Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
Uh is waiting to look is after summer and sometime is cold because he he he is uh, very, uh, fasting and umm using so comfortable and sweetly so I I love is very.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I have always smart smart clothes because he is of the uh, very nice, nice person and beautiful and young. So I smart, I smart dress up. So I smart sometime is after smart dress up in my body.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yes, always I've I waiting T-shirt because very comfortable and sweetly and nice. So I refer every every time is waiting T-shirt. So because he's of the sweet and nice person this T-shirt so sometime people is of the every every people.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
Yes, I take a lot of time while choosing A clotheslam one or so.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
Yes I'm using weekend and we summer because it's after baby and difficult dress and difficult person. But I have always I am using for simple simple dress because you're comfortable and suitable and like beautiful person.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
I love pink color because he's after sweet and cute people because will only person is after this person is of cute so I always like pink color.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Speak clearly and directly. Start with a simple topic sentence stating the kind of clothes you like, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid fillers and repetition. Keep to no more than 3–4 short sentences and use correct pronouns and verbs (e.g., “I like…”).
Ví dụ: I like wearing comfortable, casual clothes. For example, in summer I often wear loose cotton shirts because they are breathable and keep me cool. I also choose soft fabrics because they feel comfortable all day.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 18.0Gợi ý: Answer the question directly: state your preference first, then give a clear reason. Use linking words (because, although, so) and avoid repeating words. Use correct subject pronouns (I) and simple verb forms. Limit to 2–3 sentences.
Ví dụ: I prefer to wear smart clothes for special occasions because they make me feel confident and look neat. However, I wear casual clothes at home because they are more comfortable.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 22.0Gợi ý: Begin with a clear yes/no and a reason. Give a specific example when you wear T-shirts. Use correct word order and avoid unnecessary repetition. Keep sentences short and coherent, using linking words like because or so.
Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wash. For example, I usually wear a T-shirt and jeans when I go shopping or meet friends.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and explain why with a specific detail. Use coherent linking (because, so) and one or two supporting reasons. Avoid unclear words and keep grammar simple.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to pick outfits that match and look good. I often try on several items before deciding.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 24.0Gợi ý: Answer clearly whether styles differ, then give concrete examples for weekdays and weekends. Use linking words (for example, while) and avoid vague or unrelated phrases. Keep sentences concise and grammatically correct.
Ví dụ: Yes, I dress more formally on weekdays because I go to work, for example I wear shirts and trousers. On weekends I wear casual clothes like T-shirts and jeans because I want to relax.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: State the colour you like and give clear, specific reasons or associations. Use correct subject references (I) and linking words (because, so). One or two short supporting sentences are enough.
Ví dụ: I like pink because it looks bright and cheerful. For example, I often choose pink dresses or accessories when I want to appear friendly and warm.
× Uh is waiting to look is after summer and sometime is cold because he he he is uh, very, uh, fasting and umm using so comfortable and sweetly so I I love is very.
✓ I like wearing light clothes in summer and warmer clothes when it is cold because I prefer comfortable and soft clothing, so I love them very much.
The original sentence has multiple sentence structure and coherence issues (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Subjects, verbs, and objects are misplaced or repeated, and phrases like 'is waiting to look' and 'he he he' are meaningless. Rewrite the sentence with a clear subject ('I'), verbs ('like wearing', 'prefer'), and logical clauses. Use consistent tense and remove redundant words to improve clarity. Suggestion: Identify the main idea first (preference for comfortable clothes), then add conditions (in summer/when cold) and reasons, forming simple and compound sentences.
× I have always smart smart clothes because he is of the uh, very nice, nice person and beautiful and young.
✓ I have always worn smart clothes because I like to look nice, beautiful, and young.
The original mixes pronouns and tenses and incorrectly uses 'he' (wrong pronoun) and missing verb forms (Grammar Problem Type ID 2). Use the first person consistently ('I') and the correct verb form 'have worn' or 'have always worn'. Remove duplicated words. Use adjectives ('nice, beautiful, young') to describe appearance. Suggestion: Maintain consistent subject pronouns and proper verb forms for present perfect or simple present as appropriate.
× So I smart, I smart dress up. So I smart sometime is after smart dress up in my body.
✓ So I smartly dress up sometimes and wear smart clothes on some occasions.
This contains sentence structure and adverb/adjective misuse (Grammar Problem Type ID 26 and ID 13). 'I smart' is ungrammatical; 'smart' should be an adjective modifying 'clothes' or turned into the adverb 'smartly' if describing how one dresses. Clarify frequency with 'sometimes' and use natural collocations like 'dress up' or 'wear smart clothes.' Suggestion: Use adverbs to modify verbs and adjectives to modify nouns; place frequency adverbs before main verbs or after auxiliary verbs.
× Yes, always I've I waiting T-shirt because very comfortable and sweetly and nice.
✓ Yes, I always wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable and nice.
The phrase uses incorrect -ing form 'waiting' instead of 'wear' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8). Also subject-verb agreement and noun number are wrong ('T-shirt' vs 'T-shirts') and 'sweetly' is an incorrect adverb here; use adjective 'nice' to describe T-shirts. Use simple present for habitual actions: 'I always wear.' Suggestion: For habitual actions use simple present with correct verb form and plural nouns when referring to the category generally.
× So I refer every every time is waiting T-shirt. So because he's of the sweet and nice person this T-shirt so sometime people is of the every every people.
✓ So I prefer T-shirts all the time because they are sweet and nice; many people also like them.
Original sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and agreement ('he's', 'this T-shirt' referring incorrectly) and awkward repetition (Grammar Problem Type ID 12). Use 'they' for plural 'T-shirts' and 'many people' when referring generally. Replace 'refer' with 'prefer' and correct verb forms: 'prefer T-shirts all the time' and 'many people also like them.' Suggestion: Use plural pronoun 'they' for plural nouns and choose the correct verb ('prefer' not 'refer') to express preference.
× Yes, I take a lot of time while choosing A clotheslam one or so.
✓ Yes, I take a lot of time choosing clothes.
The original includes nonsensical words ('clotheslam') and unnecessary articles (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Simplify to a clear subject and verb: 'I take a lot of time choosing clothes.' Use 'choosing clothes' or 'choosing what to wear.' Suggestion: Remove extraneous words and use a common noun phrase: 'choosing clothes' or 'choosing what to wear.'
× Yes I'm using weekend and we summer because it's after baby and difficult dress and difficult person.
✓ Yes, I dress differently on weekends and in summer because some outfits are difficult to wear.
Original sentence misuses prepositions ('using weekend and we summer') and contains unclear phrases like 'after baby' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). Use 'on weekends' and 'in summer' for time expressions. Clarify the reason: 'some outfits are difficult to wear.' Suggestion: Use standard time prepositions: 'on' for days and 'in' for seasons; state clear reasons for differences in clothing choices.
× But I have always I am using for simple simple dress because you're comfortable and suitable and like beautiful person.
✓ But I always wear simple clothes because they are comfortable, suitable, and make me look nice.
This sentence mixes pronouns ('you're' incorrectly), tense and redundant words (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Use 'I always wear' and refer to clothes with 'they' or 'simple clothes.' Replace 'you're comfortable' with 'they are comfortable' and 'suitable' for 'appropriate.' Suggestion: Keep subject consistent and use plural pronouns for plural nouns; avoid repeating words.
× I love pink color because he's after sweet and cute people because will only person is after this person is of cute so I always like pink color.
✓ I love the color pink because it seems sweet and cute, so I always like pink.
Original sentence incorrectly uses 'he's' and awkward phrasing 'after sweet and cute people' (Grammar Problem Type ID 12). Use 'the color pink' as the subject and 'it seems sweet and cute.' Remove redundant clauses and correct word order. Use simple statement: 'I love the color pink because it seems sweet and cute.' Suggestion: Use 'the color pink' or 'pink' and describe it with adjectives; avoid misplaced pronouns and redundant phrases.