Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
Definitely. I like some clothes, colorful and short T-shirts and beautiful shirts.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I like wearing comfortable clothes because comfortable clothes can make me feel free and I can. Walking.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like because wearing T-shirts can make me feel relaxed and. They are comfortable during summer holiday.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do because I am a girl liking wearing beautiful clothes and different kinds of clothes are suitable for different associations. I think that different clothes risk.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I like wearing different sets of clothes on weekdays and weekends when I played with my friends.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
Green, because green represents health and natural.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答应更直接并结构清晰。先用一句主题句直接回答(我喜欢穿...),然后用1-2句具体细节说明为什么或举例。避免含糊词汇("some clothes")和语法错误。可用连接词(for example, because)组织信息。
Ví dụ: I prefer bright, casual clothes. For example, I often wear colorful T-shirts and pretty blouses because they make me feel cheerful and confident.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 46.0Gợi ý: 回答需完整且连贯。先给出直接选择,然后用一到两句具体原因或情境说明。注意句子完整性,避免断句和重复词。使用连接词如 "because", "so" 来衔接句子。
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me move freely and relax. For instance, I usually wear loose trousers and sneakers when I go for a walk.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要自然完整,避免断句。先直接回答,然后用具体原因或例子支持。可以提到场合或季节来丰富内容,使用连接词如 "because" 和 "so"。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. T-shirts make me feel relaxed and are very practical in summer because they are lightweight and breathable.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答应更具体并避免语义不明的词(如 "associations"、"risk")。说明大概花多少时间、在什么场合会挑选,并给出原因。句子要逻辑清晰,可用连接词如 "because", "so", "for example"。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often spend extra time choosing outfits, especially for special occasions. For example, I pick more elegant dresses for parties but casual wear for school because different events need different styles.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要说明具体差别並举例。先直接回答,然后说明工作日和周末各穿什么,以及原因。注意时态一致(现在习惯用现在时)。使用连接词如 "whereas", "for example"。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. On weekdays I usually wear simple, smart clothes for school, whereas on weekends I prefer casual outfits like jeans and T-shirts when I go out with friends.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但可以稍微扩展一句说明个人偏好或举例来显得更自然。使用完整句并用连接词扩展理由或场合。
Ví dụ: I like green because it feels fresh and natural. For example, I often choose green dresses in spring because they remind me of nature.
× Definitely. I like some clothes, colorful and short T-shirts and beautiful shirts.
✓ Definitely. I like colorful, short T-shirts and pretty shirts.
学生原句中使用了“some clothes”显得多余且不自然;同时形容词顺序和词汇选择需调整。建议直接列举喜欢的衣物并使用合适的形容词顺序(颜色/尺寸/名词):如“colorful, short T-shirts”和“pretty shirts”。注意不用冗余的泛指词“some clothes”。
× I like wearing comfortable clothes because comfortable clothes can make me feel free and I can. Walking.
✓ I like wearing comfortable clothes because they make me feel free and relaxed when I walk.
原句有句子结构断裂(“and I can. Walking.”),造成不完整句。应合并并用代词代替重复名词,保持句子连贯。建议使用完整从句表达原因和结果,例如“they make me feel free and relaxed when I walk”。
× Yes, I like because wearing T-shirts can make me feel relaxed and. They are comfortable during summer holiday.
✓ Yes, I like them because wearing T-shirts makes me feel relaxed. They are comfortable during the summer holidays.
原句中“Yes, I like because...”缺少宾语,应为“Yes, I like them”;此外“makes”用于单数主语“wearing T-shirts”,需用第三人称单数动词;“during summer holiday”需改为习惯用法“during the summer holidays”或“in summer”。建议补全宾语,调整动词形式并使用正确的时间短语。
× Yes, I do because I am a girl liking wearing beautiful clothes and different kinds of clothes are suitable for different associations. I think that different clothes risk.
✓ Yes, I do because I am a girl who likes wearing pretty clothes, and different kinds of clothes are suitable for different occasions. I think different clothes have different purposes.
原句中“a girl liking wearing”语序和形式不正确,应改为“a girl who likes wearing”。“associations”用词错误,正确应为“occasions(场合)”。最后一句“I think that different clothes risk”语义不明,应改为表达用途或风格差异,例如“have different purposes”。建议使用定语从句修饰“girl”,并替换不准确词汇,确保句意清晰。
× Yes I do. I like wearing different sets of clothes on weekdays and weekends when I played with my friends.
✓ Yes, I do. I like wearing different sets of clothes on weekdays and weekends when I play with my friends.
原句中“when I played with my friends”使用了过去时,与现在时“I like”不一致。因为这里描述的是一般习惯,应使用一般现在时“when I play with my friends”。建议统一时态以反映习惯性行为。
× Green, because green represents health and natural.
✓ Green, because green represents health and nature.
原句“represents health and natural”中“natural”为形容词,搭配名词“nature”更恰当。应使用名词形式“nature”或说“is natural”。建议把并列项形式统一为名词或用完整句子,如“represents health and nature”或“because green is associated with health and nature”。