Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., “comfortable” and “comfy”) and fix word order and articles.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable clothes rather than fashionable ones. For example, on weekdays I usually wear simple T-shirts to feel relaxed in class, but at weekends I choose trendier outfits when I go out with friends.

Gợi ý: Answer directly then give a clear reason. Correct repetition and grammar (e.g., "we we" and "so com a professional"). Use one linking word to contrast choices and give a specific example of required attire.

Ví dụ: I generally prefer comfortable clothes, but because I'm doing an internship I have to wear smart casual. For instance, I usually wear a white shirt and black trousers at the workplace to look more professional.

Gợi ý: Be consistent and avoid contradictory phrasing. Start with a clear preference, then give a specific reason and one example. Remove filler words like "well" and avoid vague phrases such as "quite more."

Ví dụ: I don't usually choose T-shirts when I go out because I prefer fashionable dresses or smart shirts. However, I do wear T-shirts at home or for quick errands since they are more comfortable.

Gợi ý: Give a concise direct answer with one specific reason and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like "because" and correct verb forms (e.g., "grab" not "to grab").

Ví dụ: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I have early morning classes. I usually grab a T-shirt and simple trousers so I can get ready quickly and stay comfortable.

Gợi ý: Give a direct contrast using a linking word like "but" or "whereas." Remove hesitation and unnecessary details (e.g., "makeup," "food pic"). Be specific about the styles you choose on each occasion.

Ví dụ: Yes. At work I wear smart casual, such as a blouse and tailored trousers, whereas at the weekend I prefer fashionable and more comfortable outfits like a dress or stylish jeans when I meet friends.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use correct article and plural forms ("black and white," "bright-coloured clothes"). Provide one clear example of when you wear neutral versus bright colours and avoid awkward phrasing.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer neutral colours like black and white, especially for work when I wear a white shirt and black trousers. However, I sometimes wear bright-coloured clothes for casual outings or when I'm with friends.

× In fact, I prefer to wear comfortable over fashionable.

✓ In fact, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes rather than fashionable ones.

The original sentence omits a noun after the adjectives and uses 'over' awkwardly. Use 'comfortable clothes rather than fashionable ones' to compare two types of clothing correctly and include the noun 'clothes' and the pronoun 'ones' for the second item.

× So basically during weekdays I would grab some simple T-shirts only to wear on that make me more com comfy to attend classes.

✓ So basically during weekdays I usually grab simple T-shirts that make me more comfortable to attend classes.

The original has word order and extra words ('only', 'on', 'com comfy') that break the sentence. Replace 'would' with 'usually' for habitual action, remove unnecessary words, use 'that make me more comfortable' to modify T-shirts correctly.

× However, during weekend when I hang out with friends, I would rather wear more fashionable.

✓ However, during the weekend when I hang out with friends, I would rather wear more fashionable clothes.

Missing noun after 'more fashionable' and missing article 'the' before 'weekend'. Add 'clothes' to complete the comparison and 'the' to refer to weekends in general.

× Well, frankly speaking, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes as mentioned earlier. However, for now I'm on internship.

✓ Well, frankly speaking, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes as mentioned earlier. However, at the moment I'm doing an internship.

Use 'at the moment' or 'right now' and the verb phrase 'doing an internship' or 'on an internship' is less common; use 'doing an internship' and include the article 'an'.

× That's why we we need to wear smart casual with white shirt and black trousers which makes me look so com a professional.

✓ That's why we need to wear smart-casual outfits with a white shirt and black trousers, which make me look professional.

Duplicate 'we', missing hyphen in 'smart-casual', missing articles 'a' before 'white shirt', subject-verb agreement in the relative clause ('make' to agree with 'outfits'), and remove extra words 'so com a' which are incorrect.

× Well personally I tend to wear fashionable dresses and some smart casual of the shirt when I hang out with my friends.

✓ Well, personally I tend to wear fashionable dresses and some smart-casual shirts when I hang out with my friends.

'Smart casual of the shirt' is ungrammatical. Use 'smart-casual shirts' with hyphen and plural noun to match 'dresses'. Add commas for clarity.

× However I do know T-shirt is quite more comfortable and comfy.

✓ However, I do know T-shirts are much more comfortable and cozy.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general statements and correct comparative 'much more comfortable' rather than 'quite more'. Use one adjective ('cozy') instead of redundant 'comfortable and comfy'. Add comma after 'However'.

× I can randomly grab to wear on but I do think it's so dull and simple with.

✓ I can randomly grab one to wear, but I think it's too dull and simple.

Remove unnecessary 'to wear on' and trailing 'with'. Use 'grab one' to refer to a T-shirt, and 'too dull and simple' is clearer than 'so dull and simple'.

× I don't spend too much time choosing clothes obviously I have early morning classes weekly so I just randomly to grab some T-shirts that could fit my outfit daily and I can wear more comfortable to attend classes.

✓ I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I have early morning classes every week, so I just randomly grab T-shirts that fit my daily outfits and let me be more comfortable attending classes.

Run-on sentence; missing conjunction 'because' to explain reason. Remove 'to' after 'randomly', change 'could fit' to 'fit' for habitual action, and rephrase end for natural expression 'let me be more comfortable attending classes'.

× Well, as mentioned earlier, I would wear smart casual at workplace. Unlike doing work I would I tend to wear fashionable and more comfortable that can fit on my makeup as I can hang out with my friends to take some uh, pretty food pic pretty pictures to have fun.

✓ Well, as mentioned earlier, I wear smart-casual at the workplace. When I'm not working, I tend to wear more fashionable and comfortable clothes that suit my makeup when I hang out with my friends to take pretty food pictures and have fun.

Use simple present 'wear' for habitual actions. 'Unlike doing work' is awkward; use 'When I'm not working'. Remove duplicate 'I would I'. 'More fashionable and comfortable' should be followed by 'clothes'. 'Fit on my makeup' is incorrect — use 'suit my makeup'. Clean up filler words and repetition.

× Well, I usually prefer to wear some neutral color clothes such as black and whites.

✓ Well, I usually prefer to wear neutral-colored clothes such as black and white.

Use 'neutral-colored' and singular 'white' in 'black and white'. Avoid 'some' which is unnecessary here. 'Whites' as a noun is incorrect in this context.

× At what place I wear smart casual like a white shirt and black trousers.

✓ When I need to wear smart-casual, I wear a white shirt and black trousers.

Original has incorrect word order and 'At what place' is wrong. Use 'When I need to wear smart-casual' or 'At work' and correct articles 'a white shirt'.

× However, I would leave some bright colours clothes that I have now with my friends or some other casual occasions.

✓ However, I save some bright-colored clothes for wearing when I go out with my friends or on other casual occasions.

'Leave' is wrong verb here; use 'save' or 'reserve'. 'Bright colours clothes' needs hyphen 'bright-colored clothes' or 'bright-colored clothes', and 'that I have now with my friends' is unclear — rephrase to specify occasion. Use 'for wearing when I go out with my friends' for clarity.