Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
I like simple naked clothes and has natural color. I see you guys.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I I prepared to wear comfortable and casual clothes.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts every day, but sometimes I wear umm, as much clothes or umm, expensive clothes like. Just go like a design, design clothes.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
Is a I can't choose any clothes or I I don't know. I can find water in this water. I cannot. Dude I'm going really fast in the water with a jumble bike somehow. OK yo these bikes are.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
Yes I wear different styles. For weekdays I usually wear simple like jeans and T-shirts and for weekends. I wear my uniform actually.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
I like black color, but sometimes I like red, pink and green.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: Be clear and grammatically correct. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement), and avoid unclear phrases like “naked clothes” or “I see you guys.” Give one or two specific examples and a reason. Keep to maximum 3–4 short sentences.
Ví dụ: I prefer simple clothes in natural colors. For example, I often wear plain T-shirts and chinos in beige or navy because they are easy to match and look neat. I avoid flashy styles because I like a calm, timeless appearance.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Use a concise, confident topic sentence and provide a brief reason. Correct repetition and tense errors. Add a linking word to expand (e.g., because, so). Keep it short and specific.
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes. Because I commute by bike and work in a relaxed environment, I usually choose jeans and a breathable shirt so I can move easily all day.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: Avoid fillers (“umm”) and unclear phrases. Give a clear statement about frequency and then one specific example contrasting simple and more fashionable items. Use linking words (but, however) and limit to 2–3 sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I wear T-shirts almost every day because they are comfortable. However, for special occasions I sometimes choose designer or more expensive shirts to look smarter.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 18.0Gợi ý: The answer is off-topic and unclear. Stay focused: answer directly (yes/no), give a reason and a specific example. Avoid irrelevant words and ensure sentences are grammatical. Limit to 2–3 coherent sentences.
Ví dụ: No, I usually do not spend much time choosing clothes. I keep a simple wardrobe, so I can pick an outfit in five minutes unless I have an important event coming up.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Good basic structure but improve fluency and details. Use linking words to connect weekday/weekend contrast, correct wording (e.g., “weekends I wear casual clothes or my uniform”), and give a reason for the change. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I usually wear simple jeans and T-shirts because I work from the office, but on weekends I often wear my sports uniform when I train with my team.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: Short and clear answer; improve by giving a brief reason and an example of when you wear other colours. Use linking words (but, for example) and correct phrasing (“I like black” rather than “I like black color”).
Ví dụ: I mainly like black because it looks smart and matches everything. But for summer I sometimes choose red, pink or green to add colour to my outfits, for example a green shirt on weekends.
× I like simple naked clothes and has natural color.
✓ I like simple, plain clothes with natural colors.
The original uses 'naked' incorrectly to mean 'plain' or 'simple' (adjective misuse). 'Has' is wrong because the subject is 'clothes' (plural) and the phrase needs a prepositional phrase 'with natural colors'. Suggest replacing 'naked' with 'plain' or 'simple', add a comma, and use 'with natural colors' to describe the clothes. Suggestion: use correct descriptive adjectives (plain/simple) and a prepositional phrase 'with + noun' to describe color.
× I see you guys.
✓ I see you guys.
No correction needed for grammar tense here; sentence is grammatically acceptable in conversational context. It uses first-person present 'see' correctly. Keep as is.
× I I prepared to wear comfortable and casual clothes.
✓ I prepared to wear comfortable and casual clothes. OR I prepared to wear comfortable, casual clothes.
Redundant 'I' is a transcription error rather than a modal error; 'prepared to' is acceptable to express readiness. Remove the duplicate pronoun and add a comma between adjectives. Suggestion: eliminate duplicated words and punctuate adjective list properly.
× Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts every day, but sometimes I wear umm, as much clothes or umm, expensive clothes like.
✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts every day, but sometimes I wear cheaper clothes or more expensive clothes depending on the occasion.
The original has awkward phrases 'do like' (unnecessary auxiliary for emphasis) and 'as much clothes' (incorrect quantifier/phrase). Also 'expensive clothes like' is incomplete. Correct by dropping the unnecessary auxiliary, replacing 'as much clothes' with a meaningful contrast (e.g., 'cheaper clothes' or 'different clothes'), and completing the comparison with 'depending on the occasion.' Suggestion: choose precise comparative adjectives and complete the clause.
× I cannot. Dude I'm going really fast in the water with a jumble bike somehow.
✓ I cannot choose. I'm going really fast in the water on a jet ski somehow.
This response is disfluent and contains incorrect nouns: 'jumble bike' is not a standard term; likely intended 'jet ski' or 'water bike.' Also 'I cannot.' is a fragment. Recast as two clear sentences: 'I cannot choose.' and a coherent example if trying to explain inability. Suggestion: provide clear, relevant answers and replace nonstandard nouns with correct vocabulary.
× Yes I wear different styles. For weekdays I usually wear simple like jeans and T-shirts and for weekends. I wear my uniform actually.
✓ Yes, I wear different styles. On weekdays I usually wear simple clothes like jeans and T-shirts, and on weekends I actually wear my uniform.
Problems include missing prepositions ('on weekdays/on weekends'), sentence fragment 'and for weekends.' and awkward placement of 'actually.' Correct by adding 'on', combining clauses with 'and', and placing 'actually' before the verb for natural emphasis. Suggestion: use correct time prepositions and combine fragments into a complete sentence.
× I like black color, but sometimes I like red, pink and green.
✓ I like black, but sometimes I like red, pink, and green.
'Black color' is wordy; 'black' as an adjective is sufficient. Add a comma in the list before 'and' for clarity (Oxford comma optional). Suggestion: use simple adjective form and standard punctuation for lists.