Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, correct grammar, and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, use one or two supporting reasons with linking words, and fix mistakes (e.g., 'such as', 'when I am running'). Keep to 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer wearing casual clothes, such as trousers and T-shirts, because they are comfortable and practical for daily life. For example, when I hang out with friends or go for a run, casual clothes let me move freely. Therefore I usually choose simple outfits for most days.

Gợi ý: Clarify your preference and avoid repetitive phrases. Correct grammar (e.g., 'work' not 'works', remove extra words like 'it', and link reasons). Provide a specific example of when you wear smart clothes.

Ví dụ: I prefer wearing smart clothes for work and special events because they help me feel professional and confident. For instance, at job interviews or presentations I wear a shirt and blazer so others take me seriously.

Gợi ý: Give a complete, grammatically correct answer and finish your thought. Use linking words and a specific example. Fix subject-verb agreement ('T-shirts make me') and avoid trailing unfinished sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. T-shirts make me feel comfortable and unrestricted, especially when I travel between classes or run errands. For example, on a busy day I usually choose a cotton T-shirt so I can move easily.

Gợi ý: Be direct and correct grammar: use 'I am sure' and avoid addressing 'you' when speaking about yourself. Explain specifically how long you spend and give an example of when you plan outfits. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I am careful when choosing clothes because the right outfit boosts my confidence before meetings or presentations. For example, I usually spend 10–15 minutes selecting a neat shirt and trousers the night before an important day.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear contrast and complete your sentence. Correct grammar ('wear' not 'wears') and give specific examples of styles you choose for each period. Use a linking word like 'however' to show contrast and finish the thought.

Ví dụ: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual clothes, such as a shirt and jeans, because I attend classes and want to look tidy. However, at the weekend I prefer very casual outfits like shorts and a T-shirt so I can relax.

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct vocabulary confusion between 'cream' and 'green'. Explain reasons concretely and fix grammar ('suits me'). Use one or two sentences and give an example of when you wear that colour.

Ví dụ: I prefer cream-coloured clothes because the soft tone makes me feel calm and it suits my skin tone. For example, I often choose a cream shirt for meetings because it looks neat and pleasant.

× I prefer wearing casual clothes just as pants and T-shirt.

✓ I prefer wearing casual clothes such as pants and T-shirts.

The phrase 'just as' is incorrect here; use 'such as' to give examples. Also 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to match 'clothes' (plural). Use of '-ing' with 'prefer' is acceptable.

× In addition, I like to keep things simple and relax when especially when I am hanging out with friends or running it.

✓ In addition, I like to keep things simple and relaxed, especially when I am hanging out with friends or running.

The placement of 'especially' was wrong and 'relax' should be the adjective 'relaxed' to describe the state. 'Running it' is incorrect; drop 'it' after 'running'.

× I actually prefer wearing smart clothes, especially for works or special events.

✓ I actually prefer wearing smart clothes, especially for work or special events.

Use the uncountable noun 'work' rather than 'works' when referring to the activity or workplace. The '-ing' form after 'prefer' is acceptable.

× This is because wearing something smart makes me comfortable and professional.

✓ This is because wearing something smart makes me feel comfortable and professional.

Add 'feel' to correctly link the verbs and adjectives; otherwise the sentence lacks a verb connecting 'makes me' to the states described.

× I also think that people tend to take you seriously it when you dress well in addition.

✓ I also think that people tend to take you seriously when you dress well.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here; remove it. Also move 'in addition' or omit it because 'also' already conveys the same meaning.

× Wearing T-shirt makes me comfortable and don't make me feel restricted, especially when I need to go from one place to other places.

✓ Wearing a T-shirt makes me comfortable and doesn't make me feel restricted, especially when I need to go from one place to another.

Subject-verb agreement: singular subject 'Wearing a T-shirt' requires 'doesn't' not 'don't'. Use the article 'a' with 'T-shirt' and 'another' rather than 'other places' for the phrase 'from one place to another.'

× In addition, it also makes me.

✓ In addition, it also makes me feel relaxed.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a complement after 'makes me.' Provide a clear complement such as 'feel relaxed' to complete the sentence.

× Yes, I do, this is because I really sure that choosing the right clothes will make you confident when you need to meet with others.

✓ Yes, I do. This is because I am really sure that choosing the right clothes will make you confident when you need to meet others.

Run-on sentence: use a period between independent clauses. 'I really sure' is ungrammatical; use 'I am really sure.' 'Meet with others' is acceptable but 'meet others' is more natural here.

× In addition, it also can help your emotion on that day.

✓ In addition, it can also help your mood that day.

Use 'mood' rather than 'emotion' for natural collocation; 'can also' word order is more natural and 'that day' is fine without 'on.'

× Usually during weekdays I like to wears my clothes.

✓ Usually during weekdays I like to wear my clothes.

After 'I' the base verb 'wear' should be used, not 'wears' which is third person singular.

× However, during the weekends I like to wear casual clothes because.

✓ However, during the weekends I like to wear casual clothes because they are more comfortable.

The sentence is incomplete; finish the 'because' clause with a reason such as 'they are more comfortable.'

× For me I like cream colour.

✓ I like cream-colored clothes.

'Cream colour' is awkward; use 'cream-colored' as an adjective and specify 'clothes' to answer the question about colour of clothes.

× This is because green colour makes me calm in everything problem that I have.

✓ This is because the colour cream makes me feel calm about any problems I have.

The original mixed 'green' and 'cream' and used incorrect structure. Use 'the colour cream' and 'makes me feel calm about any problems' for natural phrasing. 'Everything problem' is ungrammatical.

× In addition, cream colour is colour that suit with me well.

✓ In addition, cream is a colour that suits me well.

Simplify to 'cream is a colour that suits me well.' Use 'suits' (third person singular) and remove unnecessary 'with' after 'suit.'