Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and use clearer sentence structure. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (e.g., types of western clothes you prefer and why). Avoid repeating ideas about looking "pretty" multiple times.

Ví dụ: I prefer Western-style clothes, especially simple black dresses. For example, I often wear A-line or wrap dresses because they are comfortable and suit my figure, so I usually choose them for special occasions like my birthday.

Gợi ý: Avoid mentioning comparisons with others; it sounds negative. Give a clear reason for choosing smart clothes (e.g., professional image or confidence) and add one supporting detail using a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: I prefer smart clothes because they help me project a professional image. For instance, I usually wear a blazer and tailored trousers to work because they make me feel confident and respected.

Gợi ý: Keep the answer direct and avoid repeating 'look pretty'. Mention comfort and a specific style or fabric, and use linking words to make it coherent (e.g., 'because' and 'especially').

Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and breathable. In summer I prefer cotton crew-neck T-shirts because they are loose and keep me cool.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence and then explain reasons succinctly. Reduce hesitations and repetitions. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' and provide a specific example of how you choose or shop.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I prefer high-quality items that last. For example, I compare brands and read reviews before buying a dress so I don't waste money on poor quality.

Gợi ý: Make the contrast clearer: state the weekday style and the weekend style, and give a specific reason or example. Avoid unclear phrasing and extra details that don't add value.

Ví dụ: Yes. On weekdays I wear formal or smart-casual clothes for work, such as blouses and trousers. On weekends I prefer casual outfits like jeans and a T-shirt because I often go out with my family and want to be comfortable while taking photos.

Gợi ý: Give one clear reason why you prefer black and avoid irrelevant reasons like someone else's preference. Provide a specific example of how you wear black and use varied vocabulary (e.g., 'flattering', 'versatile').

Ví dụ: I prefer black because it is versatile and flattering. For example, I often wear a black dress or blazer since it matches many accessories and looks stylish for both casual and formal occasions.

× Umm I would like to wear western clothes because I look so pretty in it and my favorite color is black as it suits me more.

✓ Umm, I would like to wear western clothes because I look so pretty in them, and my favorite color is black as it suits me better.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'western clothes' (plural); use 'them'. Also 'more' is vague; 'better' is the correct comparative when saying a color suits someone more than others or other colors. Improve by matching pronoun number to its antecedent and using 'better' for comparison.

× My whole cupboard is filled with black one piece dresses and on my birthday I also wear it.

✓ My whole cupboard is filled with black one-piece dresses, and on my birthday I also wear one.

Countable noun 'one-piece dress' needs hyphenation and plural agreement. The pronoun 'it' is unclear; use 'one' to refer to a single dress. Also add a comma before the conjunction for clarity.

× Umm, I prefer to wear smart clothes because I want to look so pretty in it as I want a good impression from others and I want to look more beautiful than the people who is around me.

✓ Umm, I prefer to wear smart clothes because I want to look so pretty in them; I want to make a good impression on others and to look more beautiful than the people who are around me.

'it' should be 'them' to match plural 'clothes'. 'Impression from others' is incorrect collocation; use 'make a good impression on others.' Subject-verb agreement: 'people who is' should be 'people who are.' Improve by matching pronouns, using correct preposition 'on', and fixing subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, of course. I like wearing T-shirt so much because I look so pretty in it and it is very comfortable and I especially in summer I will definitely like to wear T-shirt as it is so loose.

✓ Yes, of course. I like wearing T-shirts very much because I look so pretty in them and they are very comfortable. Especially in summer, I definitely like to wear T-shirts because they are loose.

Pluralize 'T-shirt' to 'T-shirts' when speaking generally; use 'them' and 'they are' to match plural. 'So much' is better as 'very much' in this context. Fix word order: move 'especially in summer' to the beginning of the clause. Use 'because' for reason and ensure pronoun agreement.

× Yes, to be very frank with you, I usually spend a lot of time for choosing the clothes, because my, uh, my choice for choosing the clothes is so much different from others, and according to me, I want to spend money for the best clothes, I want to not waste it.

✓ Yes, to be very frank with you, I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes, because my choices are very different from others', and I want to spend money on the best clothes; I don't want to waste it.

Do not use 'for' with 'choosing' in this context—use the gerund 'choosing' alone after 'spend time'. 'Choice for choosing the clothes' is redundant; use 'my choices'. Use the preposition 'on' with 'spend money on'. Use the correct possessive 'others'' and the negative 'I don't want' instead of 'I want to not' for natural word order.

× Yes I do wear different style of clothes on weekdays and weekends because on rest of days I am on my work and but I used I and my family plan to go to some places to for enjoying on the weekdays and weekends.

✓ Yes, I do wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends because on workdays I wear work clothes, and sometimes my family and I plan to go out to enjoy ourselves on weekends.

Multiple structural issues: 'different style' should be plural 'different styles' to agree with 'clothes'. 'On rest of days I am on my work' is ungrammatical—use 'on workdays I wear work clothes' or similar. Remove redundant 'and but I used'. Reorder 'my family and I' for correct subject order, and use 'go out to enjoy ourselves' for natural phrasing. Keep weekday/weekend distinction clear.

× So I wear different clothes so that I can take pictures.

✓ So I wear different clothes so that I can take pictures.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; pronoun and structure are fine. No change needed.

× I like to wear black clothes because I look so beautiful and attractive in black clothes.

✓ I like to wear black clothes because I look very beautiful and attractive in them.

Repeating 'black clothes' is redundant; replace the second instance with 'them'. Use 'very' instead of 'so' for a more natural register. Maintain plural pronoun agreement.

× Moreover, it suits me and my color looks so brilliant brilliant in it.

✓ Moreover, it suits me and my complexion looks brilliant in it.

'My color' is unclear—use 'my complexion' or 'my skin tone'. Remove the duplicated word 'brilliant brilliant'. 'In it' is acceptable referring to 'black clothing' but could be omitted for brevity. Ensure word choice is precise.

× And my boyfriend also like black colors, so this is the reason.

✓ And my boyfriend also likes black, so that is another reason.

Subject-verb agreement: 'boyfriend also like' should be 'boyfriend also likes'. 'Black colors' is awkward—use 'black' or 'black clothes'. 'So this is the reason' is wordy; 'so that is another reason' is clearer.