Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct unclear phrases (e.g. “St. St. wear”), and use one or two supporting details with linking words. Also control filler words and minor grammar (plural/singular, articles).

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes. For example, I usually wear loose, baggy jeans and oversized T-shirts because they’re practical and relaxed. In contrast, I rarely choose smart or fashionable outfits except for special occasions.

Gợi ý: Directly answer first (I prefer comfortable clothes) then add a linked reason and one brief example. Remove fillers and small mistakes (e.g. “you'll barely see me some wearing”). Use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘so’ to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they suit my daily routine. For instance, I often wear baggy jeans, oversized T-shirts and sneakers, so I feel relaxed while studying or hanging out with friends.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, concise answer with one or two specific supporting details and avoid repetition. Fix small grammar issues (double words, possessive errors) and finish sentences. Use linking words like ‘also’ or ‘for example’.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts and wear them almost every day. At home I prefer light, loose-fitting T-shirts for comfort, while for university I choose slightly smarter cotton T-shirts that still feel casual and presentable.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a concise routine explanation with one linking phrase. Avoid fillers like ‘so uh yeah’ and phrasing errors (questions inside statements).

Ví dụ: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I’m indecisive. For example, I often pick my outfit the night before university to avoid wasting time in the morning.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear yes/no and then contrast weekdays and weekends with linking words (e.g. ‘however’, ‘while’). Avoid hesitations and vague phrases like ‘St. wear’—use ‘streetwear’ or ‘casual clothes’.

Ví dụ: Not really — I wear similar casual clothes most of the time. For instance, I wear jeans and T-shirts when I go to university, while at home I usually stay in pyjamas and comfortable T-shirts.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly (state preferred colours) then give concise, specific reasons using linking words. Remove repetition and hesitations; correct sentence endings. Use vocabulary like ‘transparent’ instead of ‘see through’ if appropriate but keep it natural.

Ví dụ: I prefer light colours at home, but outside I usually choose dark colours. Darker clothes hide stains and appear slimmer, and they’re less likely to look transparent in bright light.

× I prefer comfort over anything, literally have anything.

✓ I prefer comfort over anything; I literally have nothing else I prefer.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and missing a verb form to complete the thought. The phrase 'literally have anything' is incorrect in context. Use a clear clause with a verb and object. Suggestion: restructure the sentence to 'I prefer comfort over anything' and add a clarifying clause such as 'I literally have nothing else I prefer.' This fixes sentence structure and meaning.

× So you'd always find me wearing loose and baggy clothing.

✓ So you'd always find me wearing loose and baggy clothing.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable as an idiomatic contraction of 'you would' used in conversational style. No correction needed. Keep consistent with conversational register.

× I prefer St. St. wear over any smart, classic or chic wear.

✓ I prefer streetwear over smart, classic, or chic styles.

'St. St. wear' is unclear and likely intended to be 'streetwear'. 'Wear' repeated is awkward; use 'styles' or 'clothes'. Also add commas in a list. Replace colloquial abbreviation with the correct word.

× So I always you'd always find me in comfortable Jean shirt, baggy and loose fitting.

✓ So you'd always find me in a comfortable jean shirt that is baggy and loose-fitting.

The sentence contains duplicated words 'always you'd always' and lacks articles. Use the conditional 'you'd' once and include the indefinite article 'a' before 'comfortable jean shirt'. 'Jean' as an adjective should be lowercase and 'loose-fitting' hyphenated when used as a compound modifier.

× Yes, I prefer comfort over any other type of clothing, so you'll always find me wearing loose fitting baggy jeans and oversize T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I prefer comfort over any other type of clothing, so you'll always find me wearing loose-fitting, baggy jeans and oversized T-shirts.

Hyphenate 'loose-fitting' as a compound modifier before the noun and use 'oversized' (one word) rather than 'oversize'. Add a comma between adjectives in a list.

× Uh, with some casual joggers or sneakers, you'll barely see me some wearing something formal or smart, so I definitely prefer comfortable.

✓ With casual joggers or sneakers, you'll rarely see me wearing something formal or smart, so I definitely prefer comfortable clothes.

The original has word order problems ('barely see me some wearing') and missing noun after 'comfortable'. Replace 'barely' with 'rarely' for intended meaning and add 'clothes' after 'comfortable' to complete the noun phrase.

× You'll always find me wearing T-shirts whether I'm in in home or I'm going outside.

✓ You'll always find me wearing T-shirts whether I'm at home or going outside.

Use the preposition 'at' with 'home' not 'in'. Also remove duplicate 'in'. Simplify 'I'm going outside' to 'going outside' for concision.

× I wear loose baggy T-shirts that are very light and loose fitting in home and I have some other T-shirts that I wear to university or going outside.

✓ I wear loose, baggy T-shirts that are very light and loose-fitting at home, and I have other T-shirts that I wear to university or when going outside.

Add comma between adjectives 'loose, baggy'. Hyphenate 'loose-fitting'. Use 'at home' not 'in home'. Make parallel structure: 'that I wear to university or when going outside.'

× So you'll always find my wearing T-shirts.

✓ So you'll always find me wearing T-shirts.

The pronoun 'my' is incorrect; the subject pronoun 'me' is required after 'find'. Use 'me' as the object of the verb 'find'.

× I barely use anything else except for.

✓ I barely wear anything else.

The original ends with a preposition 'except for' with no object, producing a sentence fragment. Simplify to 'I barely wear anything else.' This provides a complete verb and object.

× Yes, I'm very indecisive. So I spend like an hour when it comes to what do I have to wear when I have to go somewhere.

✓ Yes, I'm very indecisive. So I spend about an hour deciding what to wear when I have to go somewhere.

Avoid direct question word order 'what do I have to wear' inside a statement; use noun clause 'deciding what to wear'. 'Like' as a filler should be 'about' for approximation.

× So I usually pick out my outfit a day before or at night when I have to go to university the next day.

✓ I usually pick out my outfit the night before or a day before I have to go to university.

Word order and time expressions are awkward. Reorder to 'the night before' or 'a day before' and include 'I have to go' to maintain tense consistency.

× So uh yeah, I spend a lot of time choosing what do I wear.

✓ So, yeah, I spend a lot of time choosing what to wear.

Use the infinitive clause 'what to wear' not the question form 'what do I wear' inside a statement. Remove filler 'uh' and add comma for clarity.

× Uh, not really, but yeah I do wear like casual St. wear when I go to university, like jeans and T-shirts, but when I'm home I only wear PJS.

✓ Not really; I do wear casual streetwear when I go to university, like jeans and T-shirts, but when I'm at home I only wear pyjamas.

Replace unclear 'St. wear' with 'streetwear'. Use 'at home' instead of 'in home'. 'PJS' is informal; use 'pyjamas'. Adjust punctuation for clarity.

× So you'll always find me in pyjamas and comfortable T-shirts whenever I am in home.

✓ So you'll always find me in pyjamas and comfortable T-shirts whenever I am at home.

Use 'at home' not 'in home' for correct preposition with 'home'.

× So I only wear jeans and T-shirts when I go outside.

✓ I only wear jeans and T-shirts when I go out.

'Go outside' is acceptable but 'go out' is more natural in this context. Keep present simple for habitual action.

× Uh, I prefer light colours but when I go outside I usually wear dark colours because they make you look a bit like thin or slim maybe and they're not see through.

✓ I prefer light colours, but when I go outside I usually wear dark colours because they make you look a bit thinner or slimmer, and they are not see-through.

Comparative forms 'thinner' or 'slimmer' are required, not 'thin or slim'. Hyphenate 'see-through'. Use 'they are' rather than contraction for clarity.

× The main problem is when you wear clothes and they're see through.

✓ The main problem is when clothes are see-through.

Change passive construction to more concise 'clothes are see-through' and hyphenate 'see-through' as an adjective.

× So I usually don't wear something that I see through.

✓ So I usually don't wear clothes that are see-through.

'Something that I see through' is unclear and incorrect: it suggests the speaker sees through the garment. Use 'clothes that are see-through' to indicate transparency.

× So usually wear dark colours outside the home, but when I'm inside I can wear anything I've.

✓ So I usually wear dark colours outside the home, but when I'm inside I can wear anything I like.

Original missing subject 'I' at start. 'Anything I've' is incomplete; likely intended 'anything I like.' Add subject and complete clause.