Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
To be honest, uh, I like to wearing umm casual and simple clothes like T-shirt, jeans and sneakers. They are perfect to hang out with friends and run.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I like all type of clothes. It depends where I am. Uh, For example, when I'm at work, I prefer to wear smart and comfortable clothes like smart T-shirt skirts. Uh, they are showing uh, that I am no.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Actually, yes, uh, I'm really into T-shirt, uh, especially at the weekend when I have off day and umm, yeah, T-shirt is a very casual and comfortable to wear any, any occasion. Yeah, it's look.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
To be honest, yeah, it's really difficult for me to just close this at once. So I need, uh, 2-3 hours and uh, yeah, if it's work time, I mean, I have to work, yeah. So I need like one hour to choose it or I choose before.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
Actually, yes, uh, weekends, it's a special day for me. It's a off day, yeah. And uh, I try to choose a casual, comfortable clothes like T-shirt, shirt, especially in summer and slippers because usually I spend.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
My favorite color for sure is black and yellow, the black T-shirt and the yellow trousers, skirt or shirt. And it depends on the vacation yeah. So if it is a weekdays, uh.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Уменьшите количество заполнителей (uh, umm) и исправьте грамматику. Начинайте с прямого утверждения (topic sentence), затем добавляйте 1–2 конкретных подробности. Используйте связку для плавности, например "because" или "for example".
Ví dụ: I prefer casual, simple clothes such as T-shirts, jeans and sneakers because they are comfortable for hanging out with friends and for running.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Избегайте повторов и ненужных пауз; говорите чётко. Дайте чёткий выбор в первой фразе, затем приведите конкретный пример и объяснение. Следите за согласованием (types, a smart T‑shirt and skirt) и завершайте мысль ясно.
Ví dụ: It depends on the situation: I wear casual clothes at weekends, but at work I prefer smart yet comfortable outfits, for example a smart T‑shirt with a skirt, because they look professional and still let me move easily.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Уберите междометия и исправьте согласование (T‑shirts, an off day). Начните с прямого утверждения, затем объясните почему и приведите одно конкретное примеpное использование. Делайте предложения короче и точнее.
Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts, especially on my days off, because they are casual and comfortable and suit many occasions like meeting friends or going shopping.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Избавьтесь от повторов и неясных фраз. Дайте конкретное время в начале и объясните причину кратко. Используйте связки (so, but, because) для логичности.
Ví dụ: Yes, I often spend time choosing clothes: usually 2–3 hours for special occasions because I want to look good, but only about one hour on workdays since I prepare outfits in advance.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Сформулируйте контраст чётко (weekdays vs weekends). Уберите лишние слова и завершите мысль — объясните, чем вы занимаетесь в выходные, чтобы оправдать выбор одежды. Старайтесь использовать корректную грамматику (an off day → a day off, casual clothes → plural).
Ví dụ: Yes, I dress differently: on weekdays I wear more formal or smart‑casual clothes for work, while on weekends I choose casual items like T‑shirts, shirts and slippers because I relax at home or meet friends.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Сформулируйте ответ ясно и закончите мысль. Назовите 1–2 любимых цвета и приведите конкретные примеры и контекст использования (work, vacation). Избегайте незаконченных предложений и лишних слов.
Ví dụ: I mainly like black and yellow: for example, I often wear a black T‑shirt for everyday use and yellow trousers or a skirt on vacation to feel cheerful.
× To be honest, uh, I like to wearing umm casual and simple clothes like T-shirt, jeans and sneakers.
✓ To be honest, I like wearing casual and simple clothes like T-shirts, jeans, and sneakers.
The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'wearing' (correct) but the original used 'to wearing', which mixes 'to' with a gerund incorrectly. Also plural nouns and article punctuation were adjusted: 'T-shirt' should be plural when speaking generally ('T-shirts'), and commas added for clarity. Suggestion: use 'like wearing' or 'to wear' (not 'to wearing').
× To be honest, I like all type of clothes.
✓ To be honest, I like all types of clothes.
The phrase 'all type of' is incorrect; 'all' must modify a plural noun: 'all types of clothes' or 'every type of clothing'. Suggestion: use 'all types of clothes' or 'every type of clothing'.
× It depends where I am.
✓ It depends on where I am.
The verb 'depend' requires the preposition 'on' when referring to conditions: 'depend on something'. Suggestion: use 'it depends on...' in such contexts.
× Uh, For example, when I'm at work, I prefer to wear smart and comfortable clothes like smart T-shirt skirts.
✓ For example, when I'm at work, I prefer to wear smart and comfortable clothes like smart T-shirts and skirts.
The original mixes nouns improperly: 'T-shirt skirts' is not a standard compound. Also capitalization of 'For' after a comma is incorrect. Suggestion: separate items with 'and' and use plural forms for general statements: 'T-shirts and skirts.'
× Uh, they are showing uh, that I am no.
✓ They show that I am professional.
Original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'They are showing that I am no' is ungrammatical. A clearer structure: 'They show that I am professional' or 'They show that I am serious about my job.' Suggestion: complete the idea and use a simple present 'show' to describe what clothes indicate.
× Actually, yes, uh, I'm really into T-shirt, uh, especially at the weekend when I have off day and umm, yeah, T-shirt is a very casual and comfortable to wear any, any occasion.
✓ Actually, yes, I'm really into T-shirts, especially at the weekend when I have an off day. T-shirts are very casual and comfortable to wear on any occasion.
Use plural 'T-shirts' for general liking. 'An off day' needs the article 'an'. 'T-shirt is a very casual and comfortable' should be plural and include 'to wear on any occasion' with preposition 'on'. Suggestion: use 'T-shirts are... to wear on any occasion.'
× Yeah, it's look.
✓ Yeah, it looks good.
'It' requires the third-person singular verb 'looks'. Also add an adjective 'good' or another complement to complete the clause. Suggestion: use 'it looks' + adjective.
× To be honest, yeah, it's really difficult for me to just close this at once.
✓ To be honest, it's really difficult for me to choose clothes at once.
The original 'close this' is a wrong verb choice for selecting clothes. Also 'choose clothes at once' conveys intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'choose clothes' or 'make a choice'.
× So I need, uh, 2-3 hours and uh, yeah, if it's work time, I mean, I have to work, yeah.
✓ So I need about two to three hours, and if it's a workday, I mean when I have to work,
Numbers should be expressed clearly; 'work time' is better as 'a workday' or 'when I have to work'. Use 'about' for approximation. Suggestion: write numbers in words in speech transcripts and clarify 'workday.'
× So I need like one hour to choose it or I choose before.
✓ So I need about one hour to choose, or I choose my clothes in advance.
The clause 'choose it' is vague; better 'choose my clothes'. 'I choose before' should be 'I choose in advance' to be grammatical. Suggestion: use 'in advance' or 'ahead of time.'
× Actually, yes, uh, weekends, it's a special day for me. It's a off day, yeah.
✓ Actually, yes, weekends are special days for me. It's an off day.
'Weekends' is plural and should take plural verb 'are'. 'It's a off day' requires 'an' before a vowel sound: 'an off day.' Suggestion: match verb number to subject and use correct article 'an.'
× And uh, I try to choose a casual, comfortable clothes like T-shirt, shirt, especially in summer and slippers because usually I spend.
✓ I try to choose casual, comfortable clothes like T-shirts and shirts, and in summer I often wear slippers because I usually spend time relaxing.
'A casual, comfortable clothes' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' and use plural nouns. 'I spend' is incomplete; specify 'spend time relaxing' or similar. Suggestion: ensure noun-number agreement and complete the sentence.
× My favorite color for sure is black and yellow, the black T-shirt and the yellow trousers, skirt or shirt.
✓ My favorite colors are definitely black and yellow: black T-shirts and yellow trousers, skirts, or shirts.
'Color' should be plural 'colors' when listing more than one. Use plural nouns for items generally worn. Suggestion: use 'colors are' and plural item names when speaking generally.
× And it depends on the vacation yeah. So if it is a weekdays, uh.
✓ And it depends on the vacation, yeah. So if it is a weekday, ...
'Depends on the vacation' is acceptable but 'a weekdays' is incorrect; use 'a weekday' (singular) or 'weekdays' (plural) with correct article. Suggestion: choose singular or plural appropriately: 'if it is a weekday' or 'on weekdays.'