Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
I like to wear clothes, like to be a comfort for me, like hoodies, jacket. It's not short clothes. It's like I forgot this name. Yeah, yeah.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I usually wear a hoodies and big pants and I don't often wear shorts or tight clothes because I like to. I like to feel.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yes, because everyone people were AT shirt. What's you? What do you like wear? But it's like T-shirt. I think everyone people wear AT shirt because T-shirt is normal clothes for everyone.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
Yes, I will. I spend a lot of time, time to, uh, choice what I, what I wear today because I don't have many clothes in my uh, scarf and I think I need a lot of clothes to be a.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
I have in my closest one style, it's like casual style because I like where this this style is is first is comfortable and 2nd it's good for me and my look for how other people looks me.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
I usually wear a black and white color in my closet. I mostly have a green and Gray because they are so beautiful. Uh, color and it's it's my favorite color.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: Говорите более связно и точно: начните с чётного предложения-ответа, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных детали. Избегайте повторов и заполнителей (like, yeah). Если вы забыли слово, опишите предмет (например, "long clothes" -> "trousers").
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable clothes, such as hoodies and jackets. I usually avoid short or tight items and choose long trousers because they feel more comfortable for me.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: Начните с прямого ответа и используйте связку причин, затем приведите конкретный пример. Уберите лишние повторы и уточните чувство комфорта (not just "I like to").
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits because they suit my daily activities. For example, I often wear a hoodie and loose trousers since they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Отвечайте на вопрос прямо, избегайте ненужных повторов и вопросов к экзаменатору. Формулируйте причину и пример: скажите, почему вам нравятся футболки и в каких ситуациях вы их носите.
Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are versatile and easy to combine with jeans or shorts. For instance, I often wear a plain T-shirt when I go out with friends or run errands.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: Давайте ясный ответ и объяснение с примером. Удалите заполнители (uh) и завершите мысль: объясните причину, например, ограниченный выбор или желание выглядеть хорошо.
Ví dụ: Yes, I often spend quite a lot of time choosing my clothes because I have a small wardrobe and I want to look appropriate. For example, I usually try several outfits before deciding what to wear to work.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Отвечайте сначала прямо, затем объясните отличие между буднями и выходными с конкретным примером. Упорядочьте мысль: причина 1, причина 2. Избегайте тавтологии.
Ví dụ: Mostly I wear the same casual style both on weekdays and weekends because it is comfortable and suits my daily routine. For example, I usually wear jeans and a sweatshirt to work and also on weekends when meeting friends.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 46.0Gợi ý: Сформулируйте ответ чётко: назовите любимые цвета и поясните почему, приведите пример одежды в этих цветах. Избегайте противоречивых фраз и слова-паразиты.
Ví dụ: I prefer neutral colours like black and white because they are easy to match. I also like green and grey for their calm, natural look; for example, I have a green jacket and grey trousers that I wear often.
× I like to wear clothes, like to be a comfort for me, like hoodies, jacket.
✓ I like to wear clothes that are comfortable for me, like hoodies and jackets.
Использование местоимений и связок было неверным: 'like to be a comfort for me' неестественно; нужно относительное предложение 'that are comfortable for me'. Также пересчет: 'jacket' должен быть во множественном числе в списке. Совет: использовать 'that are comfortable' для описания свойств и согласовывать числа предметов.
× It's not short clothes.
✓ They are not short clothes.
В оригинале использовалось 'It' с 'clothes' — 'clothes' всегда во множественном числе, поэтому нужен местоименный субъект во множественном числе 'They'. Совет: согласовывать местоимение с существительным по числу.
× It's like I forgot this name.
✓ It's like I've forgotten the word/name.
Конструкция 'I forgot this name' не совсем подходит к контексту; лучше использовать Present Perfect 'I've forgotten' для текущего состояния, и 'the word/name' вместо 'this name'. Совет: использовать 'I've forgotten' при описании недавней потери памяти.
× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I usually wear a hoodies and big pants and I don't often wear shorts or tight clothes because I like to.
✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because I usually wear hoodies and baggy pants, and I don't often wear shorts or tight clothes because I don't like them.
Артикли и числа: 'a hoodies' неверно — 'hoodies' во множественном числе без артикля; 'big pants' лучше 'baggy pants'. Концовка 'because I like to' неполная и неверная по смыслу; предположительно имелось в виду 'I don't like them'. Совет: проверять согласование артикля/числа и завершать придаточные пояснения.
× Yes, because everyone people were AT shirt.
✓ Yes, because everyone wears T-shirts.
Неправильное использование 'people' вместе с 'everyone' и неправильная форма глагола 'were AT shirt'. Нужно 'everyone wears T-shirts' — 'everyone' требует глагол в третьем лице единственного числа. Совет: после 'everyone' использовать глагол с -s и корректную форму существительного 'T-shirts'.
× What's you? What do you like wear?
✓ What about you? What do you like to wear?
'What's you?' неверно; правильная фраза 'What about you?'. Также в вопросе пропущено 'to' перед 'wear'. Совет: использовать 'What about you?' для возврата вопроса и включать 'to' в 'like to wear'.
× But it's like T-shirt.
✓ But it's like a T-shirt.
Если имеется в виду 'это похоже на футболку', нужен артикль 'a' перед 'T-shirt'. Также можно сказать 'it's like a T-shirt' или 'it's a T-shirt'. Совет: использовать неопределённый артикль перед исчисляемыми в единственном числе.
× I think everyone people wear AT shirt because T-shirt is normal clothes for everyone.
✓ I think everyone wears T-shirts because T-shirts are normal clothes for everyone.
Опять двойное 'everyone people' — избыточно; 'everyone' требует глагол в третьем лице 'wears'. 'T-shirt is normal clothes' неверно: 'T-shirts are normal clothes' — множественное число и согласование. Совет: избегать дублирования 'everyone people' и согласовывать число существительных и глаголов.
× Yes, I will. I spend a lot of time, time to, uh, choice what I, what I wear today because I don't have many clothes in my uh, scarf and I think I need a lot of clothes to be a.
✓ Yes, I do. I spend a lot of time choosing what to wear today because I don't have many clothes in my wardrobe, and I think I need more clothes.
'I will' неверно в ответе на вопрос о привычке; следует 'I do'. 'choice' должно быть герундием 'choosing'. 'scarf' неверно — должно быть 'wardrobe' или 'closet'. 'to be a' незавершённо; лучше 'I need more clothes'. Совет: использовать правильную вспомогательную в ответах на привычки ('do'), герундий после 'spend time', и точные названия предметов гардероба.
× I have in my closest one style, it's like casual style because I like where this this style is is first is comfortable and 2nd it's good for me and my look for how other people looks me.
✓ I have mainly one style in my closet; it's a casual style because I like it. First, it is comfortable, and second, it looks good on me and affects how other people see me.
Много ошибок с местоимениями и согласованием: 'closest' должно быть 'closet'; 'one style' лучше 'mainly one style'; 'I like where this this style is' бессмысленно — исправлено на 'I like it'. 'how other people looks me' — неверный порядок и форма глагола; правильно 'how other people see me'. Совет: упорядочивать идеи в предложениях, проверять форму глагола после 'people' и использовать корректные слова 'closet' и 'see'.
× I usually wear a black and white color in my closet.
✓ I usually wear black and white clothes from my closet.
'a black and white color' неверно — лучше 'black and white clothes' или 'the colors black and white'. Также 'in my closet' лучше 'from my closet' или 'in my wardrobe' в зависимости от смысла. Совет: использовать 'clothes' для множественного набора и корректные предлоги.
× I mostly have a green and Gray because they are so beautiful.
✓ I mostly have green and gray items because I think those colors are beautiful.
'a green and Gray' неверно: цвета обычно без артикля и 'Gray' не должен быть с заглавной буквы. Также согласование: 'they are so beautiful' лучше конкретизировать 'those colors are beautiful'. Совет: не ставить артикль перед названиями цветов в общем смысле и не capitalise цвета.
× Uh, color and it's it's my favorite color.
✓ Those colors are my favorites.
'color and it's it's my favorite color' — тавтология и неверная структура. Лучше сократить и сказать, что эти цвета — любимые. Совет: избегать повторов и использовать простую структуру 'Those colors are my favorites'.