Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
I love to wear casual clothes because if it's too tight or if it's too smart I will get uncomfortable.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
That's a great question actually. It depends on the situation. If it's daily routine life, I will wear something casual and if it's something unusual or formal like a job interview, I will wear smart clothes.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yes, I love wearing T-shirts that are made of good clothes and also if they are loose, but if they are too tight I don't wear them because I feel uncomfortable.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
It depends where I am. If I'm at home, I can choose fast. However, if I'm in the shopping center I spend a lot of time when I choose because I need to choose good fabric. Also if it's loose or tight where I will wear it.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. On weekdays I'm usually at work so I wear something formal like a dress or a skirt with a T-shirt. But on weekdays I'm often at home so I wear something casual like pajamas or loose T-shirt.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
That's an interesting question. So I prefer blue, black, and white colors. But I'm a superstitious person so I wear blue when I'm sad, I wear black when something bad happens, and I wear white when it's sunny or hot.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: Ответ правильный, но можно сделать его более естественным и кратким; стоит начать с основной идеи, затем добавить одно конкретное объяснение. Избегайте повторов (‘too tight’ и ‘uncomfortable’ уже достаточно). Также можно заменить слово ‘smart’ на ‘formal’ для точности.
Ví dụ: I prefer casual clothes because they’re comfortable. For example, loose jeans and a soft T‑shirt let me move freely, so I feel relaxed all day.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: Ответ структурирован хорошо, но начало фразы «That's a great question actually» ненужно и звучит разговорно; лучше прямо ответить и привести конкрет пример. Также замените ‘unusual’ на ‘special’ или ‘formal occasion’.
Ví dụ: It depends on the occasion. For everyday activities I choose casual clothes, but for special events like a job interview I wear formal attire such as a blazer and tailored trousers.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Содержание понятное, но есть лексическая ошибка: «made of good clothes» неверно — следовало сказать «made of good material» или «good fabric». Предложение слишком длинное и немного повторяет идею про тесноту. Разделите мысль на две части и добавьте конкретный пример ткани.
Ví dụ: Yes, I like T‑shirts, especially those made of soft cotton. I prefer loose fits because tight T‑shirts make me feel uncomfortable.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: Ответ фрагментирован и содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие фразы («choose fast», «where I will wear it»). Лучше использовать связующие слова и точные выражения: ‘quickly’ вместо ‘fast’, пояснить критерии выбора (fabric, fit, color).
Ví dụ: It depends. At home I usually choose clothes quickly, but when I’m shopping I take my time to check the fabric, the fit and the color to make sure it suits me.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: В ответе логическая ошибка: вы дважды сказали ‘weekdays’ — второе должно быть ‘weekends’. Также структура OK, но лучше дать чёткое сравнение и конкретные примеры; избегайте противоречий. Исправьте слог и добавьте соединительное слово для плавности.
Ví dụ: Yes. On weekdays I wear more formal clothes for work, like a dress or a skirt with a blouse, while on weekends I prefer casual items such as pajamas or a loose T‑shirt.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Ответ оригинален, но вступление можно опустить. Полезно сократить и сделать фразы более естественными: ‘I prefer blue, black and white’ затем объяснить одну‑две ассоциации. Фраза ‘when something bad happens’ можно заменить на ‘for formal or serious occasions’.
Ví dụ: I prefer blue, black and white. For example, I often wear blue if I'm feeling down, black for more serious or formal occasions, and white in hot weather because it feels cooler.
× I love to wear casual clothes because if it's too tight or if it's too smart I will get uncomfortable.
✓ I love wearing casual clothes because if they are too tight or too smart I get uncomfortable.
The verb 'get' and modal construction 'will get' are awkward in general statements; use present simple 'get'. Also adjective 'smart' describes clothes so keep plural pronoun 'they' to match 'clothes'. Use 'wearing' for natural expression. (Explanation in Russian was requested but instructions later said English; providing English here as per higher priority.)
× If it's daily routine life, I will wear something casual and if it's something unusual or formal like a job interview, I will wear smart clothes.
✓ If it's part of my daily routine, I wear something casual, and if it's something unusual or formal, like a job interview, I wear smart clothes.
Use present simple for habitual actions rather than 'will'. Rephrase 'daily routine life' to 'part of my daily routine' for natural English. Keep consistent tense in both clauses. (Explanation in Russian was requested but instructions later said English; providing English here as per higher priority.)
× Yes, I love wearing T-shirts that are made of good clothes and also if they are loose, but if they are too tight I don't wear them because I feel uncomfortable.
✓ Yes, I love wearing T-shirts that are made of good fabric and that are loose, but if they are too tight I don't wear them because I feel uncomfortable.
Use 'fabric' instead of 'clothes' to describe material. Use relative clause 'that are' for clarity. Maintain plural pronoun 'they' to agree with 'T-shirts'. (Explanation in Russian was requested but instructions later said English; providing English here as per higher priority.)
× It depends where I am.
✓ It depends on where I am.
The verb phrase 'depend on' requires the preposition 'on'. Omit unnecessary words. (Explanation in Russian was requested but instructions later said English; providing English here as per higher priority.)
× However, if I'm in the shopping center I spend a lot of time when I choose because I need to choose good fabric.
✓ However, if I'm in a shopping center, I spend a lot of time choosing because I need to find good fabric.
Use gerund 'choosing' after 'spend time'. Use 'find' instead of second 'choose' for variety and clarity; add article 'a' before 'shopping center'. (Explanation in Russian was requested but instructions later said English; providing English here as per higher priority.)
× Also if it's loose or tight where I will wear it.
✓ Also, whether it will be loose or tight depends on where I will wear it.
Original fragment was incomplete and unclear. Recast sentence to include subject and verb and clarify meaning: 'depends on where I will wear it'. Use 'whether' to present alternatives. (Explanation in Russian was requested but instructions later said English; providing English here as per higher priority.)
× Yes I do. On weekdays I'm usually at work so I wear something formal like a dress or a skirt with a T-shirt. But on weekdays I'm often at home so I wear something casual like pajamas or loose T-shirt.
✓ Yes I do. On weekdays I'm usually at work, so I wear something formal, like a dress or a skirt with a blouse. But on weekends I'm often at home, so I wear something casual, like pajamas or a loose T-shirt.
The second sentence incorrectly repeats 'weekdays'; change to 'weekends' to contrast. Use 'blouse' instead of 'T-shirt' for more natural formal attire and add articles where needed ('a loose T-shirt'). (Explanation in Russian was requested but instructions later said English; providing English here as per higher priority.)
× So I prefer blue, black, and white colors.
✓ I prefer blue, black, and white.
Avoid redundant word 'colors' after listing color names. The list alone is sufficient. (Explanation in Russian was requested but instructions later said English; providing English here as per higher priority.)
× But I'm a superstitious person so I wear blue when I'm sad, I wear black when something bad happens, and I wear white when it's sunny or hot.
✓ Because I'm superstitious, I wear blue when I'm sad, black when something bad happens, and white when it's sunny or hot.
Begin with 'Because' for clearer causal connection and remove repeated subject 'I wear' to make the sentence more concise by using parallel structure. (Explanation in Russian was requested but instructions later said English; providing English here as per higher priority.)