Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Réduisez les répétitions et organisez l'idée principale en une phrase claire. Commencez par une phrase thème (ce que vous aimez), puis ajoutez 1–2 détails précis (types de vêtements, couleurs) en utilisant des mots de liaison simples. Évitez les hésitations et les mots confus (par ex. "baskets" mal placés).

Ví dụ: I like oversized, casual clothes such as balloon pants and large T-shirts. For colours, I usually choose earthy tones like olive green and navy because they match easily and feel relaxed.

Gợi ý: Soyez plus clair et concis : donnez une phrase directe qui répond à la question, puis une ou deux raisons précises. Évitez répétitions et constructions maladroites. Utilisez un lien logique pour la raison (because, since, so).

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because that is my personal style and they allow me to move freely. For example, baggy tops and loose trousers feel more comfortable than fitted clothes when I'm at school.

Gợi ý: Répondez directement puis développez avec un exemple précis plutôt que des généralisations. Corrigez les mots imprécis ("little tubs") et terminez la phrase correctement. Utilisez un lien pour introduire l'exemple (for example, sometimes).

Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they match with many outfits and are very comfortable. For example, I often pair a plain T-shirt with jeans or shorts for an easy, casual look.

Gợi ý: Organisez la réponse : répondez d'abord par oui/non, puis expliquez brièvement deux raisons claires (budget, indécision) en utilisant des liens (because, so, therefore). Donnez un exemple concret d'une situation d'achat.

Ví dụ: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to avoid wasting money and I'm often indecisive. For instance, when shopping online I compare several items and colours before I finally decide.

Gợi ý: Rendez la réponse plus structurée et évitez hésitations. Répondez clairement puis donnez un specific example contrasting weekday and weekend outfits using a linking word (for example, whereas).

Ví dụ: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. For example, during weekdays I wear simple, comfortable clothes for school, whereas at the weekend I choose more relaxed or fashionable outfits for meeting friends.

Gợi ý: Soyez précis et évitez répétitions. Commencez par indiquer vos couleurs préférées, puis expliquez pourquoi et donnez un exemple concret d'une tenue. Utilisez un lien logique (because, for example).

Ví dụ: I like many colours, but my favourite is green. I often wear green or blue because they go well with jeans; for example, I usually wear an olive-green T-shirt with dark blue jeans.

× It's a very good question because I love fashion and I love to wear big pants like balloon, you know, large T-shirts, baskets.

✓ It's a very good question because I love fashion and I like to wear baggy pants that look like balloons, you know, large T-shirts and sneakers.

The student used 'I love to wear' repeatedly and inconsistent nouns ('baskets' likely meant 'sneakers'). Replace with 'I like to wear' for variety and naturalness, and use correct noun 'sneakers'. Also use 'baggy' instead of 'big' and a relative clause 'that look like balloons' for clarity.

× It's not clothes, but if I can talk about my outfit, I would like to talk about this large clothes and color.

✓ It's not about clothes, but if I can talk about my outfit, I would like to talk about these large clothes and their colors.

Use 'about' after 'not' to express topic. 'Clothes' is plural so use 'these' not 'this', and add a possessive 'their' before 'colors'.

× My answer is very easy for this question because I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because 1st is my style.

✓ My answer is very easy for this question because I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes; first, it is my style.

Sentence needed a clearer connector and verb for 'first' idea: use 'first, it is my style.' Avoid numeral '1st' in speech and add punctuation to separate clauses.

× I love this style very baggy extra and also because I don't like to to be straight in my clothes and not comfortable because after I am not.

✓ I love this very baggy, oversized style, and I don't like wearing tight clothes because they're uncomfortable for me.

Correct adjective order and choose 'oversized' and 'baggy' together; remove doubled 'to'. Use 'wearing tight clothes' rather than 'to be straight in my clothes', and rephrase 'because after I am not' to 'because they're uncomfortable for me' for clarity.

× Yes, I think it's the only thing I wear because it's matching with everything.

✓ Yes, I think it's the only thing I wear because it matches with everything.

Use subject-verb agreement 'it matches' instead of 'it's matching'. Also 'thing' is vague but acceptable; 't-shirt' singular pronoun 'it' is correct.

× It's good sometimes to have dresses and little tubs etcetera but it's very comfortable to have T-shirt and also because I love this style.

✓ Sometimes it's nice to have dresses and little tops, but T-shirts are very comfortable and I love that style.

Replace 'good' with 'nice', correct 'tubs' to 'tops', and use plural agreement 'T-shirts are'. Remove redundant 'because'.

× Simple, casual but perfect. It can.

✓ It's simple, casual but perfect.

Combine fragment into a full sentence. Remove 'It can' which is incomplete and unclear.

× When I want to buy clothes, yes, I spend a lot of time because I don't want to spend a lot of money.

✓ When I want to buy clothes, I do spend a lot of time choosing because I don't want to waste a lot of money.

Add auxiliary 'do' for emphasis is optional; change 'spend a lot of money' to 'waste a lot of money' to reflect intent; keep present simple for habitual action.

× So I have to choose and I am very indecisive to choose everything.

✓ So I have to choose carefully, and I am very indecisive when choosing between options.

Avoid repeating 'choose'; use 'indecisive when choosing between options' for natural phrasing.

× So it's very complicated for me to take decision.

✓ So it's very complicated for me to make a decision.

Use the correct collocation 'make a decision' rather than 'take decision'.

× Umm yes, I can wear different style on weeks and weekends.

✓ Umm yes, I can wear different styles on weekdays and weekends.

Use plural 'styles' and the correct term 'weekdays' (not 'weeks'). Also 'on weekdays and weekends' is the standard phrase.

× Umm because normally in the weekdays I have to go at school.

✓ Umm because normally on weekdays I have to go to school.

Use preposition 'on' for days and 'to' for destination: 'go to school'.

× So maybe it's it depends because the week.

✓ So maybe it depends on the week.

Simplify to 'it depends on the week'; remove extra words 'it's it' and incomplete clause.

× I love every every colors of clothes but my favorite colour is green.

✓ I love every color of clothes, but my favorite color is green.

Remove duplicate 'every', use singular 'color' in general expression 'every color of clothes' or better 'all colors'. Keep consistent spelling 'color' (US) or 'colour' (UK) but be consistent.

× So I think I wear a lot of green, a lot of blue because of the Jean etcetera.

✓ So I think I wear a lot of green and a lot of blue because of jeans, etcetera.

Use plural 'jeans' instead of 'Jean' and connect colors with 'and'.

× And also wait for the T-shirts.

✓ And I also wait for T-shirts.

Original is unclear; likely meant 'And also, I wait for new T-shirts' or 'And I also prefer T-shirts.' If meaning is 'prefer', better: 'And I also prefer T-shirts.' Provide suggested clearer phrasing.

× It's very simple and casual and not complicated to wear.

✓ They are very simple, casual, and easy to wear.

Use plural pronoun 'they' for T-shirts or clothes, replace 'not complicated to wear' with 'easy to wear' for naturalness.