Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid unclear words and repetition, and give one specific reason or example. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer simple, casual clothes such as shirts, trousers and sneakers. They are comfortable and practical for everyday activities. For example, I usually wear a cotton shirt and jeans when I meet friends because they are easy to move in and look neat.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and unclear vocabulary. Give a direct answer, one clear reason, and a brief example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because I work long hours and need to feel relaxed. For example, I usually wear loose trousers and a breathable shirt at work because they help me stay comfortable throughout the day.

Gợi ý: Be consistent and avoid hesitation sounds. Clarify whether you prefer shirts or T‑shirts and give a concise reason and example. Use linking words like 'however' or 'for example' correctly.

Ví dụ: I prefer wearing shirts to T‑shirts because shirts look a bit smarter while still being comfortable. For example, I often choose a loose blue shirt for work since it is both presentable and easy to wear for long shifts.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and reduce fillers. Say clearly when you spend more time and why. Use a linking word to contrast everyday and special occasions, and give a specific example of what you choose for parties.

Ví dụ: I don't spend much time choosing clothes for work; I usually wear a simple abaya with a loose shirt because it is comfortable. However, for festivals or parties I spend more time selecting outfits, for example I might try different dresses and accessories to match the occasion.

Gợi ý: Make a clear comparison between weekdays and weekends. Start with a topic sentence that states the difference, then give one specific example for each and use a linking word like 'whereas' or 'but'.

Ví dụ: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear an abaya with a loose shirt because it is comfortable for long work hours, whereas at weekends I prefer T‑shirts and jeans for a more relaxed look.

Gợi ý: Good content and clear contrast. Improve by using precise vocabulary and one linking phrase. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences) and give a brief reason for each preference.

Ví dụ: It depends on the occasion. In summer I prefer light colours like pale blue, light green and light grey because they feel cool and energetic, whereas for parties I choose bright colours to look festive and stand out.

× I like to wear the simple and caveat Lords like shirt, trousers and sneakers.

✓ I like to wear simple and casual clothes such as shirts, trousers, and sneakers.

The original uses incorrect adjectives ('caveat Lords like') and an awkward structure. Replace with 'simple and casual clothes' and list items in plural for general preference. Use commas correctly. Suggestion: learn common adjectives and collocations for clothing (simple, casual).

× I think they are comfortable and easy to wear every day.

✓ I think they are comfortable and easy to wear every day.

Pronoun 'they' correctly refers to 'clothes'. No grammatical change needed. Keep plural agreement. (Included for completeness.)

× It's simple and good for hanging out with friends and family.

✓ They are simple and good for hanging out with friends and family.

Subject mismatch: 'It' refers to singular but the speaker talks about clothes (plural). Change to 'They are'. Ensure subject-verb agreement for plural subjects.

× I like to prefer the comfortable and Kelvin clothes all the time.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes all the time.

Redundant combination 'like to prefer' is incorrect; use either 'I like' or 'I prefer'. 'Kelvin' is incorrect here (likely a mistranscription); remove or replace with 'casual' if intended. Use simple present for habitual preference.

× I think they are comfortable and easy to get everyday and it's good for hanging out with friends and family and if I work for long hours then I then I am where these types of work they make me feel comfortable.

✓ I think they are comfortable and easy to wear every day, and they are good for hanging out with friends and family. If I work long hours, these clothes make me feel comfortable.

Multiple issues: 'easy to get' should be 'easy to wear'; 'everyday' as adverb is 'every day'; repetition 'then I then I am where' is incorrect and unclear. Split into two sentences for clarity and correct verb forms. Use conditional 'If I work long hours' and correct subject-reference 'these clothes'.

× I like to wear shirts rather than T-shirts and, uh, because the T uh, shirts, uh, make me feel more comfortable and easy.

✓ I prefer wearing shirts rather than T-shirts because shirts make me feel more comfortable and relaxed.

Avoid redundant 'and...because' structure; choose 'prefer' + gerund or 'like to wear'. 'Easy' is not the right adjective for comfort here; use 'relaxed' or 'comfortable'. Remove filler sounds.

× Uh, the shirts like uh, blue shirt and baggy shirts that make me feel so easy.

✓ For example, blue shirts and baggy shirts make me feel very comfortable.

Use plural 'blue shirts' not 'blue shirt' when speaking generally. 'Feel so easy' is unidiomatic; use 'feel very comfortable'. Add 'for example' to clarify pattern.

× And if I were work for so long or then I can easily work with these type of clothes.

✓ If I work for a long time, I can easily work in these types of clothes.

Incorrect subjunctive 'were work' should be simple present 'work' for a real condition. Use 'a long time' and plural 'types of clothes'. Maintain modal 'can' with base verb 'work'.

× Note all of the time, uh, when I go to my job, I like to wear the simple and comfortable clothes such as abaya under any loose shirt or T-shirt.

✓ Not all the time, but when I go to my job, I like to wear simple, comfortable clothing such as an abaya under a loose shirt or T-shirt.

'Note all of the time' should be 'Not all the time'. Use 'clothing' or 'clothes' and include articles 'an abaya' and 'a loose shirt'. Use commas for coordinate adjectives.

× But however, when I'm going to festival or parties, I like to choose the, uh, I uh, spend lot of time to choosing the clothes, uh, that make me.

✓ However, when I go to festivals or parties, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes that suit me.

'But however' is redundant; use one linking word. Use 'go to festivals or parties' and 'spend a lot of time choosing' (no 'to' before choosing). Complete the clause 'that suit me' rather than leaving it unfinished.

× In weekdays I like to wear abaya under any loose shirt or AT shirt that make me feel comfortable and easy for long hours and however I like T-shirt.

✓ On weekdays I like to wear an abaya under a loose shirt or T-shirt that makes me feel comfortable for long hours; however, I also like T-shirts.

Use 'On weekdays' (preposition), 'an abaya' (article), and ensure subject-verb agreement 'that makes'. 'AT shirt' seems incorrect—use 'T-shirt'. Clarify 'also like T-shirts'.

× Actually depends. In summer I like to wear the light colours such as light blue, light green, light grey colour etc that make me feel so comfortable and full of energy.

✓ It actually depends. In summer I like to wear light colours such as light blue, light green, and light grey because they make me feel comfortable and full of energy.

'Actually depends' needs a subject 'It'. Use plural 'light colours' and list items with commas. Avoid repeating 'colour' and use 'because they make me' to connect cause. Remove 'so' for formality.

× However, at the time of parties or festival I used to wear the bright colours.

✓ However, for parties or festivals I usually wear bright colours.

'Used to wear' implies a past habit; if describing current habit, use 'usually wear'. Also plural 'festivals' and omit 'the' before 'bright colours'.