Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
I like to wear the pretty stress likes the Lolitas and because I think it is very beautiful and I always wear it when I was young and I always, uh, make dress and to take some photos.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I prefer to wear the comfort clothes when I was relaxed and stay at homes or, uh, with my close friends. Dating, yeah.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yes I do I like swears the T-shirts when I at homes and it make me relax and comfortable and I usually wears the coptons uh T-shirts so make me more relaxable.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, I usually spend a lot of times choosing clothes. I have a lot of clothes in the room, but when I was dating I always don't know which one is better for me and I always thinks I don't have clothes to wear because I think they are not pretty.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
I usually wears different clothes in the weekends because I really like to take some pictures and I always dress up or where's my favorite Lolita styles dress And it make me, uh, feel happy and suitable And when?
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
I preferred paint colors clothes because I think pinks means the girls confidence and happiness. I always wears the pink dress.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接和有条理,先给主题句说明你喜欢穿洛丽塔风格,然后用一到两句具体细节支持(例如什么时候穿、为什么喜欢、如何搭配)。注意语法时态一致,避免冗长重复。
Ví dụ: I like wearing Lolita-style dresses because I find them very beautiful. I used to wear them a lot when I was younger, and now I still make and wear them for photos or special events.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答应先明确偏好,然后用链接词给出具体场景支持。注意时态和主谓一致,减少口头填充词(uh, yeah)。
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I feel relaxed wearing them at home or when I'm with close friends. For dates I might choose something slightly nicer but still comfortable.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要简洁清晰,先回答肯定或否定,再解释原因并给具体细节(材质或场合)。注意用词准确(cotton, comfortable),句子数不要超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable. At home I usually wear cotton T-shirts since they help me relax.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 先给出简短肯定回答,然后说明原因并给例子。避免时态混乱(use present simple for habitual actions)并减少重复表达。可以提到具体选择标准(颜色、风格)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I own many items and want to pick the best outfit. For example, before going on a date I often worry which style and color suit me most.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要先陈述是否有区别,然后具体说明周末和工作日的不同,并给原因(如拍照、心情)。避免句子不完整和口头杂音,注意语法和连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I wear different styles on weekends. On weekdays I dress more casually for work or school, while on weekends I often wear my favorite Lolita dresses to take photos and feel happy.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答喜欢的颜色,然后解释为什么喜欢并给具体例子。注意形容词形式(prefer -> prefer, paint colors -> pastel colors)和单复数一致,避免笨拙表达。
Ví dụ: I prefer pastel colors, especially pink, because I think pink expresses confidence and happiness. I often choose pink dresses for special occasions.
× I like to wear the pretty stress likes the Lolitas and because I think it is very beautiful and I always wear it when I was young and I always, uh, make dress and to take some photos.
✓ I like to wear pretty dresses like Lolita style because I think they are very beautiful. I always wore them when I was young, and I often made dresses and took photos.
句子结构混乱,包含多处错误和时态不一致。首先把句子拆分为几部分(喜好、原因、过去习惯、动作)更清晰;将“the pretty stress likes the Lolitas”改为“pretty dresses like Lolita style”;将单复数、代词与时态调整为一致(they / wore / made / took)。建议将复杂句分成短句,注意主语与代词一致及时态统一。
× I prefer to wear the comfort clothes when I was relaxed and stay at homes or, uh, with my close friends. Dating, yeah.
✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes when I am relaxed and staying at home or with my close friends, like on dates.
原句时态混用(prefer是一般现在,后半句用was),应保持时态一致并用正确形容词形式“comfortable”,以及使用“at home”非“at homes”。建议保持主要动词时态为现在时,使用正确的形容词及单数表达地点。
× Yes I do I like swears the T-shirts when I at homes and it make me relax and comfortable and I usually wears the coptons uh T-shirts so make me more relaxable.
✓ Yes, I do. I like wearing T-shirts when I am at home because they make me relaxed and comfortable. I usually wear cotton T-shirts, which make me feel more relaxed.
使用错误的词形(swears → wearing;coptons → cotton;relaxable不是常用词,应为relaxed或relaxing)。主语和动词形式也要一致(I usually wear)。建议学习常见动词词形与形容词/分词用法:use 'wear' 的ing形式表示习惯,形容词用'relaxed'或'relaxing'。
× Yes, of course, I usually spend a lot of times choosing clothes. I have a lot of clothes in the room, but when I was dating I always don't know which one is better for me and I always thinks I don't have clothes to wear because I think they are not pretty.
✓ Yes, of course. I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes. I have many clothes in my room, but when I go on dates I always don't know which one is best for me, and I often think I don't have anything pretty to wear.
“a lot of times”用于次数,选择“a lot of time”或“many times”更合适;“a lot of clothes”可改为“many clothes”;“in the room”应为“in my room”;时态和主谓需一致(I always think,不是 thinks)。建议区分可数/不可数名词的量词用法并注意主谓一致及代词所有格。
× I usually wears different clothes in the weekends because I really like to take some pictures and I always dress up or where's my favorite Lolita styles dress And it make me, uh, feel happy and suitable And when?
✓ I usually wear different clothes on weekends because I really like to take pictures. I always dress up in my favorite Lolita-style dresses, and they make me feel happy and confident.
“wears”与主语不一致,应为“wear”;“in the weekends”改为“on weekends”;“where's”用错,改为“wear”;“Lolita styles dress”改为“Lolita-style dresses”;“it make”应为“they make”。句尾“And when?”为无意义片段应删除。建议注意主谓一致、介词用法以及形容词构成复合词时的连字符用法。
× I preferred paint colors clothes because I think pinks means the girls confidence and happiness. I always wears the pink dress.
✓ I prefer pastel-colored clothes because I think pink represents girls' confidence and happiness. I always wear pink dresses.
“preferred”与上下文一般现在时不符,改为“prefer”;“paint colors clothes”不自然,改为“pastel-colored clothes”;“pinks means the girls confidence”应为“pink represents girls' confidence”;所有格和复数形式需正确(girls' confidence);“I always wears”应为“I always wear”。建议学习颜色表达和名词所有格用法,保持时态一致并注意主谓一致。