Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples with linking words. Avoid unnecessary words and fix tense/word order mistakes.

Ví dụ: It depends on the occasion. For everyday activities I usually wear casual clothes such as sportswear or jeans because they are comfortable. However, if I have a meeting or a presentation, I prefer to wear a suit to look professional and confident.

Gợi ý: Clarify your meaning and avoid contradictory statements. Use linking words to contrast and give a short reason. Correct word choice (e.g., 'comfortable' not 'uncomfortable').

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable clothes like sportswear and sneakers because they allow me to move freely. In contrast, smart clothes can feel restrictive and formal, so I only wear them for special occasions.

Gợi ý: Reduce filler words and unclear phrases. Give specific reasons and link them logically. Fix awkward expressions like 'small limitation about my motivation.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. I'm wearing a black one right now. They are comfortable, lightweight and ideal for exercise, so I can move easily and perform better when I work out.

Gợi ý: Make your point directly and use clear examples. Fix grammar and awkward phrases; use linking words to support your reason.

Ví dụ: No, I don't. Spending too much time choosing clothes makes me feel tired because most days the outfit doesn't matter. For instance, if I'm just going out to eat or attend a class, I usually grab something simple and comfortable.

Gợi ý: Organize answer clearly: topic sentence, contrast with linking word, and give specific examples. Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'trousers', 'casual', 'dress up') and remove repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear casual clothes such as T-shirts and jeans because I go to classes. On weekends, when I go to parties or bars, I tend to dress up a bit and choose smarter or more fashionable outfits.

Gợi ý: Be specific and avoid contradictions (dark clothes like white is confusing). Use linking words and give clear reasons for colour choices related to mood or occasion.

Ví dụ: It depends on the occasion and my mood. For formal meetings I usually choose dark or neutral colours such as navy or black because they look professional. When I feel relaxed or the weather is warm, I prefer lighter colours like white or pastel shades.

× This question that all depends the place or the event I have to attend.

✓ This depends on the place or the event I have to attend.

Original sentence has extra words and incorrect word order ('This question that all depends the place'). Use correct sentence structure: subject 'This' + verb 'depends' + prepositional phrase 'on the place or the event'. Remove unnecessary words for clarity.

× in my daily life I like to wear some casual clothes, it's like my sports clothes or trousers.

✓ In my daily life I like to wear casual clothes, such as sportswear or trousers.

Use uncountable or plural form correctly: 'casual clothes' is fine without 'some' here; 'it's like' is incorrect for examples—use 'such as' and 'sportswear' instead of 'my sports clothes'. Also start sentence with capital letter.

× But when I need to go to some meeting or I have to do the presentation, maybe I will choose the suit for my clothes Saturday.

✓ But when I need to attend a meeting or give a presentation, I will choose to wear a suit.

Original mixes phrases and contains an irrelevant word 'Saturday'. Use correct verbs: 'attend a meeting', 'give a presentation', and the phrase 'choose to wear a suit' for clarity.

× They could help to make me feel uncomfortable, help me to make me feel I'm the person, I'm the object.

✓ They help me feel comfortable and confident.

Original uses contradictory 'uncomfortable' and repetitive phrases. Pronoun and verb usage are incorrect. Simplify to a clear subject-verb-object: 'They help me feel comfortable and confident.' Avoid unnecessary repetition.

× That's the clothes serve.

✓ Those clothes serve that purpose.

Incorrect demonstrative and noun agreement and awkward word order. Use 'Those clothes' (plural) and 'serve that purpose' to express meaning clearly.

× Instead of smart clothes, I have to serve them.

✓ Instead of smart clothes, I would feel I have to serve them.

Meaning unclear and verbs misused. If intention is feeling forced by smart clothes, say 'I would feel I have to serve them' or better: 'In smart clothes, I would feel like I am serving others.' Ensure pronouns refer clearly.

× For example, I'm now I'm wearing my T-shirt, it's a black T-shirt.

✓ For example, I'm wearing a black T-shirt now.

Remove duplicate 'I'm' and combine clauses into natural word order: subject + verb + object + time. Use article 'a' with 'black T-shirt'.

× Uh, the reason I love them because they are really comfortable and to relax.

✓ I love them because they are really comfortable and relaxing.

'The reason I love them because' is ungrammatical; use 'I love them because'. Use adjective 'relaxing' to modify T-shirts, not infinitive 'to relax'.

× Also they are really lightweight, so it will give me a small limitation about my motivation.

✓ Also they are really lightweight, so they don't limit my movement or motivation.

Pronoun 'it' mismatches plural subject; 'limitation about my motivation' is awkward. Clarify idea: lightweight clothes don't limit movement or motivation.

× For example, when I exercise or do anything else, they could let me do the best.

✓ For example, when I exercise or do other activities, they help me perform my best.

Use correct verb collocations: 'perform my best' or 'do my best'. 'Could let me do the best' is unidiomatic; replace with 'help me perform my best'.

× No, I think if I spend too much time on choosing clothes, I would feel exhausted because sometimes the outfit is not so important, especially in their life.

✓ No. I think if I spend too much time choosing clothes, I will feel exhausted because sometimes the outfit is not very important, especially in life.

Use consistent present/future conditional: 'if I spend... I will feel'. Remove unnecessary preposition 'on' after 'time' and incorrect pronoun 'their' which should be general 'life'.

× For example, if you want to get out to have it, if you want to eat outside, the clothes is not too much important.

✓ For example, if you want to go out to eat, clothes are not that important.

Streamline and correct verbs: 'go out to eat'. Subject-verb agreement: 'clothes are' (plural). Remove redundant phrases.

× In weekdays I usually live in my dormitory.

✓ On weekdays I usually live in my dormitory.

Use correct preposition 'on' with 'weekdays'.

× so I'll choose some careful clothes like T-shirt and trotters or jeans bought on weekday weekends, where sometimes I need to go to the bar or some parties I will choose more beautiful clothes I like or stay away.

✓ So I'll choose casual clothes like T-shirts and trousers or jeans on weekdays; on weekends, when I sometimes go to a bar or a party, I choose nicer clothes.

Many errors: 'careful clothes' wrong word—use 'casual'; 'trotters' should be 'trousers'; awkward phrase 'jeans bought on weekday weekends' fixed by separating weekdays/weekends; improve sentence flow and word choice.

× Well that depends the weather and for example when I feel upset or I feel calm or I need to attend some formal formal attendance such as some meetings, I will choose the dark clothes like white like outfit but when I feel relaxed I will choose lighter color.

✓ Well, that depends on the weather and my mood. For example, when I feel upset, calm, or need to attend a formal meeting, I choose dark clothes; when I feel relaxed, I choose lighter colors.

Use 'depends on' with preposition. Remove repetition 'formal formal attendance' and incorrect 'dark clothes like white like outfit'. Correct plural 'colors'. Simplify and separate ideas with punctuation for clarity.