Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatically correct, more concise, and add a brief reason with linking words. Use singular/plural agreement and a topic sentence. For example, begin with a clear statement then give one specific reason: comfort and mobility. Avoid repetition and keep to under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer wearing long skirts because they are comfortable and not tight. For example, when I wear a long skirt I can move freely and feel more relaxed during the day.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, then explain with correct verbs and linking words. Fix word choice (admit → fit/allow) and word order. Keep it concise and include a specific example of an activity where such clothes are useful.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable clothes because they suit my daily activities. For example, I often wear sportswear because it fits well and allows me to move easily when exercising or doing chores.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear affirmative sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (choice→ choose, we→ you/people) and singular/plural forms. Be specific about styles or prints you like.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. T-shirts are practical because they let me move easily, and I can choose from many styles, such as plain, striped, or ones with cute character prints.

Gợi ý: Clarify and organize the answer: state whether you spend much time, then explain why with details and linking words. Correct vocabulary (net shopping → online shopping) and name of store if relevant. Keep it to two sentences max.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I often shop online. Recently I buy from ZOZOTOWN because it has many styles, so I compare items before I decide.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence then explain the contrast using linking words (because, but, while). Improve vocabulary (agriculture → farming; cultural styles → work clothes). Be specific about what you wear and why.

Ví dụ: Yes. Because I work on a farm during weekdays I usually wear practical work clothes, such as sturdy pants and boots, while on weekends I choose cuter, more fashionable outfits for going out.

Gợi ý: Give a clear statement and explain with coherent, grammatically correct reasons. Replace incorrect words (aggressive→ confident/energetic; 'it takes me more attractive'→ 'they make me look more attractive'). Use linking words and one concise supporting detail about why that colour suits you.

Ví dụ: I like violet clothing because it makes me feel confident and stands out. For instance, wearing a violet top often attracts compliments and lifts my mood.

× I like to wear a long skirt because long skirt don't tighten me so I can relax to wear it.

✓ I like to wear a long skirt because long skirts don't tighten me, so I can relax when I wear them.

The noun 'long skirt' is used generally, so it should be plural 'long skirts'. Also 'don't' must agree with plural subject. 'So I can relax to wear it' is unnatural; use 'so I can relax when I wear them' to refer back to 'long skirts' and express the idea clearly.

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes. For example, I like to wear sportswear. Sportswear can admit me, move around and easy.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes. For example, I like to wear sportswear. Sportswear lets me move around easily.

The verb phrase 'can admit me' is incorrect; likely intended 'lets me' or 'allows me'. 'Move around and easy' mixes a verb and adjective; it should be 'move around easily' using an adverb. This fixes verb choice and adverb form for present tense general statements.

× Yes I do. T-shirts allow me to move easily and we can choice a lot of. Kind T-shirts, T-shirt has many cute characters.

✓ Yes, I do. T-shirts allow me to move easily and we can choose many kinds of T-shirts. T-shirts have many cute characters.

Pronoun 'we can choice a lot of' uses incorrect verb 'choice' instead of 'choose' and awkward structure; correct is 'choose many kinds of T-shirts'. 'T-shirt has many cute characters' mismatches singular/plural; use plural 'T-shirts have'. This addresses pronoun use and verb form.

× Yes I do. I like do net shopping recently I wear at Zozo town I like Hmm.

✓ Yes, I do. I like online shopping recently; I bought clothes at ZOZOTOWN that I liked.

The original lacks proper verb forms and connectors. 'I like do net shopping' should be 'I like online shopping' or 'I have been shopping online recently'. 'I wear at Zozo town I like' is unclear; corrected to 'I bought clothes at ZOZOTOWN that I liked' to match past/recent activity and proper word order.

× Yes I do. I always work agriculture on weekdays so always I wear cultural styles but on weekend I wear more cute styles.

✓ Yes, I do. I always work in agriculture on weekdays, so I usually wear practical clothes, but on weekends I wear cuter styles.

'Work agriculture' needs preposition 'in' and 'agriculture' is awkward for a job context; 'work in agriculture' is correct. Word order 'always I wear' should be 'I usually wear'. 'Cultural styles' likely intended 'practical' or 'work-appropriate' styles; change for natural meaning. 'On weekend' should be 'on weekends'. 'More cute' should be comparative 'cuter'.

× I like Violet clothes because Violet make me more. Aggressive and it takes me more attractive.

✓ I like violet clothes because violet makes me feel bolder and makes me more attractive.

Color 'Violet' should be lowercase 'violet' and used as adjective 'violet clothes'. 'Violet make me more. Aggressive' has incorrect verb agreement and sentence fragmentation; use 'violet makes me feel bolder'. 'It takes me more attractive' is ungrammatical; use 'makes me more attractive'. This fixes subject-verb agreement, removes fragments, and uses appropriate verbs.