Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
I'd like to wear clothes with deep colored because I always get student like oil dot or ink dot to close the dark colored clothes will cover them.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I'd like to wear comfortable and casual clothes for sure. I'm still a student I there are no formal meeting or presentation need me to attend, so comfortable clothes is more practical to me.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I like wearing T-shirt every day because it's easy to wash. Besides I work in lab everyday. T-shirt lend me more easily to do experiment comfortably.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
Now I have 5 T-shirts with different color. I wear them from Fri from Monday to Friday 1 after another because I think choosing clothes is a waste of time.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I always stayed in lab for experimenting weekdays, so I choose to wear T-shirt for sure, it is more comfortable. However, in the weekend I always hang out with my girlfriend. For a date, I'll choose fashionable.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
I like the clothes with deep colors such as black or Gray because they are not obvious when I get down in the clothes. Like all you thought or ink thought.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 答题要更直接且句子更通顺,注意语法(动词形式、复数)和词序。可补充一到两条具体细节并使用连接词。避免重复表达"dark colored/ deep colored"的混用。
Ví dụ: I prefer dark-colored clothes because I often get stains like oil or ink on them, and darker colors hide these marks. For example, I usually wear black or navy shirts when I’m working in the lab.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 注意句子连接与分割,使用连词使逻辑更清晰;修正语法错误(主谓一致、时态、标点)。可以加入具体情景来支持观点。
Ví dụ: I definitely prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I’m a student and rarely attend formal meetings or presentations. For instance, I usually wear jeans and a T-shirt to lectures and lab sessions because they’re practical and comfortable.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 注意使用完整句子并修正表达(如"T-shirts help me work"),避免单词形式错误和语法错误。用连词丰富句子并给出具体例子说明方便之处。
Ví dụ: Yes, I wear T-shirts almost every day because they are easy to wash and comfortable. Also, since I work in a lab, T-shirts allow me to move freely when I conduct experiments, which makes my work easier.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 改进语法与表达顺序,避免冗长或重复。可以更具体说明数量与习惯,以及给出原因或例外情况。
Ví dụ: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I have five T-shirts of different colors and usually wear them from Monday to Friday in rotation. I find deciding what to wear each morning is a waste of time.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 注意时态一致与更自然的连接词使用,补充更具体的对比细节(例如具体衣物类型)。保持句子简洁不超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear T-shirts and casual clothes because I spend most of my time in the lab. On weekends, when I go out with my girlfriend, I tend to dress more fashionably, such as wearing a smart shirt and jeans.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 改进词汇使用与表达清晰度,修正语法和措辞(例如"stains"而不是不明词语),并用连词给出具体原因和例子。
Ví dụ: I prefer dark colors like black or gray because stains such as oil or ink are less visible on them. For example, I usually wear dark shirts when I work in the lab to hide any accidental marks.
× I'd like to wear clothes with deep colored because I always get student like oil dot or ink dot to close the dark colored clothes will cover them.
✓ I'd like to wear dark-colored clothes because I often get oil or ink stains, and dark-colored clothes will hide them.
句中使用了不正确的形容词形式和词序。应使用形容词短语“dark-colored clothes”而不是“deep colored”。“student like oil dot or ink dot”是错误的表达,正确应为“oil or ink stains”。同时用逗号和连词把原因和结果连接更清楚。建议:用固定搭配“dark-colored clothes”,“stains”表示“污渍”,保持句子逻辑清晰。
× I'd like to wear comfortable and casual clothes for sure. I'm still a student I there are no formal meeting or presentation need me to attend, so comfortable clothes is more practical to me.
✓ I'd like to wear comfortable and casual clothes for sure. I'm still a student, and there are no formal meetings or presentations I need to attend, so comfortable clothes are more practical for me.
原句存在结构混乱和数的一致错误。需要加入连词“and”连接两个并列分句。“formal meeting or presentation”应使用复数“meetings or presentations”。主语“comfortable clothes”是复数,谓语应为“are”。介词短语为“practical for me”。建议:注意并列句用连词、名词单复数一致和主谓一致。
× Yeah, I like wearing T-shirt every day because it's easy to wash. Besides I work in lab everyday. T-shirt lend me more easily to do experiment comfortably.
✓ Yeah, I like wearing T-shirts every day because they're easy to wash. Besides, I work in a lab every day. T-shirts make it easier for me to do experiments comfortably.
存在冠词、单复数及动词搭配错误。“T-shirt”在泛指时用复数“T-shirts”,对应代词用“they're”。“work in lab”需要不定冠词“a lab”。“T-shirt lend me more easily to do experiment comfortably”语序和动词用法不当,应使用使役结构“make it easier for me to do experiments”。建议:注意可数名词的冠词和单复数,使用固定搭配“make it easier to...”。
× Now I have 5 T-shirts with different color. I wear them from Fri from Monday to Friday 1 after another because I think choosing clothes is a waste of time.
✓ Now I have five T-shirts of different colors. I wear them from Monday to Friday one after another because I think choosing clothes is a waste of time.
数字通常用单词或保持一致风格,且“with different color”应为“of different colors”。句子中“from Fri from Monday to Friday”重复且顺序混乱,应为“from Monday to Friday”。“1 after another”应写为“one after another”。建议:注意词组搭配“of different colors”、一致的时间表达和数字书写。
× Yeah, I always stayed in lab for experimenting weekdays, so I choose to wear T-shirt for sure, it is more comfortable. However, in the weekend I always hang out with my girlfriend. For a date, I'll choose fashionable.
✓ Yeah, I usually stay in the lab to do experiments on weekdays, so I choose to wear T-shirts for sure; they are more comfortable. However, on weekends I always hang out with my girlfriend. For a date, I'll choose something fashionable.
原句时态和词形不当。“always stayed”用现在习惯应为“usually stay”。“in lab”应为“in the lab”。“for experimenting weekdays”应改为“to do experiments on weekdays”。“T-shirt”复数问题同前。“in the weekend”应为“on weekends”。“choose fashionable”缺少名词,需加“something fashionable”。建议:注意习惯性动作用一般现在时、介词搭配(in the lab/on weekends)和完整的形容词短语。
× I like the clothes with deep colors such as black or Gray because they are not obvious when I get down in the clothes. Like all you thought or ink thought.
✓ I like clothes in dark colors such as black or gray because stains are not obvious on them when my clothes get dirty, like from oil or ink.
“deep colors”应改为更常用的“dark colors”。“Gray”不应大写。原句“they are not obvious when I get down in the clothes”表达混乱,应表示“污渍在衣服上不明显”。“Like all you thought or ink thought”是错误表达,应为“like oil or ink”。建议:使用常见搭配“dark colors”、“stains”,“get dirty”来表达衣服弄脏的情况,并保证大小写和词序正确。