonde' is wrong word; use 'bland'. Clarify meaning and combine ideas with correct conjunctions.

× Definitely yes, I always have a wardrobe malfunction whenever I'm on the rush on going to some places or occasions and it's kinda nervous as well as sad, especially that if ever I am running out of time because I wanted to look good and I don't want to repeat some of my clothes.

✓ Definitely. I often have wardrobe malfunctions when I'm in a rush to go to places or occasions, and it makes me nervous and sad, especially if I'm running out of time because I want to look good and I don't want to repeat outfits.

Use 'in a rush' not 'on the rush'. 'Wardrobe malfunction' pluralization and 'often' fit better than 'always'. Use present simple/habitual 'I want' not past 'I wanted'. Replace informal 'kinda' with 'makes me' and 'some of my clothes' with 'outfits'.

× No, I don't wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends because usually on weekdays I prefer smart clothes and formal because I'm a tourism student and I wear on weekends is some kind of pajamas because I'm at home.

✓ No, I don't wear very different styles on weekdays and weekends. Usually on weekdays I prefer smart and formal clothes because I'm a tourism student; on weekends I usually wear pajamas because I'm at home.

Original is run-on and awkward. Split into two sentences, fix word order ('smart and formal clothes'), remove incorrect 'I wear on weekends is', and use consistent tense.

× I prefer the shade of color blue because the hue of that color is giving a professional look a cleaner look.

✓ I prefer shades of blue because that color gives a more professional and cleaner look.

Use 'shades of blue' not 'the shade of color blue'. 'Is giving' should be 'gives' (present simple). Combine 'professional look a cleaner look' into 'more professional and cleaner look'.

× And especially if we base on psychology of colors is that if you wear color blue on their interviews is you are most likely to get success because of how they are intimidate on you and how professional you are.

✓ According to color psychology, if you wear blue to interviews you are more likely to succeed because it makes you appear more professional and can intimidate the interviewer less.

Original has many pronoun and structure errors: remove filler 'is that', use 'According to color psychology'. Use 'wear blue to interviews' not 'on their interviews'. 'You are most likely to get success' -> 'more likely to succeed'. Clarify 'intimidate' meaning: blue tends to appear professional and non-threatening; fix passive/pronoun mismatches.