Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and explains reasons, but it's a bit long-winded and repetitive. Try to give a clear topic sentence, one or two concise supporting details, and avoid repeating the same idea (rough schedule/exhaustion) multiple times. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, 'because' and 'so'). Keep sentences shorter and more natural.

Ví dụ: I prefer wearing comfortable, breathable clothes because I have a busy, tiring schedule. For example, loose cotton shirts keep me cool and prevent sweating, so I can stay comfortable all day.

Gợi ý: You answered directly but repeated previous points and added an unnecessary comment about not knowing 'smart clothes' which sounds uncertain. Give a clear preference and briefly explain with one specific reason. If unsure about a term, it's better to describe it (e.g. formal or tailored) rather than say you haven't heard it.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart or formal outfits because they suit my daily routine. For instance, I avoid tight blazers and choose soft, breathable fabrics for long days.

Gợi ý: Good short answer with personal detail and reason. To improve, make the phrasing more natural (e.g. 'because they give me positive energy') and add one brief example of a T-shirt you like to illustrate your point.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts. I own several bright, playful designs—like a yellow T-shirt with a funny print—that lift my mood and make me feel more positive.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and gives reasons, but some sentences are slightly awkward and repetitive. Use one topic sentence, then one or two concise supporting details. Correct small grammar issues (e.g. 'that is going to keep me good' -> 'that keep me comfortable').

Ví dụ: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. I usually pick something comfortable and breathable from my wardrobe because I prefer to spend money on other things rather than on fashion.

Gợi ý: You answered directly and gave context about the school dress code, which is good. Avoid repeating 'like I mentioned before' and tidy up phrasing (e.g. 'simple clothes things'). Use linking words to show contrast (e.g. 'however' or 'but') and give one specific weekend example.

Ví dụ: It depends. On weekdays I wear a school uniform because of the dress code, but on weekends I choose casual, breathable clothes—for example, jeans and a soft T-shirt—because I value comfort.

Gợi ý: Good content with contrast between moods. Improve by correcting awkward phrases ('not in the mood some poor fashion' -> 'not in the mood for bold colours') and making sentences more concise. Use linking words like 'however' to emphasize contrast and give one concrete colour example.

Ví dụ: If I'm not in the mood for bold colours, I prefer black or white because they're simple and easy to match. However, when I'm feeling upbeat I choose bright colours like yellow or orange because they feel cheerful and energetic.

× I usually prefer wearing comfortable clothes because I have a very rough schedule which makes me very exhausted and tired at the end of the day, and I really like my clothes fresh so that I can have some air and I'm not going to be sweaty after my rough schedule.

✓ I usually prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I have a very rough schedule that makes me very exhausted at the end of the day, and I like my clothes to be fresh so that I can get some air and not be sweaty after my schedule.

Use of 'prefer' is typically followed by the infinitive 'to + verb' or a gerund consistently; 'prefer to wear' is more natural here. 'Which' should be 'that' for defining clause. 'Exhausted and tired' is redundant; use one adjective. Use 'like my clothes to be fresh' to express desire about the state of clothes. Replace 'have some air' with 'get some air' and simplify 'I'm not going to be sweaty' to 'not be sweaty' for naturalness and correct verb form.

× Like I mentioned before, I usually prefer wearing comfortable clothes and breathable clothes because I have a very rough and exhausting schedule. And I have a question about smart clothes because I have never heard about them before.

✓ As I mentioned before, I usually prefer comfortable, breathable clothes because I have a very rough, exhausting schedule. I also have a question about 'smart clothes' because I have never heard of them before.

Use 'as I mentioned' or 'like I mentioned' both possible but 'as' is slightly more formal. Avoid repeating 'clothes'; combine adjectives 'comfortable, breathable clothes'. 'Heard about' should be 'heard of' when referring to being aware of a concept. Maintain present perfect 'have never heard of' which is correct but preposition was wrong.

× Yes, I really enjoy wearing T-shirts, and I actually have a collection of goofy, playful and bright T-shirts because they're giving me a positive energy.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy wearing T-shirts, and I actually have a collection of goofy, playful, bright T-shirts because they give me positive energy.

Adjectives should be separated by commas and no repeated noun needed after listing adjectives. Use simple present 'they give' rather than progressive 'they're giving' for a habitual fact. 'Positive energy' does not need the article 'a' here.

× No, I can't say that I have a hard time choosing an outfit. I just wear whatever I find in my wardrobe because I actually prefer spending my money on different things and I can really say that I'm into fashion that much. I just try to find breathable and comfortable outfits that is going to keep me good.

✓ No, I can't say that I have a hard time choosing an outfit. I just wear whatever I find in my wardrobe because I prefer spending my money on other things and I'm not that into fashion. I just try to find breathable, comfortable outfits that are going to keep me comfortable.

Replace 'different things' with 'other things' for clarity. 'I can really say that I'm into fashion that much' is awkward; use 'I'm not that into fashion'. 'Outfits that is' has subject-verb agreement error: 'outfits' (plural) requires 'are'. 'Keep me good' is informal/awkward; use 'keep me comfortable'.

× It depends on my schedule. I'm going to school on weekdays which has a dress code so I can't really choose what I'm going to wear. But for weekends I actually have some options. But like I mentioned before, I'm not really into fashion and I just choose comfortable, breathable and simple clothes things.

✓ It depends on my schedule. I go to school on weekdays, which have a dress code, so I can't really choose what to wear. On weekends I have some options. As I mentioned before, I'm not really into fashion and I just choose comfortable, breathable, simple clothes.

Use simple present 'I go to school' for habitual action. 'School...which has' should be 'which have' because 'weekdays' is plural or rewrite with commas; here better: 'weekdays, which have a dress code'. 'What I'm going to wear' is wordy; 'what to wear' is more natural. Remove redundant 'things' and repeat of 'but'.

× If I'm not in the mood some poor fashion, I usually prefer wearing black and white as they are very simple and easy to create on combination. But if I'm in the mood and I'm feeling myself, I prefer wearing bright clothes as they represent cheerfulness, good vibes and positivity.

✓ If I'm not in the mood for fashion, I usually prefer wearing black and white because they are very simple and easy to combine. But if I'm in the mood and feeling myself, I prefer wearing bright clothes because they represent cheerfulness, good vibes, and positivity.

'In the mood some poor fashion' is incorrect; use 'in the mood for fashion'. 'Easy to create on combination' should be 'easy to combine'. 'Feeling myself' is informal but acceptable; kept but simplified to 'feeling myself'. Added commas in list and replaced 'as' with 'because' for clearer cause.