Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix subject-verb and article errors.

Ví dụ: I prefer wearing sportswear because I enjoy exercising. For example, I often wear breathable leggings and a moisture-wicking top since they are comfortable and convenient if I decide to work out later.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and smoother linking. Remove filler words and correct small errors. Use linking phrase to explain the condition and include a brief example.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer comfortable, casual clothes, but it depends on the occasion. For instance, if I'm going to a party with friends I choose smarter outfits like a blazer and chinos to look more presentable.

Gợi ý: Give one clear sentence stating your opinion, then add a specific reason with correct grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words and give a concrete example of when you wear T-shirts.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I often wear a plain T-shirt with jeans when meeting friends or running errands because it matches many different outfits.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to explain reasons and give a concrete strategy you use to pick clothes to show coherence and specificity.

Ví dụ: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer a simple wardrobe. For example, I pick neutral-coloured pieces that are comfortable and easy to mix and match, so getting dressed only takes a few minutes.

Gợi ý: Organise the answer with a clear contrast and fix confusing wording. Use linking words (however, while) and give specific examples of weekday versus weekend outfits. Keep it concise within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, my style differs between weekdays and weekends. During weekdays I wear casual gym clothes or smart-casual outfits for work; however, on weekends I often dress up more for social events, such as wearing a dress or a nice shirt and trousers.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement of preference, use correct adjectives and reduce redundancy. Explain why briefly with a specific example of how colours affect your mood or match activities.

Ví dụ: I prefer light colours like pale blue, soft pink and light gray because they make me feel calm. For example, I often choose a light-blue shirt for work since it helps me feel relaxed and focused throughout the day.

× I love workout so I usually wear sports clothes in for convenient if I want to work out and even in I am not going to work out.

✓ I love working out so I usually wear sports clothes for convenience whether I am going to work out or not.

Use the gerund 'working out' after 'love' (verb + -ing). 'For convenience' is the correct phrase, not 'in for convenient'. Also use 'whether...or not' for the contrast instead of the incorrect 'and even in I am not going to work out'.

× I still wear sports clothes because it feel comfortable and casual.

✓ I still wear sports clothes because they feel comfortable and casual.

Pronoun 'it' is incorrect for plural 'sports clothes'; use 'they'. 'Feel' must agree with plural subject. 'Comfortable and casual' are adjectives correctly placed.

× Well usually I prefer well comfortable and casual clothes, but it also depends on the situation I'm in.

✓ Well, usually I prefer comfortable and casual clothes, but it also depends on the situation I'm in.

Remove redundant 'well' before 'comfortable' and add a comma after 'Well'. The tense is present and correct; the issue was word choice and sentence fluency.

× If I need to go for go to a party with my friends or hang out with my friends, I usually wear smart clothes.

✓ If I need to go to a party with my friends or hang out with them, I usually wear smart clothes.

Use 'go to a party' not 'go for go to a party'. Avoid repeating 'with my friends' twice; replace the second with 'them'. These are preposition and redundancy corrections.

× Yes I love T-shirts because the T-shirt very comfortable and casual.

✓ Yes, I love T-shirts because they are very comfortable and casual.

Use plural pronoun 'they' for 'T-shirts' and include the verb 'are'. Add comma after 'Yes'. 'Very' modifies adjective 'comfortable'.

× I like the casual style clothes especially T-shirt.

✓ I like casual-style clothes, especially T-shirts.

Hyphenate 'casual-style' as a compound adjective before 'clothes', add comma before 'especially', and use plural 'T-shirts' to match general preference.

× I think it's also a good think match every every others other clues.

✓ I think it's also a good thing that matches other clothes.

Original has many errors: 'think' should be 'thing', remove duplicate words, 'matches' must agree with singular 'thing', and 'other clothes' is the likely intended phrase instead of 'others other clues'.

× Well, you really I I will not spend a long time to choosing clothes because it's not fit my casual personality.

✓ Well, I really will not spend a long time choosing clothes because it doesn't fit my casual personality.

Remove extra 'you' and duplicate 'I'. Use gerund 'choosing' after 'spend a long time'. 'Doesn't fit' is the correct negative with 'it' referring to 'spending time' or 'the idea'—better: 'because it doesn't fit my casual personality'.

× I usually choose suitable and comfortable and casual clothes and usually choose the one can match other clothes easily.

✓ I usually choose suitable, comfortable, casual clothes and pick items that can match other clothes easily.

Avoid repeating 'usually' and use commas between adjectives. 'Pick items that can match' is clearer than 'choose the one can match'—add relative pronoun 'that'.

× I do wear different styles of clothes and weekly day and weekends because during weekdays I usually go to the gym house after work and I usually whisper clothes during weekdays, but on weekday I usually need to participate some party so I wear smart clothes.

✓ I do wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends because during weekdays I usually go to the gym after work and I usually wear sports clothes, but sometimes I need to attend a party so I wear smart clothes.

Correct 'weekly day' to 'weekdays', 'gym house' to 'gym', 'whisper clothes' to 'wear sports clothes'. Use 'attend a party' rather than 'participate some party'. Maintain present tense consistency and improve clarity.

× I prefer the light color low clothes such as light blue, light pink or light red or light yellow or light Gray because the light color low clothes can give me a comfortable mood and it will make me feel relaxed.

✓ I prefer light-colored clothes such as light blue, light pink, light red, light yellow, or light gray because they give me a comfortable mood and make me feel relaxed.

Use the adjective 'light-colored' and commas between listed colors. 'Gray' should be lowercase. Replace repetitive 'the light color low clothes' with 'light-colored clothes' and use plural pronoun 'they' to agree with 'clothes'. Remove unnecessary 'it will'.