Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then add one or two specific supporting details (types of clothes, occasions, or fabrics). Reduce hesitations and repetition. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I usually wear comfortable, casual clothes because I value ease and practicality. For example, I often choose jeans and a soft sweater for work and simple cotton shirts at home, as they let me move freely and feel relaxed.

Gợi ý: Give a clear reason and one short example. Avoid repeating the same idea and reduce hesitations. Use a linking word like "because" to explain why and "for example" for illustration.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I find them more practical and less stressful. For example, I often wear chinos and a polo shirt to work when I don't have meetings, since they look neat but still feel relaxed.

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct the reasoning: explain why you avoid T-shirts with specific, relevant reasons (fit, style, dress code) rather than vague phrases. Use one linking phrase like "because" and avoid self-deprecating comments. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I don't usually wear T-shirts to the office because our dress code is more formal and T-shirts can look too casual. Also, I prefer tops that fit well and flatter my shape, such as button shirts or blouses.

Gợi ý: Provide a concise, coherent answer with one reason and an example. Avoid contradictions (saying you don't like to buy clothes and also don't like to wear clothes). Use linking words like "so" or "because."

Ví dụ: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I buy only a few basic items each year. For instance, when I need something new I pick a simple shirt and wear it for months rather than shopping often.

Gợi ý: Answer directly then give a brief, specific explanation about routines or occasions. Avoid unnecessary repetition and long uncertain phrases. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect your reason.

Ví dụ: No, I usually wear the same style on weekdays and weekends because I prefer simple, low-maintenance outfits. For example, I often wear jeans and a sweater both at work and on days off.

Gợi ý: State your preference briefly, then give one clear reason and an example. Avoid filler phrases and hesitations. Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

Ví dụ: I prefer black and white clothing because they are simple and understated. For example, I often wear a black coat or a white shirt since these colours are easy to match and don't attract too much attention.

× Actually I don't, I don't mind any kind of clothes, I just wear what I have.

✓ Actually I don't mind; I wear whatever I have.

The original has an extra pronoun-like repetition 'I don't,' which is unnecessary and causes confusion. Also 'any kind of clothes' is acceptable but 'whatever I have' is more natural. Suggest removing the redundant phrase and combining clauses clearly.

× MMM maybe everyone has different like outfits so I usually just where I where I feel comfortable.

✓ Maybe everyone has different outfits, so I usually just wear what I feel comfortable in.

The sentence has misspelling 'where' instead of 'wear' and incorrect structure 'feel comfortable' needs the preposition 'in'. Also 'different like outfits' is ungrammatical; use 'different outfits'. Suggest correcting verb spelling and adding the preposition.

× MMM I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes.

No major article error but punctuation and word order improve clarity. Use a comma between adjectives. Sentence is otherwise grammatical; this correction improves naturalness.

× I don't care others how they look at me, I just won't feel comfortable for myself.

✓ I don't care what others think of me; I just won't feel comfortable.

Incorrect pronoun and word order: 'I don't care others how they look at me' should be 'I don't care what others think of me'. 'Feel comfortable for myself' is unnatural; use 'feel comfortable'. Suggest using correct indirect question structure 'what others think of'.

× MMM I'm not a person like relying on other people actually.

✓ I'm not the kind of person who relies on other people.

Use relative clause 'the kind of person who relies' rather than 'a person like relying'. Correct verb form 'relies' for third person singular and appropriate structure for describing habits.

× I'd actually I don't like to wear T-shirts because I think my office is not that good.

✓ Actually, I don't like to wear T-shirts because I don't think they suit me in my office.

Original 'I'd actually I don't' is fragmented. 'My office is not that good' is unclear; likely speaker means 'they do not look appropriate for my office' or 'they don't suit me at work'. Restructure to clarify meaning and remove redundant fragments.

× Maybe when people look at me they will think I am fat, I'm a little heavy.

✓ Maybe when people look at me they will think I am fat; I'm a little heavy.

This sentence mainly needs punctuation correction. Subject-verb agreement is fine. Use a semicolon or conjunction to join related clauses. Keep tense consistent.

× Maybe it will like to show my drawback of my outfit.

✓ Maybe it will show the flaws of my outfit.

'It will like to show' is incorrect; use 'it will show'. 'Drawback of my outfit' is unnatural; 'flaws of my outfit' or 'the outfit's flaws' is better. Simplify structure and remove 'like'.

× Actually not. I don't like to buy clothes.

✓ Actually, no. I don't like buying clothes.

Use gerund 'buying' to express general preference. 'Actually not' is colloquial; 'Actually, no' is clearer. Maintain present simple to express habitual dislike.

× I don't know why I maybe I'm not. Umm, I'm not. I'm not always focusing on buying clothes.

✓ I don't know why; maybe I'm just not. I'm not always focused on buying clothes.

The original is fragmented and repetitive. Use 'focused on' rather than 'focusing on' for state. Combine fragments into clearer sentences and remove hesitations.

× I don't like to wear clothes.

✓ I don't like buying clothes.

Saying 'I don't like to wear clothes' contradicts earlier statements; likely intended 'buy clothes'. Use correct verb to match meaning. If the speaker truly meant wearing, clarify context.

× No, actually not. I rarely buy clothes.

✓ No, actually not. I rarely buy clothes.

Sentence is correct; provided to confirm no change needed. Rarity of purchase is expressed correctly with plural 'clothes'.

× Maybe if I buy clothes, maybe I will wear it for at least two years and maybe during the these two years I will not will wear more than four kinds of clothes.

✓ If I buy clothes, I will wear them for at least two years, and during those two years I will not wear more than four different outfits.

Pronoun agreement: 'clothes' is plural so use 'them', not 'it'. Remove double 'maybe' and incorrect 'will not will'. Use 'those two years' and 'different outfits' for clarity and naturalness.

× I just like the color black and white myself.

✓ I just like the colors black and white.

Use plural 'colors' when listing more than one color. 'Myself' is unnecessary and unnatural here. Remove reflexive pronoun.

× It just seem they're simple colors and will not like take people's attention it it can make me feel you know that nervous.

✓ They just seem like simple colors and don't attract attention; they don't make me feel nervous.

Subject-verb agreement: 'seem' should be 'seem' with 'they' so 'they just seem' is fine; original 'It just seem' is wrong. 'Will not like take' is ungrammatical; use 'don't attract'. Remove filler 'you know that'. Split into two clauses for clarity. Ensure verbs agree with plural subject 'they'.