Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, correct word choice, and give one specific example with a brief reason. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid extra filler. Keep to under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer a minimalist style because it is comfortable and versatile. For example, on holiday I often wear a simple skirt with a plain T‑shirt, since this combination is easy to mix and suitable for different activities.

Gợi ý: Answer directly (state preference), then give a concise reason. Use correct grammar for cause (because) and avoid filler words. Replace vague words with precise ones (activities, movement).

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely for different activities. For example, when I go out or exercise I choose soft fabrics and loose cuts so I don’t have to worry about my movements.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and correct pronoun use (it, they). Explain why you like them and give a specific example. Keep sentences concise and avoid pronunciation fillers in writing.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely like wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable and easy to style. For instance, I often wear cartoon‑character T‑shirts like Hello Kitty or Monchhichi, which are very popular in Japan and reflect my personal taste.

Gợi ý: Be specific about how and why you spend time choosing clothes. Use correct vocabulary (browse, online shopping) and clear sentence structure. Mention one or two reasons and link them coherently.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often browse online shops because it is convenient and I can compare many items quickly. Also, I sometimes visit malls when I want to try clothes on before buying.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement and explain the contrast using linking words (however, whereas). Use correct terms (work clothes, formal shirts, T‑shirts) and give one short example for each case.

Ví dụ: Yes. On weekdays I wear formal work clothes, such as a blouse and slacks or a dress shirt, because of my job requirements. However, on weekends I usually wear casual T‑shirts and jeans for comfort and relaxation.

Gợi ý: Give a clear list of favorite colours with correct names and a brief reason or example of how you use them. Avoid unclear or invented words. Keep it concise and natural.

Ví dụ: I tend to choose neutral and soft colours such as blue‑green, yellow, white and black because they are easy to match. I also like clothes with small floral patterns for a subtle, feminine touch.

× I like to wear a minimal style which catsure and flexible to wear.

✓ I like to wear a minimal style which is casual and comfortable to wear.

The sentence uses incorrect words ('catsure' and 'flexible') and misses a verb 'is' after 'which'. Replace with proper adjectives: 'casual' and 'comfortable'. Include the linking verb 'is' to form a correct relative clause. Suggestion: learn common adjective collocations for clothing and ensure relative clauses include a verb.

× For example, I used to bring a skirt with AT shirt for the holiday and also.

✓ For example, I used to bring a skirt with an AT shirt for holidays.

'Used to' is correct for past habits, but 'AT' likely needs article 'an' and 'holiday' should be plural or 'for the holiday' with context. Remove trailing 'and also'. Ensure articles before singular nouns and use plural for habitual events. Suggestion: check articles and avoid redundant endings.

× I prefer to wear comfortable coats, uh, because it's bring me to do a lot of activity that I want which not to consideration about my movement.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they allow me to do many activities without worrying about my movement.

Multiple issues: 'coats' is likely wrong noun; 'it's bring me' is ungrammatical (verb form) and subject mismatch; 'a lot of activity' should be 'many activities'; 'which not to consideration about my movement' is incorrect structure. Correction uses proper subject-verb agreement and idiomatic phrasing. Suggestion: choose correct noun (clothes), match subject and verb, use plural for countable nouns, and use 'allow me to' or 'without worrying about'.

× I can move whatever I want and also.

✓ I can move however I want.

'Whatever I want' is not the correct adverbial phrase here; 'however I want' expresses manner. Also remove trailing 'and also' which is redundant. Suggestion: use 'however' for manner and avoid unfinished additions.

× Definitely I do. I think he should very common in my daily life.

✓ Definitely I do. I think they are very common in my daily life.

Pronoun 'he' is incorrect referring to T-shirts; use 'they' for T-shirts (plural). 'should' is unnecessary and wrong; use 'are' to describe frequency. Also 'very common' needs a linking verb. Suggestion: match pronouns to antecedents and use correct verb to state facts.

× I prefer to wear a cartoon character T-shirt which is Kitty or Monshishi that is a very popular in Japan.

✓ I prefer to wear cartoon-character T-shirts like Hello Kitty or Monchhichi, which are very popular in Japan.

Use plural 'T-shirts' and correct brand/character names; 'which is Kitty or Monshishi' is awkward—use 'like' and plural agreement 'are'. 'a very popular' should be 'very popular' without 'a'. Suggestion: use commas for nonrestrictive clauses and ensure number agreement.

× Yes I do. I spend a lot of time choosing court on the Internet platform online shopping which very is very convenient and I can shoot whatever I want to and don't avoid to go to the shopping mall.

✓ Yes I do. I spend a lot of time choosing clothes on online shopping platforms, which are very convenient, and I can buy whatever I want without having to go to the shopping mall.

Many errors: 'court' should be 'clothes'; word order 'on the Internet platform online shopping' is jumbled; 'which very is very convenient' has wrong order; 'shoot' likely means 'buy'; 'don't avoid to go' should be 'without having to go'. Correction fixes vocabulary, word order, relative clause agreement, and modal structure. Suggestion: use 'platforms' plural, correct verbs for online shopping, and 'without having to' for avoidance.

× Yes I do because on the weekday I have to go to work so the cost would be a formal 1 and cultural shirt also for.

✓ Yes I do because on weekdays I have to go to work, so my clothes are more formal, like a dress shirt and trousers.

'On the weekday' should be 'on weekdays'; 'the cost would be a formal 1' is unclear—likely 'clothes are more formal'; 'cultural shirt' is odd—use 'dress shirt'. Replace numeral '1' with clear wording. Suggestion: use plural time expressions and clear vocabulary for clothing types.

× On the other hand for weekend I prefer. I quite always wear AT shirt with.

✓ On the other hand, for weekends I prefer casual wear. I almost always wear AT shirts.

Sentence fragments and word order problems: 'I prefer.' is incomplete; 'I quite always' should be 'I almost always'; 'AT shirt with' is incomplete and needs plural or object. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and use adverbs in correct position ('almost always').

× I like a plantone one like blue-green, yellow, white and black something just only 5 color that I usually choose that coat with the color.

✓ I like plain tones such as blue-green, yellow, white and black; these five colors are the ones I usually choose for my clothes.

Many issues: 'plantone one' should be 'plain tones'; list of colors needs clearer punctuation; 'something just only 5 color' should be 'these five colors'; 'that coat with the color' is awkward—clarify purpose. Suggestion: use 'such as' for examples, 'these' to refer to listed items, and keep wording concise.

× I also prefer a tiny flower.

✓ I also prefer small floral patterns.

'a tiny flower' is ambiguous—likely means 'small floral patterns' on clothing. Use plural and adjective 'small' or 'tiny' with 'pattern'. Suggestion: be specific about whether you mean a single flower or a floral pattern and use correct noun forms.