Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, correct small grammar mistakes, avoid unnecessary fragments, and add one specific detail about why the outfit is preferred. Keep answers under five sentences and use a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and practical. For example, I usually wear white jeans and a T-shirt because they are easy to move in and simple to style. Also, I like shopping occasionally to find new casual pieces from my favorite brand, Zara.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence, reduce hesitations and filler words, and use clear linking words (for example/however). Provide specific examples of what you wear for each situation and why.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation: I wear comfortable sportswear for the gym because it allows free movement and quick drying. However, for job interviews I choose smart clothes, such as a shirt and blazer, to create a professional impression.

Gợi ý: Give a concise affirmative topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use precise vocabulary to explain reasons (e.g., fabric, fit). Add a linking word and a short comparison with another brand or general option.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely like wearing T-shirts, especially white ones from Zara because the fabric and fit are comfortable. In my experience, Zara T-shirts feel softer and last longer than cheaper high-street brands.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, remove unclear fragments, correct grammar (e.g., 'websites'), and give one specific detail about how you choose clothes online (filters, reviews). Use a linking word to explain reason.

Ví dụ: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually order online. For example, I use filters and read customer reviews to quickly find items I like from a few trusted websites.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence explaining the difference, remove hesitations, and give specific examples of weekend outfits. Use a linking word to contrast weekday and weekend styles.

Ví dụ: Yes. During weekdays I wear scrubs because I work as a veterinary technician, but on weekends I prefer casual outfits such as jeans and a nice top for hanging out with friends.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid vague phrases, and give a specific reason why you prefer white (e.g., matches other items, easy to style). Keep sentences concise and use a linking word to add one more detail.

Ví dụ: My favorite colour is white because it looks clean and elegant and matches many other items. For instance, I often wear white shirts and jeans since they are easy to style for different occasions.

× Also my favorite outfit it is jeans and T-shirt usually white.

✓ Also, my favorite outfit is usually white jeans and a T-shirt.

The original sentence has redundant subject 'it' and incorrect word order. Replace 'it is' with 'is' and reorder to 'usually white jeans and a T-shirt.' Also add articles for 'a T-shirt' to be grammatically correct and include a comma after 'Also.'

× 1 and I like go to the shopping.

✓ And I like to go shopping.

The verb requires the infinitive 'to go' or the gerund 'going.' 'Go to the shopping' is incorrect; use 'go shopping' or 'go to the shops.' Remove the stray '1' and use 'And' at sentence start.

× My favorite brand is.

✓ My favorite brand is Zara.

The sentence is incomplete; it lacks the name of the brand. Add the appropriate noun to complete the predicate. If the student meant Zara, include it: 'My favorite brand is Zara.'

× It depends on a situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

When referring to a specific situation in general sense, use the definite article 'the.' 'A situation' is unnatural here; 'the situation' is correct idiomatically.

× If I go to the gym, I will definitely put on support umm some sport where because I can move freely.

✓ If I go to the gym, I will definitely put on sportswear so I can move freely.

Pronoun and noun choice errors: 'support' is wrong; likely 'sportswear.' 'Some sport where' is a missegmented phrase. Use 'so' to show purpose. Remove filler 'umm.'

× But if I have some interview, job interview, I need to put some smart umm clothes, umm clothes to make a good impression.

✓ But if I have a job interview, I need to wear smart clothes to make a good impression.

Use article 'a' with 'job interview.' Use verb 'wear' rather than 'put.' Remove redundant 'some' and repeated 'clothes.' Eliminate fillers 'umm.'

× Yes I do definitely I like to wear white T-shirt especially Zara brand because of quality of materials and I find Zara brand for me is more comfortable than other I try.

✓ Yes, I do. Definitely I like to wear white T-shirts, especially the Zara brand, because of the quality of the materials, and I find Zara is more comfortable than others I have tried.

Several article and number issues: 'white T-shirt' should be plural 'white T-shirts' for general preference. Use 'the Zara brand' or simply 'Zara.' 'Quality of materials' needs 'the' and plural 'materials.' 'More comfortable than other I try' is ungrammatical; use 'others I have tried.' Add punctuation to separate clauses.

× Where is mine? Uh, definitely not.

✓ No, definitely not.

'Where is mine?' is irrelevant and likely an error. For the intended meaning 'I don't spend much time choosing clothes,' reply 'No, definitely not.' Remove filler 'Uh.'

× I try to save my time and I order all my clothes online.

✓ I try to save time and order all my clothes online.

'Save my time' is less natural than 'save time.' Also remove the repeated 'I' for smoother sentence flow; coordinate verbs with the same subject.

× I know couple different website which I like it.

✓ I know a couple of different websites that I like.

Missing article 'a' before 'couple,' 'website' should be plural 'websites,' and relative clause should be 'that I like' without the redundant 'it.' Use 'a couple of' idiomatically.

× Uh, because I work at the veterinarian technician and I work 5 * a week.

✓ Because I work as a veterinary technician, I work five days a week.

Use 'as a veterinary technician' not 'at the veterinarian technician.' Spell out 'five days a week' and use 'days.' Remove filler 'Uh.'

× I uh, wear scrubs, but on weekends I try to wear nicer outfit, for example some casual umm, clothes one minute and uh, for hanging out with my friend.

✓ I wear scrubs, but on weekends I try to wear nicer outfits, for example casual clothes for hanging out with my friends.

Use plural 'outfits' and 'friends' if speaking generally. Remove fillers 'uh' and 'umm.' 'Some casual clothes one minute' is unclear; simplify to 'for example casual clothes.' Use 'for hanging out with my friends.'

× As I mentioned before, my favorite color is white and usually I wear like white shirt, white jeans and I have a lot of white dresses because it seems clear, clean and looks always elegant.

✓ As I mentioned before, my favorite color is white, and usually I wear white shirts and white jeans, and I have a lot of white dresses because they look clean and elegant.

Use plural 'shirts' when speaking generally. Remove filler 'like.' Use 'they' to refer to dresses (plural). 'Seems clear, clean and looks always elegant' is awkward; change to 'look clean and elegant.' Add commas for clarity.