Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
Uh, as you can see, I often wear T-shirts because I fear T-shirt is made me feel comfortable and I can do sports or study at any time. And I also don't like suit because I think, uh, when I was in former occasion, I need to wear.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I prefer where you're comfortable clothes because casual clothes made me feel comfortable and smarter clothes may let people think you are straight person and I think wear casual clothes made people feel you are easy going.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yes, as you can see, I, I'm wearing T-shirts now. Uh, it made me feel relaxed and comfortable. Uh, I can wear it at any time and I think it's a good choice to anything.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
It depends on different situation. Uh, when I first meet someone like my teacher I will choose wear formal clothes but when I met my friends I I also wear T-shirts like casual clothes.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
Yes, on weekdays I need to study and I need to meet my teacher and students, so I wear formal clothes. But on weekend, uh, I can hang out with my friends and I can wear casual clothes, which made me.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
I like pink because my favorite character is Barbie and Barbie always wear pink everything right? And she will wear pink glasses, pink T-shirt, pink dress, pink skirt.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence stating your preference, then give two concise reasons using correct grammar. Avoid fillers and unclear words (e.g., "fear"). Use linking words like "because" and "so". Keep it within 2–4 sentences.
Ví dụ: I usually wear T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical. For example, I can exercise or study in them without feeling restricted. I avoid suits except for formal events because they feel stiff and uncomfortable.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear preference, then give 1–2 specific reasons with better grammar and linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Avoid awkward phrases ("where you're comfortable clothes", "straight person"). Use descriptive vocabulary like "professional" or "relaxed".
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed and free to move. Casual clothes also make me seem more approachable, while smart clothes can make me look formal and distant.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Give a concise yes/no first, then two clear reasons with correct tense and smoother phrasing. Remove fillers ("uh") and avoid vague statements like "good choice to anything"—be specific about situations.
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I'm wearing a T-shirt now because it makes me feel relaxed and comfortable. I also find T-shirts versatile for studying, exercising, or hanging out with friends.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Use a clear topic sentence ("It depends"), then give specific contrasting examples with correct verb forms and linking words ("for example", "whereas"). Avoid repetition and tense errors.
Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. For example, when I meet a teacher or attend a formal event I choose formal clothes, whereas when I meet friends I usually wear a T-shirt and jeans.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a clear comparison of weekdays vs weekends. Use correct plural/singular forms and complete your final clause. Keep sentences concise and use linking words such as "while" or "however".
Ví dụ: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart or semi-formal clothes because I have classes and meet teachers, while on weekends I prefer casual outfits so I can relax and hang out with friends.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement of preference, then give one specific reason and a brief example. Avoid rhetorical questions and repetitive listing—summarise instead. Use correct verb forms and articles.
Ví dụ: I like pink because my favorite character is Barbie, who always wears pink. For example, she often appears in pink dresses or accessories, and that cheerful colour appeals to me.
× Uh, as you can see, I often wear T-shirts because I fear T-shirt is made me feel comfortable and I can do sports or study at any time.
✓ Uh, as you can see, I often wear T-shirts because I feel T-shirts make me feel comfortable and I can do sports or study at any time.
The student used 'fear' instead of 'feel' (word choice) and 'T-shirt is made me feel' is incorrect structure. Use 'T-shirts make me feel' to show subject (T-shirts) cause the feeling. Also plural consistency: 'T-shirts' with 'make'. Grammar problem type ID:12
× And I also don't like suit because I think, uh, when I was in former occasion, I need to wear.
✓ And I also don't like suits because I think that when I am at formal occasions, I need to wear them.
Use plural 'suits' for general statements and 'formal occasions' instead of 'former occasion'. 'Need to wear' requires an object 'them' (referring to suits). Tense should be present for general truth: 'when I am'. Grammar problem type ID:12
× I prefer where you're comfortable clothes because casual clothes made me feel comfortable and smarter clothes may let people think you are straight person and I think wear casual clothes made people feel you are easy going.
✓ I prefer wearing comfortable clothes because casual clothes make me feel comfortable, and smarter clothes may make people think you are a serious person. I think wearing casual clothes makes people see you as easygoing.
Incorrect phrase 'where you're comfortable clothes' should be 'wearing comfortable clothes'. Use present tense 'make' for general truths. 'Smarter clothes' should be 'smarter clothes may make people think you are a serious person' and include article 'a'. Use gerund 'wearing' consistently and 'make people see you as' for clarity. Also 'easy going' -> 'easygoing'. Grammar problem type ID:14
× Yes, as you can see, I, I'm wearing T-shirts now. Uh, it made me feel relaxed and comfortable. Uh, I can wear it at any time and I think it's a good choice to anything.
✓ Yes, as you can see, I'm wearing a T-shirt now. It makes me feel relaxed and comfortable. I can wear it at any time and I think it's a good choice for anything.
Use singular 'a T-shirt' if referring to current item. Use present tense 'makes' for current effect, not past 'made'. 'Good choice for anything' uses preposition 'for' instead of 'to'. Grammar problem type ID:6
× It depends on different situation. Uh, when I first meet someone like my teacher I will choose wear formal clothes but when I met my friends I I also wear T-shirts like casual clothes.
✓ It depends on the situation. When I first meet someone like my teacher, I choose to wear formal clothes, but when I meet my friends, I wear T-shirts or casual clothes.
Use 'the situation' or 'a situation'. Maintain consistent present simple for habitual actions: 'choose to wear' and 'meet' not 'met'. Remove duplicated 'I'. Add commas for clarity and correct word order 'choose to wear'. Grammar problem type ID:26
× Yes, on weekdays I need to study and I need to meet my teacher and students, so I wear formal clothes. But on weekend, uh, I can hang out with my friends and I can wear casual clothes, which made me.
✓ Yes, on weekdays I need to study and I need to meet my teachers and students, so I wear formal clothes. But on weekends, I can hang out with my friends and wear casual clothes, which makes me happy.
Use plural 'teachers' for general reference. Use 'weekends' plural. Maintain present tense 'makes me' not 'made me'. Add object 'happy' or similar to complete the clause 'which makes me'. Grammar problem type ID:6
× I like pink because my favorite character is Barbie and Barbie always wear pink everything right? And she will wear pink glasses, pink T-shirt, pink dress, pink skirt.
✓ I like pink because my favorite character is Barbie and Barbie always wears pink things, right? She wears pink glasses, a pink T-shirt, a pink dress, and a pink skirt.
Subject-verb agreement: 'Barbie always wears' (third person singular needs -s). Use 'things' instead of 'everything' for clarity. Include articles 'a' with singular count nouns (a pink T-shirt). Use present simple 'wears' for habitual actions. Grammar problem type ID:1