Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Remove repetition, make a clear topic sentence and add one specific example. Use linking words to contrast daily and special occasions.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable clothes for everyday wear. For example, I usually choose soft jeans and a cotton T‑shirt because they’re easy to move in. However, when I’m invited to a party, I wear something classier, like a smart dress or a blazer, to look more polished.

Gợi ý: Avoid hesitations and unfinished sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use a linking word (for example/while) and give a specific instance for work and leisure.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation: I wear smart clothes for work, such as a shirt and trousers, but I prefer casual clothes for leisure. For instance, I wear trainers and a hoodie when I go to the park because they’re comfortable and practical.

Gợi ý: Be concise and avoid repeating ideas. Give one or two specific reasons and an example showing when you wear T‑shirts.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I find T‑shirts very comfortable and easy to move in, so I often wear them when I’m doing housework or working from home. For example, I wear a plain cotton T‑shirt when I clean the house because it’s breathable and easy to wash.

Gợi ý: Correct small errors and be specific about times. Use linking words (but/however) and give a brief example of how long you spend for parties vs routine days.

Ví dụ: It depends on the occasion. For parties I spend a lot of time—often an hour or more—choosing an outfit to make sure it looks right. However, for work or daily routines I usually choose something within five to ten minutes.

Gợi ý: Make the answer clearer and less wordy. State directly whether you change styles, then explain the reason (budget) and give a specific example of a weekday vs weekend outfit.

Ví dụ: Yes, I wear different styles because of occasions and budget. On weekdays I wear simple, practical clothes for work, like a shirt and trousers, while on weekends I might buy one or two nicer items and wear a casual stylish outfit, such as a smart jacket with jeans.

Gợi ý: Good clear answer; improve by correcting minor grammar and giving a brief reason and an example of how you use colours in outfits.

Ví dụ: I prefer darker colours because they make me feel confident and are easy to match. For example, I often wear black trousers and a grey sweater because they look simple but stylish and are suitable for many occasions.

× I prefer I prefer comfortable ones.

✓ I prefer comfortable ones.

This sentence repeats the verb 'prefer', causing redundancy and a sentence structure error. Remove the repeated phrase so the sentence is concise and grammatically correct. Suggestion: say 'I prefer comfortable ones.'

× But sometimes when I invite invited to a party I need something classy.

✓ But sometimes when I am invited to a party I need something classy.

The student used both present and past forms ('invite invited'), causing a tense error. The situation refers to being invited by others, so the passive present continuous or simple present passive 'am invited' is appropriate. Use 'am invited' to show the passive action that happens occasionally.

× I mean what I want to go to work, I put on some formal outfits, but for daily outfits, when I want to go to park or go for a walk, I prefer something casual and easy to wear and I prefer smart clothes for.

✓ I mean, when I want to go to work, I put on formal outfits. For daily wear, when I go to the park or go for a walk, I prefer something casual and easy to wear, and I prefer smart clothes for special occasions.

This long sentence has multiple structure problems: incorrect phrase 'what I want to go to work', missing article before 'park', awkward repetition 'I prefer... and I prefer...', and an incomplete phrase 'smart clothes for'. Break into two sentences, correct the clause to 'when I want to go to work', add the article 'the' before 'park', and clarify 'for special occasions' to complete the thought.

× As I said earlier, I really like some comfortable dress like T-shirts because it's really easy to move in and it helps you feel relaxed, especially when you want to do your daily tasks like cleaning your home or doing your job.

✓ As I said earlier, I really like comfortable clothes like T-shirts because they're easy to move in and help you feel relaxed, especially when you do daily tasks like cleaning your home or working.

The original uses 'some comfortable dress' which is incorrect singular noun usage for casual clothing; 'dress' implies one garment and 'some' with singular is wrong. Also mix of 'it's' and 'it helps you' is inconsistent with plural 'T-shirts'. Use plural 'clothes' or 'T-shirts' and plural verbs 'they're' and 'help'. Replace 'doing your job' with 'working' for natural phrasing.

× If I want to go to party, yes, I actually spend out a lot of time finding good and suitable dress for a party.

✓ If I want to go to a party, yes, I actually spend a lot of time finding a good and suitable dress for the party.

Missing article before 'party' and unnecessary 'out' after 'spend'. Also 'dress' here should be 'a dress' and specifying 'the party' or 'a party' clarifies. Correct articles and remove extra word.

× But for Delia office, no it doesn't take me that much time.

✓ But for the office, no, it doesn't take me that much time.

'Delia' appears to be a typo or name; assuming 'daily' or omitted, the main error is missing 'the' before 'office'. Add commas for natural speech. If 'Delia' was intended as 'daily', change to 'daily office' -> 'my daily office work' but minimal correction is to use 'the office'.

× Having different styles needs amount of money to spend on them, so I don't really want to spend most of my money on clothes, but I do want to look more stylish so I just put some budget away for buying clothes but not many so yes.

✓ Having different styles requires a certain amount of money, so I don't want to spend most of my money on clothes. I do want to look more stylish, so I set aside a small budget for buying clothes.

Awkward phrasing 'needs amount of money to spend on them' and 'put some budget away' are incorrect. Use 'requires a certain amount of money' and 'set aside a small budget'. Split into two sentences for clarity and remove redundant 'so yes'.

× I feel more comfortable and more confident in darker colors.

✓ I feel more comfortable and more confident in dark colors.

'Darker colors' compares to something unstated; 'dark colors' is the natural phrase to describe preference. Use 'dark' instead of comparative 'darker' unless comparing to light colors explicitly.

× For example, I prefer to wear my clothes in blacks or Gray, but in general I really like to be simple but stylish.

✓ For example, I prefer to wear black or gray clothes, but in general I like to be simple but stylish.

Incorrect preposition 'in' with colors and incorrect plural 'blacks' and capitalization 'Gray'. Use 'wear black or gray clothes' or 'wear black or gray'. Also 'really' is optional; simplified phrasing is more natural.