Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more concise and structured: start with a topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples and a brief reason. Avoid unnecessary words and combine ideas into one fluid sentence. Use linking words like “for example” or “because” correctly.

Ví dụ: I like to wear comfortable but fashionable clothes. For example, I often choose hoodies and sweatpants because they are cozy, yet I try to look presentable by choosing neat, well-coordinated pieces.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and simplify: use present tense and avoid passive or mistaken verb forms. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a concise example and a reason using a linking word like “because” or “so”.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because comfort matters most to me. For example, I often wear a hoodie and jeans and add a necklace or watch to make the outfit look nicer.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and be specific about when and why you wear T-shirts. Use one or two sentences: a topic sentence plus a brief contrast or reason with linking words like “but” or “however.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I like T-shirts because they are comfortable, but I mostly wear them at home. When I go out I usually put on a hoodie or a long-sleeve shirt to look a bit smarter.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and be concise. Give a clear amount of time and a specific reason with linking words. Avoid vague phrasing like “elements by elements.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I often spend a lot of time—sometimes up to three hours—choosing clothes because I like to match colours and accessories carefully so my outfit looks coordinated.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer and then explain with specific examples. Use linking words such as “but” or “however” to show contrast between weekdays and weekends.

Ví dụ: Yes, it depends on the occasion. On weekdays I usually stay at home and wear casual clothes, but on weekends I dress nicer when I go out with friends or family.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and be more specific about which dark colours and why. Use a concise structure: topic sentence plus one reason with a linking word like “because.”

Ví dụ: I prefer darker colours, especially navy, black and dark green, because they suit my style and make me feel more confident and relaxed.

× I prefer to wear comfortable yet fashionable clothes, for example wearing hoodies and maybe with some sweatpants.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable yet fashionable clothes, for example hoodies and maybe some sweatpants.

The gerund 'wearing' after 'for example' is unnecessary and awkward. Use the base noun phrase 'hoodies' to list examples of clothes. Also remove the preposition 'with' before 'some sweatpants' because you are listing items, not describing combination. Suggestion: Use noun phrases after 'for example' when listing items.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I was prioritised my comfort when it comes to fashion.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I prioritize my comfort when it comes to fashion.

The original mixes past tense 'was prioritised' with present habitual context. The speaker means a current habitual preference, so use present simple 'prioritize' and active voice. Also 'was prioritised' is passive and awkward here; use active voice 'I prioritize'. Suggestion: Match tense to present habitual context and use active voice.

× For example, a pair of my hoodies with some jeans and add some jewelleries to make my outfit look better.

✓ For example, I wear a hoodie with some jeans and add some jewellery to make my outfit look better.

The original sentence fragments lack a proper verb phrase and improperly uses 'a pair of my hoodies' (a hoodie is singular) and 'jewelleries' (uncountable 'jewellery'). Use 'I wear' and 'add' to form a complete sentence and use correct nouns: 'a hoodie' and 'jewellery'. Suggestion: Ensure subject + verb structure and correct noun forms.

× I do like wearing T-shirts, but I usually wear it at home while going out.

✓ I do like wearing T-shirts, but I don't usually wear them when I go out.

Pronoun 'it' is singular while referring to plural 'T-shirts'; use 'them'. Also the meaning is likely reversed: wearing T-shirts at home but not when going out, so use negative 'don't usually' and 'when I go out' for clarity. Suggestion: Match pronoun number to noun and clarify time expressions.

× I always wear hoodies, long sleeve shirts and many more.

✓ I always wear hoodies, long-sleeve shirts and more.

'Many more' is informal and vague; 'more' or 'other items' is better. Also 'long sleeve' should be hyphenated as 'long-sleeve' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. Suggestion: Use concise lists and correct compound adjective punctuation.

× Yes, I almost spent three hours on finding my clothes that I actually am satisfied with it because I like to match my outfits with the clothes that I'm choosing and by that I can wear it and match it elements by elements so that.

✓ Yes, I almost spend three hours finding clothes that I am actually satisfied with because I like to match my outfits; that way I can wear and match items element by element.

The speaker describes a habitual action, so use present simple 'spend' rather than past 'spent'. Remove unnecessary prepositions ('on finding' -> 'finding') and avoid redundant pronouns ('it'). 'Elements by elements' is incorrect; use 'element by element' or 'item by item'. Simplify and split into clearer clauses. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions and simplify phrasing.

× Well, this actually depends on the events and the occasion.

✓ Well, this actually depends on the event and the occasion.

'Events' and 'occasion' are redundant together; choose singular or make both plural for consistency. 'The event and the occasion' is awkward; 'the event or the occasion' or 'the events and occasions' works. Here singular 'event and occasion' is clearer. Suggestion: Keep number consistent and avoid redundant nouns.

× On weekdays I usually have nothing to do and I always stay at home, while on weekends I usually go out with my friends or family.

✓ On weekdays I usually have nothing to do and I usually stay at home, while on weekends I go out with my friends or family.

Repetition 'always' is too strong and conflicts with 'usually' used elsewhere; use 'usually' consistently. Present simple is appropriate for habitual actions; adjust adverbs for consistency. Suggestion: Keep adverb usage consistent for habitual routines.

× I love darker color of clothes because it's just suits my vibes and I am feeling more confident on wearing that colour and I feel more relaxed.

✓ I love darker-coloured clothes because they suit my vibe; I feel more confident and more relaxed wearing that colour.

Use 'darker-coloured clothes' (hyphenated compound adjective and plural agreement). 'It's just suits' is incorrect; use 'they suit' to agree with plural 'clothes'. 'My vibes' is informal; 'my vibe' is more natural. Use 'wearing that colour' without 'on'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement and use natural collocations; adjust punctuation to improve clarity.