Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: I usually wear casual clothes. For example, I often choose a T‑shirt with jeans and sneakers because they are comfortable and suitable for both going out and relaxing at home.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a clear contrast and use correct verb forms. Reduce hesitations and list examples briefly with linking words such as 'however' or 'but'.

Ví dụ: At home I prefer comfortable clothes like pajamas or sweatpants. However, when I go out or to work I usually wear smart clothes such as a blouse, a skirt and sometimes high heels.

Gợi ý: Answer directly then give a specific example. Avoid repetition and incorrect collocations. Use simple linking words like 'for example' and keep sentences short.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable and come in many colours. For example, I often wear a white T‑shirt with jeans and sneakers for a casual day out, and I swap the jeans for sweatpants when I stay at home.

Gợi ý: Be specific about frequency and reasons. Use past tense correctly when giving an example and avoid vague phrasing. Link reason and result clearly.

Ví dụ: Sometimes I do, especially when I can't decide what to buy. For example, last week I spent hours at the mall choosing a dress because I wasn't sure which style would suit me.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence with a contrast and one concise example. Correct plural and word choice (e.g., 'smart' not 'smarty'). Avoid trailing off.

Ví dụ: Yes. On weekdays I wear smart clothes for work, such as blouses and trousers. On weekends I prefer comfortable outfits like T‑shirts and jeans.

Gợi ý: State your preference clearly, give a reason and a specific recent example using correct tense. Reduce fillers and grammatical errors.

Ví dụ: I like many colours, but my favourite is pink because it suits my skin tone. For example, I bought a pink dress last week for a special occasion.

× I refers to wear casual clothes mostly.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes mostly.

The student used 'refers' incorrectly; the correct verb is 'prefer' to express preference. Also 'I' should be followed by a verb form that matches first person. Suggestion: use 'I prefer' when stating likes or habits.

× They suit everywhere every.

✓ They suit everywhere.

The extra word 'every' is redundant and ungrammatical. Use 'everywhere' alone to mean 'in all places.' Remove unnecessary repetition.

× When, when I'm in home, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes, uh, like casual clothes or pajamas.

✓ When I'm at home, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes, like casual clothes or pajamas.

The correct preposition with 'home' is 'at home,' not 'in home.' Also remove repeated filler 'When,' and extra 'uh'. Suggestion: say 'When I'm at home...' for natural expression.

× But when I saw or when I, or if I wanted to go outside, I prefer to wear smart clothes, blouse top, tank and skirts, uh, high heels sometimes.

✓ But when I go out, or if I want to go out, I prefer to wear smart clothes, such as a blouse, a top, a tank, and skirts; sometimes I wear high heels.

Tense consistency is needed. 'Saw' and 'wanted' are past forms that conflict with 'prefer' (present). Use present forms 'go' and 'want' for habitual statements. Also list items with articles and connectors for clarity.

× Yes I do because they are comfortable and coming with a different color and shapes.

✓ Yes, I do because they are comfortable and come in different colors and shapes.

'Coming' is incorrect here; use base verb 'come' for general facts. Use plural 'colors' and 'shapes' to match 'different.' Add commas for clarity.

× For example if I wanted to go outside I can wear white T-shirts and it's coming it's coming with different color and shape of pants or even sneakers.

✓ For example, if I want to go out I can wear a white T-shirt, and it can be paired with pants of different colors and styles or even sneakers.

Maintain present tense for general habits: use 'want' not 'wanted.' 'Go outside' -> 'go out' is more natural. Replace 'it's coming' with 'it can be paired' or 'it goes with.' Use singular 'a white T-shirt' when referring to one shirt; 'pants of different colors and styles' is clearer.

× And just if I wanted to sit at home I can change the just changing the pants to a comfortable pants and.

✓ And if I just want to stay at home, I can change my pants to a comfortable pair.

Fix tense and structure: use present 'want' for habitual actions. Remove redundant words 'just' and 'changing.' Use 'a comfortable pair' or 'comfortable pants' with correct article and possessive 'my' for clarity.

× Yes, sometimes, especially if I don't have a an idea about what I wanted to buy.

✓ Yes, sometimes, especially if I don't have an idea about what I want to buy.

Remove duplicate articles 'a an.' Use present tense 'want' for current intention and habitual situations. 'Have an idea about what I want to buy' is natural.

× For example, last week I went to malls and I wanted to wear something.

✓ For example, last week I went to the mall and I wanted to buy something to wear.

Use singular or change phrasing: 'the mall' or 'malls' but native speakers often say 'the mall.' Also clarify 'want to buy something to wear.' Maintain past tense 'went' and 'wanted' consistently; add 'to buy' to express intention.

× I don't know what was it.

✓ I didn't know what it was.

In English indirect question word order must be subject + verb: 'what it was.' Also match past tense with previous clause: 'didn't know' instead of 'don't know.' Suggestion: use 'I didn't know what it was.'

× So I spent hours just to choose what to buy, what kind of clothes I wanted to.

✓ So I spent hours choosing what to buy and what kind of clothes I wanted.

Use gerund 'choosing' after 'spent hours.' Avoid ending sentence with preposition-like fragment 'wanted to.' Keep past tense 'wanted' consistent.

× Yeah, I wear a different styles of clothes I wear.

✓ Yeah, I wear different styles of clothes.

'A different styles' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'styles.' Remove 'a' and redundant repetition. Keep plural 'styles' to match 'different.'

× Weekdays are different during the weekdays I prefer smarty clothes, but in the weekend I prefer comfortable clothes.

✓ On weekdays I prefer smart clothes, but on weekends I prefer comfortable clothes.

Use 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends' for correct time expressions. 'Smarty' is incorrect; use 'smart.' Maintain parallel structure.

× For example, I have a clothes for just work and I also.

✓ For example, I have clothes just for work, and I also have others for weekends.

'A clothes' is incorrect: 'clothes' is plural and does not take 'a.' Use 'clothes for work' or 'a work outfit.' Complete the sentence to convey contrast.

× I have a lot of favorite color, but what I like most is the pink because it's, it's suits my, uh, skin tone.

✓ I have a lot of favorite colors, but what I like most is pink because it suits my skin tone.

Use plural 'colors' after 'a lot of.' Remove 'the' before 'pink' unless specifying a particular shade. 'It's suits' is wrong: use 'it suits.' Remove filler 'uh' and extra commas.

× Umm, for example, I buy last three, uh, week dress a big dress, uh, for special occasion.

✓ For example, last week I bought a big dress for a special occasion.

Use past tense 'bought' for a completed action 'last week.' Word order should be 'bought a big dress.' Include articles 'a' before 'big dress' and 'a' before 'special occasion.' Remove unnecessary fillers.