Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more natural: start with a topic sentence stating your general preference, avoid repetition, correct grammar (e.g., "that" instead of "AT" if meant), and give one specific example with a brief reason. Keep it under 4–5 sentences and use linking words like "but" or "however."

Ví dụ: I usually wear a T-shirt and jeans on ordinary days because they are comfortable and practical. However, for special occasions I prefer a soft, flowy skirt that allows me to move easily and feel comfortable all day.

Gợi ý: Make the topic sentence direct and correct common errors (e.g., "feel easy" → "move easily", "unconvenient" → "uncomfortable"). Use one linking phrase to explain and give a short result. Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they let me move easily. As a result, I feel less stressed and can focus on my tasks throughout the day.

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct grammar: combine sentences to avoid repetition, remove hesitations, and correct vocabulary ("constant movement" or "mobility" instead of "constable"). State one clear reason with an example from your job and avoid filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often wear T-shirts because I work in a restaurant and need freedom of movement. For example, a lightweight T-shirt helps me serve customers and carry trays comfortably.

Gợi ý: Clarify meaning and fix grammar: it seems you mean you plan outfits the night before. Start with a clear topic sentence, explain the routine briefly, and avoid confusing phrases like "children clothes" unless meant. Use linking words like "because" or "so."

Ví dụ: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually decide what to wear the night before. That way I am prepared and don't waste time in the morning.

Gợi ý: Correct unclear words ("Greek days" → "weekdays") and reduce hesitations. Give a clear contrast using linking words like "but" and specify what you wear on weekends with a short reason. Keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: Yes. On weekdays I wear T-shirts and comfortable pants because I have school and work. But on weekends I like to dress up a bit and wear nicer outfits when I go out with friends.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer ("I prefer...") and avoid awkward phrasing. Explain briefly why and give one example of a preferred shade. Use correct grammar and linking words like "because" and "so."

Ví dụ: I prefer black or neutral-coloured clothes because bright colours tend to make my skin look darker. For instance, I often choose black or beige tops because they suit my complexion better.

× I would like to wear AT shirt and jeans on my basic days but sometime on special occasion.

✓ I would like to wear a T-shirt and jeans on my basic days but sometimes on special occasions.

Errors: missing/incorrect articles and plural/singular forms. Use the indefinite article 'a' before a singular countable noun ('a T-shirt'). 'AT' is likely 'a T-shirt'. 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency. 'special occasion' should be plural 'special occasions' to match the general meaning. Suggestion: add 'a' before 'T-shirt', change 'AT' to 'a T-shirt', use 'sometimes', and pluralize 'occasions'.

× I normally I wear a skirt with a soft material so it's easy to move and feel comfortable all day.

✓ Normally I wear a skirt made of soft material so it's easy to move and I feel comfortable all day.

Errors: extra subject 'I' repetition and awkward noun phrase 'a skirt with a soft material'. Remove the repeated 'I'. Use 'made of soft material' or 'of soft material' to describe the skirt. Also add 'I' before 'feel' for parallel structure. Suggestion: say 'Normally I wear a skirt made of soft material so I can move easily and feel comfortable all day.'

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I always want to feel easy for my movement.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I always want to move easily.

Errors: unnatural phrase 'feel easy for my movement' and word order. Use the adverb 'easily' to modify the verb 'move'. Suggestion: replace 'feel easy for my movement' with 'move easily' or 'have freedom of movement'.

× I would rather feel easy for my movement than feel unconvenient, so it will make my day better.

✓ I would rather be comfortable when moving than feel uncomfortable, so it will make my day better.

Errors: adjective/adverb misuse: 'feel easy for my movement' and misspelling 'unconvenient' should be 'uncomfortable'. Use 'be comfortable when moving' or 'feel comfortable' and 'uncomfortable'. Suggestion: use 'comfortable' and 'uncomfortable' appropriately.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. Normally I wear T-shirt on school when I have to go to school or going to work because I'm working in a restaurant.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. Normally I wear a T-shirt to school when I have to go, or when I am going to work because I work in a restaurant.

Errors: article before 'T-shirt' missing ('a T-shirt') and preposition use: 'on school' should be 'to school'. Also verb forms: use 'when I have to go' or 'when I am going'. Suggestion: use 'a T-shirt' and 'to school' and match verb tense consistently.

× So, uh, my, I need my movement, uh, constable.

✓ So I need freedom of movement; I need to be comfortable.

Errors: 'constable' is incorrect word choice (constable is a police rank) and awkward phrasing 'my movement'. Use 'freedom of movement' or 'to be comfortable'. Suggestion: replace with 'I need freedom of movement' or 'I need to be comfortable'.

× Normally I don't spend a lot of time for children clothes because I always think about what I'm gonna wear in the night before the day and it's either when I have everything repaired in the on the previous day.

✓ Normally I don't spend a lot of time on choosing clothes because I always think about what I'm going to wear the night before, after I have everything prepared the previous day.

Errors: wrong preposition 'for children clothes' (should be 'on' or 'choosing clothes' and if 'children's clothes' intended). 'gonna' is informal; use 'going to'. 'in the night before the day' should be 'the night before'. 'repaired' wrong word; likely 'prepared'. Also extra 'in the on'. Suggestion: use 'think about what I'm going to wear the night before' and 'prepared'.

× Yes, because on the Greek days I'm going to school and, uh, work.

✓ Yes, because on weekdays I'm going to school and work.

Errors: likely 'Greek days' is mispronunciation of 'weekdays'. Use 'weekdays'. Tense 'I'm going' is acceptable for habitual actions but can be simplified to 'I go to school and work on weekdays.' Suggestion: replace with 'on weekdays I go to school and work.'

× So normally I wear T-shirt and a comfortable, uh, pants.

✓ So normally I wear a T-shirt and comfortable pants.

Errors: missing article before 'T-shirt' and mismatch 'a ... pants' (pants is plural so no 'a'). Suggestion: use 'a T-shirt and comfortable pants'.

× But on a weekend when I'm going out with my friends or going going somewhere, uh, for relaxation, I prefer way, uh, beautiful.

✓ But on weekends, when I'm going out with my friends or going somewhere to relax, I prefer to wear something more beautiful.

Errors: repetition 'going going', awkward phrase 'for relaxation', missing verb 'to wear', and 'prefer way beautiful' incorrect. Suggestion: rephrase to 'I prefer to wear something more attractive' or 'more beautiful'.

× Because my skin is not kind of dark so I prefer black clothes or uh natural color clothes because if it the color too bright it make my skin look darker.

✓ Because my skin is not very dark, I prefer black clothes or natural colors, because if the color is too bright it makes my skin look darker.

Errors: 'not kind of dark' awkward — use 'not very dark'. 'natural color clothes' should be 'natural colors' or 'clothes in natural colors'. Missing 'is' in 'if the color is too bright' and subject-verb agreement 'it make' should be 'it makes'. Suggestion: use 'not very dark', 'natural colors', add 'is', and make verb agree.