Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
I prefer to wear T-shirts and trousers because in summer the sunrise, the sun is very huge, so I need to pretend the extravagant and to save myself.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because, uh, it make me, it makes me, uh, feel relaxed and, uh, that, yeah, that's good.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yeah, actually, yes. T-shirts are almost made by cotton. It feel me comfortable. And it can.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
No, I don't. I spend time for choosing clothes. A little time, because that's not important for me.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
No I don't because I have no works or I'm not a student yet so I wear the similar clothes everyday.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
I prefer the simple color, just like white or black. That's make me uh, I don't want to spend my time to choosing for them, so just that it's OK.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答没有直接且清晰地回应问题的主旨,句子结构和用词有明显错误(如“sunrise”,“pretend the extravagant”),表达不自然且含混。应先给出主题句,然后用一到两句具体且相关的理由支持,使用恰当词汇描述季节和舒适性,避免无关或错误的短语。注意语法和搭配(e.g. ‘in summer’ 用法,‘sun is strong’),控制答案在3–4句内。
Ví dụ: I usually wear T-shirts and trousers. I find them comfortable and suitable for hot weather because they are lightweight and breathable. For example, cotton T-shirts help me stay cool when the sun is strong, and loose trousers allow easy movement.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答内容合乎方向但重复和语气词过多,语法有小错误(‘it make me’)。应直接陈述偏好,接着给出一到两个具体原因并用连接词使句子流畅,减少填充词,保持句子简洁自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed and move freely. For instance, soft fabrics like cotton reduce irritation and let me focus on my tasks.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 46.0Gợi ý: 回答简单且含语法错误(‘It feel me comfortable’),信息不完整(最后一句未完成)。应给出完整的主题句并用一到两句具体说明喜欢的原因和例子,注意主谓一致与词序。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are usually made of cotton and feel comfortable. For example, a cotton T-shirt keeps me cool on warm days and is easy to wash.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答意思清楚但表达稍显重复和不自然(‘I spend time for choosing clothes’)。应用更自然的短语和连贯句式,先直接回答再说明原因或程度,使用连接词使表述流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because it's not very important to me. I usually pick simple outfits quickly and focus on comfort.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答能传达基本意思但有语法和表达问题(‘I have no works’/‘I wear the similar clothes everyday’)。应先回答,然后用简洁准确的理由支持,注意可数名词、冠词和复数形式,句子不宜过长。
Ví dụ: No, I usually wear the same kind of clothes on weekdays and weekends because I don't have a formal job or school. So I prefer simple, comfortable outfits every day.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: 回答表达明确但语法和用词不当(‘the simple color’/‘That's make me’/‘spend my time to choosing’)。应直接说明颜色偏好并给出具体原因,用自然短语表达节省时间的想法,句子要连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer simple colors like white and black because they are easy to match and save me time when choosing outfits. For example, a black T-shirt goes well with almost any trousers.
× I prefer to wear T-shirts and trousers because in summer the sunrise, the sun is very huge, so I need to pretend the extravagant and to save myself.
✓ I prefer to wear T-shirts and trousers because in summer the sun is very strong, so I need to protect myself from it and avoid dressing extravagantly.
句子中时态总体为一般现在时,描述习惯和一般事实,但原句用词和短语不当(sunrise, the sun is very huge, pretend the extravagant, to save myself)导致意思不清。应使用一般现在时的正确表达:'the sun is very strong'(太阳强烈),'protect myself from it'(保护自己不受阳光伤害),以及 'avoid dressing extravagantly'(避免穿得过于奢华)。建议用更自然的短语表达原因。
× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because, uh, it make me, it makes me, uh, feel relaxed and, uh, that, yeah, that's good.
✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because it makes me feel relaxed.
主语 it 为第三人称单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 makes,而原句中出现 make(不加 s)是错误的。简化句子并去掉冗余语气词可以使表达更流畅。建议记住一般现在时第三人称单数加 -s 的规则。
× T-shirts are almost made by cotton. It feel me comfortable. And it can.
✓ T-shirts are mostly made of cotton. They make me feel comfortable.
原句存在形容词/副词使用错误和代词一致问题:'almost made by cotton' 用词不当,正确应为 'mostly made of cotton'(大部分由棉制成);'It feel me comfortable' 中 feel 用法错误且代词单复数不一致,应为 'They make me feel comfortable'。此外 'And it can.' 不完整,应删除或完整表述。建议学习常见搭配:made of, make someone feel + 形容词。
× No, I don't. I spend time for choosing clothes. A little time, because that's not important for me.
✓ No, I don't. I spend a little time choosing clothes, because that's not important to me.
原句中量词和介词使用不当:'spend time for choosing' 应为 'spend time choosing' 或 'spend a little time (on) choosing clothes';'A little time' 单独作为句子不自然,应并入前句。'important for me' 更常见的搭配是 'important to me'。建议学习动词 spend 的固定结构 'spend time (doing something)' 和介词搭配。
× No I don't because I have no works or I'm not a student yet so I wear the similar clothes everyday.
✓ No, I don't, because I have no work or I'm not a student yet, so I wear similar clothes every day.
句子主要为一般现在时,问题在于名词和副词使用:'works' 用法错误,应为不可数名词 'work';'the similar clothes' 中定冠词不必要,应为 'similar clothes';'everyday' 被当作形容词使用,正确表达频率应为副词短语 'every day'。这些属于时态相关语法习惯和词类选择错误。建议注意可数/不可数名词和 'everyday' vs 'every day' 的区别。
× I prefer the simple color, just like white or black. That's make me uh, I don't want to spend my time to choosing for them, so just that it's OK.
✓ I prefer simple colors, like white or black. That makes me not want to spend time choosing them, so that's OK.
原句中形容词/副词及结构使用不当:'the simple color' 应为复数 'simple colors' 或 'a simple color';'That's make me' 主谓不一致,应为 'That makes me';'spend my time to choosing for them' 错误,正确为 'spend time choosing them' 或 'spend my time on choosing clothes'。建议掌握常见搭配:prefer + noun (plural),make + object + adjective/verb-ing,以及 spend time doing sth 的结构。