Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence stating the clothes you prefer, then give one or two specific supporting details (material, color, style) using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid contradictions and redundant phrases.

Ví dụ: I prefer clothes that are comfortable and suit my style. For example, I like soft cotton shirts in neutral colors because the material feels good on my skin and the colors are easy to match with other items.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference first, then explain one or two reasons with linking words (because, so, therefore). Use simple, correct sentence structures and avoid unclear phrases like 'make me more usual'.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are easier to mix and match with my trousers and are more practical for everyday activities. Therefore, I wear them most of the time.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and explain clearly. Replace unclear words (e.g., 'moisty') with appropriate vocabulary such as 'easy' or 'convenient'. Use linking words to connect reasons and provide a brief example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to style. For example, I can pair a plain T-shirt with jeans or a jacket, which saves me time when getting dressed.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No/It depends), then give a specific condition and a concise reason. Use correct tenses and avoid fillers. Replace vague phrases like 'I will nothing' with clear alternatives.

Ví dụ: It depends. If I am not busy, I often spend about 20–30 minutes planning my outfit, but on busy days I choose something simple so I don't waste time.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and explain the contrast using linking words (whereas, while, but). Be specific about what changes you make between weekday and weekend styles.

Ví dụ: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear more formal or plain clothes for work, whereas on weekends I wear more casual and varied outfits, such as jeans and colorful shirts.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement of preference, then give a reason using linking words (because, so). Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and avoid hesitations. Provide a brief example if possible.

Ví dụ: I mainly wear black and white because they are easy to match with other items. For instance, a white shirt and black trousers work well for both casual and formal occasions.

× I like the clothes that when I wear it, let me feel comfortable and I touch it and, you know, will let me feel uncomfortable.

✓ I like clothes that make me feel comfortable when I wear them and do not make me feel uncomfortable to touch.

The student used incorrect pronouns and awkward structure: 'the clothes that when I wear it' mixes plural 'clothes' with singular 'it' and has wrong word order. Use plural pronoun 'them' to match 'clothes' and place the clause 'when I wear them' correctly. Also simplify redundant phrases for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:12

× And the material is good and the color is good.

✓ The material and the color are good.

The student repeated 'is good' with a compound subject; with two nouns connected, use plural verb 'are'. Also combine into one concise sentence to avoid repetition. Grammar problem type ID:13

× It's made my. Meet my style.

✓ They fit my style.

Original fragments 'It's made my. Meet my style.' are ungrammatical fragments. Use a complete sentence with correct subject-verb agreement: 'They fit my style' where 'they' refers to clothes. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Umm, actually to say it, I prefer the clothes made me comfortable and casual because it can't match many trousers of the any other clothes in my daily life.

✓ Actually, I prefer clothes that make me comfortable and are casual because they match many trousers and other clothes I wear in daily life.

Issues: 'the clothes made me comfortable' should be 'clothes that make me comfortable' (relative clause and present tense), 'it can't match' uses singular 'it' wrongly—use plural 'they', and awkward phrase 'many trousers of the any other clothes' should be 'many trousers and other clothes'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× It make me more usual.

✓ They make me feel more usual.

Subject-verb agreement: original used singular 'It' and verb 'make' without agreement. Use plural 'They make' if referring to clothes; however 'feel more usual' is odd—suggest 'feel more comfortable' or 'feel more like myself'. Grammar problem type ID:2

× And to be honest, I like to wear the T-shirt because it's moisty to dress up.

✓ To be honest, I like to wear T-shirts because they are easy to dress up.

'the T-shirt' unnecessarily definite; use plural 'T-shirts' for general preference. 'moisty' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'easy' or 'simple'. Also use plural pronoun 'they' to match 'T-shirts'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× And also don't worry how to match.

✓ I also don't worry about how to match them.

Missing subject and preposition: add subject 'I' and preposition 'about' after 'worry', and refer to clothes with 'them'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× We match it with other choices or dress.

✓ You can match them with other items or dresses.

Pronoun 'it' unclear; use 'them' to refer to T-shirts or 'you' as general subject. 'Other choices' is vague—use 'other items' or 'dresses'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× It can just save my time.

✓ They can save me time.

Use plural pronoun 'they' for T-shirts and correct object structure 'save me time' rather than 'save my time'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× MMM it's too it just depends on the day I busy or not.

✓ It depends on whether I am busy that day or not.

Use 'depends' with correct clause 'whether I am busy that day', and include verb 'am' for present tense continuous state. Remove extra filler words. Grammar problem type ID:6

× If the day I'm uh have many times I will spend my time to think umm how and what I will state, but if the day is busy I will nothing.

✓ If I have a lot of time that day, I will spend time thinking about what I will wear, but if the day is busy I will not.

Correct verb forms and word order: 'I'm uh have many times' should be 'I have a lot of time', 'spend my time to think' becomes 'spend time thinking about', 'what I will state' likely 'what I will wear', and 'I will nothing' incorrect—use 'I will not' or 'I won't'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I will wear the other styles of clothes on the weekdays because I think in the work date we usually eat, wear some clothes that looks similar and when the weekend I think I can make some changes.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. At work we usually wear similar clothes, but on the weekend I can make some changes.

Simplify and correct pronouns and verb forms: 'the other styles of clothes' -> 'different styles'; 'in the work date we usually eat, wear some clothes that looks similar' is ungrammatical—clarify 'At work we usually wear similar clothes'. Use plural verb 'look' if needed. Break into two sentences for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:12

× MMM about this question, I saw my clothes, I think maybe it's black and white more frequent because I think it don't need to waste too much my time to uh, think how to match my outfit.

✓ About my clothes, I think black and white appear more frequently because they don't require me to spend a lot of time thinking about how to match my outfit.

Pronoun and verb agreement: 'it's black and white more frequent' should be 'black and white appear more frequently' or 'I wear black and white more often'. 'It don't need' incorrect—use 'they don't require me to' and correct word order 'spend a lot of time'. Grammar problem type ID:12