Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, avoid vague phrasing and contradictions, use linking words and one or two specific examples. Keep it concise (under 5 sentences). For instance, start: “It depends on my mood.” Then explain when you choose colorful vs casual clothing with a brief reason.

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood. When I feel cheerful I like to wear colorful, eye-catching outfits because they make me feel more energetic. But on relaxed days I prefer simple, casual clothes that are comfortable for running errands or staying at home.

Gợi ý: Respond directly with a clear statement, then give a short, specific reason and a concise example. Avoid unclear phrases like “I just lose.” Use correct verb forms and linking words such as “because” and “for example.”

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed. For example, when I meet friends or do errands I usually wear a hoodie and jeans so I can walk and sit comfortably.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and explain concisely with correct grammar. Use specific reasons and avoid unclear comparisons. Keep it to two or three sentences with linking words like “because” and “so.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they give me freedom of movement and are very comfortable. I often choose a cotton T-shirt when I exercise or relax at home because it breathes well.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer, then explain briefly why with a concrete detail. Avoid repeating phrases and unfinished thoughts. Use linking words like “because” or “so” and one clear example of what makes choosing difficult.

Ví dụ: Yes, I spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I try to match colors and the occasion. For example, I decide differently for work, a date, or meeting friends, so I often compare options before leaving.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement and then give a concise contrast between weekdays and weekends. Use linking words like “but” or “however” and provide a specific example of each style. Avoid repetition and unfinished sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. During weekdays I usually wear smart-casual clothes for work, such as chinos and a shirt, but on weekends I choose casual outfits like jeans and a T-shirt so I can move freely when meeting friends.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a topic sentence and give clear reasons for your color choices. Use complete sentences and specific descriptions (e.g., how the colors match your style). Avoid vague endings.

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood, but I mostly choose black and yellow. I like black because it looks smart and goes with everything, and yellow when I want a bright, cheerful look that stands out.

× Actually depends on my mood.

✓ Actually, it depends on my mood.

Missing subject 'it' causes sentence fragment and incorrect structure; add the dummy subject 'it' to make a complete sentence.

× If I'm in positive I will wear something colorful and eye-catching, but if my mood is really pretty good I will wear like something casual and boring.

✓ If I'm in a positive mood, I will wear something colorful and eye-catching, but if my mood is more relaxed, I will wear something casual and plain.

Missing noun 'mood' after 'positive'; 'pretty good' is informal and unclear for contrast, so use 'more relaxed' or similar. Remove filler 'like'. Keep conditional and future consistent.

× I prefer to wear something comfortable because it provide me more freely and feel more relaxed.

✓ I prefer to wear something comfortable because it provides me with more freedom and helps me feel more relaxed.

Subject 'it' (referring to clothing) requires verb 'provides' (third person singular). 'Provide me more freely' is ungrammatical; use noun 'freedom' with 'provides me with' and add 'helps me' for clarity.

× For example, when I'm out running around or meeting friends I just lose.

✓ For example, when I'm out running around or meeting friends, I just relax.

Verb 'lose' is incomplete and doesn't convey intended meaning; likely meant 'loosen up' or 'relax'. Replace with appropriate verb and add comma after introductory clause.

× Yes, I prefer to wear some T-shirts and for me T-shirts are stuff that provide you freely movements and you feel much more comfortable than in the seats or.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear T-shirts because they allow free movement and make you feel much more comfortable than dressier clothes.

Unnecessary 'some' before plural T-shirts; 'stuff that provide you freely movements' is ungrammatical—use 'allow free movement'. 'Than in the seats or' is unclear; replace with 'than dressier clothes' to complete comparison.

× I think yes, because choosing what to wear today is much more difficult than it seems to others, and I think that.

✓ I think so, because choosing what to wear today is much more difficult than it seems to others.

Redundant 'yes' and trailing 'and I think that' create awkward repetition. Use 'I think so' and remove the unnecessary ending.

× Yes, I wear different styles, styles of clothes.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes.

Redundant repetition of 'styles' should be removed to form a natural noun phrase 'styles of clothes'.

× For example in weekends when I'm going out to meet my friends, I'm wearing something casual and clothes that allow me freedom in movements and also I like.

✓ For example, on weekends when I go out to meet my friends, I wear something casual that allows me freedom of movement, and I like that.

Use 'on weekends' not 'in weekends'; prefer simple present 'I go' and simple present 'I wear' for habitual actions. 'Freedom in movements' should be 'freedom of movement'. Complete the sentence with 'and I like that.'

× Actually it depends on my mood and mostly I'm like black and yellow colors in clothes because this kind of colors matching first of all and these colors looks.

✓ Actually, it depends on my mood, and mostly I like black and yellow clothing because these colors match well and look good on me.

Missing comma after 'Actually'. Use 'I like' not 'I'm like'. 'Black and yellow colors in clothes' -> 'black and yellow clothing'. 'This kind of colors' should be 'these colors' and add verb 'match well' and complete 'look good on me'.