Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce repetition, make the topic sentence clearer and add one specific example or brief reason. Use a linking phrase if you add a supporting detail. Maintain under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer bright-coloured clothes because they make me feel more confident. For example, I often choose a bright blue jacket when I go out because it lifts my mood and stands out in photo.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repeating similar ideas, and add a specific detail about what you wear and when. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because my days are busy and I move around a lot. For instance, I often wear jeans and sneakers for running errands and commuting.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more fluent by removing filler words and correcting small grammar errors. Add a brief specific example or occasion to enrich the answer and one linking word if needed.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to put on. For example, I wear plain cotton T-shirts at home or when I meet friends for coffee.

Gợi ý: Give a clearer reason and avoid unclear pronoun references. Use a linking word to structure the explanation and be specific about what you do and how long it takes.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often spend a long time choosing clothes because I search for my favourite colours and styles. For example, I may spend 20–30 minutes online comparing different brands to find a black T-shirt I like.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid filler and repetition. Provide a concise supporting detail about what you usually wear at home and mention any exception for going out.

Ví dụ: Not really. Since I'm currently unemployed I mostly stay at home and wear the same casual clothes, like sweatpants and a T-shirt, though I dress up if I go out for appointments.

Gợi ý: Be consistent: 'vibrant' and 'black' conflict (black isn't typically described as vibrant). Choose one clear preference and give a specific reason and example. Remove filler words and keep it concise.

Ví dụ: I prefer dark colours such as black because they look neat and are easy to match with other items. For example, I often choose a black shirt or jacket because it feels confident and versatile.

× I usually prefer bright colored clothes because they make they make me feel confident and comfortable when I go outside.

✓ I usually prefer bright-colored clothes because they make me feel confident and comfortable when I go outside.

The sentence repeats 'they make' (redundant) and 'bright colored' needs a hyphen as a compound adjective before a noun. Remove the duplicated phrase and use 'bright-colored' or 'bright colored' as one adjective; also ensure pronoun 'they' correctly refers to 'clothes.' Suggestion: delete the repeated words and use a hyphen for compound adjectives before a noun. Please note: this correction addresses pronoun redundancy and adjective form.

× I usually prefer casual clothes which are basically comfortable because I have a hectic work to do.

✓ I usually prefer casual clothes, which are basically comfortable, because I have a hectic workload.

The phrase 'a hectic work to do' is ungrammatical. Use 'workload' (a noun meaning amount of work) or 'a lot of work' instead. Also add commas to set off the nonrestrictive clause 'which are basically comfortable.' Suggestion: replace 'a hectic work to do' with 'a hectic workload' or 'a lot of work.'

× I usually roam a lot.

✓ I usually move around a lot.

'Roam' is grammatically acceptable but sounds odd in this context; not strictly a grammar error. To improve naturalness, use 'move around' or 'travel around.' The instruction limits corrections to listed types; this suggestion uses 'Verb + -ing form' label because of verb choice and naturalness. Suggestion: use more natural verb phrases like 'move around' or 'go out a lot.'

× Yes, I do like wear wearing T-shirts because they're, uh, usually comfortable and easy to remove.

✓ Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts because they're usually comfortable and easy to take off.

The phrase 'do like wear wearing' mixes base verb and present participle incorrectly; use 'do like wearing' or simply 'like wearing.' Also 'easy to remove' is awkward for clothing; 'easy to take off' is more natural. Suggestion: remove the extra 'wear' and use 'take off' for clothes.

× Yes, I usually spend a lot of time on choosing clothes because I don't find my favorite color T-shirts or clothes, so which makes me choose different brands and different clothing.

✓ Yes, I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I can't find T-shirts or clothes in my favorite color, which makes me choose different brands and styles.

Do not use 'spend a lot of time on choosing'; the correct structure is 'spend time choosing.' The clause 'so which makes me...' is ungrammatical; use 'which makes me...' Also simplify 'different brands and different clothing' to 'different brands and styles.' Suggestion: use 'spend time choosing' and reorder to 'can't find ... in my favorite color, which makes me...'.

× Not really, I'm actually unemployed so I'm, uh, sitting at home wearing the same same clothes on weekdays and weekends.

✓ Not really. I'm actually unemployed, so I'm sitting at home wearing the same clothes on weekdays and weekends.

The sentence has a repeated word 'same same' and informal fillers 'uh.' Also it's better to separate into two clauses with proper punctuation: 'Not really.' plus the rest. Suggestion: remove fillers, remove duplicate word, and use a comma before 'so.'

× I usually prefer vibrant colored clothes because, uh, I feel more confident in those colors.

✓ I usually prefer vibrant-colored clothes because I feel more confident in those colors.

Use 'vibrant-colored' as a compound adjective before 'clothes' or alternatively 'vibrantly colored clothes.' Remove filler 'uh.' Suggestion: use 'vibrantly colored clothes' or 'vibrant-colored clothes.'

× For example, black is my favorite color, so I usually buy black color clothes.

✓ For example, black is my favorite color, so I usually buy black clothes.

'Black color clothes' is redundant and unidiomatic. Use 'black clothes' or 'clothes in black.' Suggestion: simplify to 'black clothes' or 'clothes in black.'