Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
I prefer wear casual garments because I feel at ease and move around me. Move easily. Uh, especially I like uh, soft T-shirts and like sweatpants because I'm made of.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I prefer to wear casual wear in at home because I like to feel relax and move easily. Uh, I especially I like, uh, wear soft cotton T-shirts because it makes me feel relaxed and.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yes, I almost wear T-shirts every day because it is very casual and I could, I don't care if the T-shirts uh, get dir dirty. So I it's very daily clothes for me.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
It depends on the day, but choosing clothes takes me about 10 minutes because it is difficult to decide the different different clothes, especially on different weather or occas.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
Yes, on weekdays I like to wear casual, but in the business I like to wear office casual like blouses and tailored jackets. However, on the weekends I like to dress up like feminine or dress up when I meet friends.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
I like pastel colours and also monotone because a monotone is very easy to uh get together with other garments, so I could uh it is very easy to mix. However, uh, capacity colours makes me feel better.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Make your answer grammatically correct, more concise, and add one specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then one supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid fillers and repetition.
Ví dụ: I prefer wearing casual clothes because they make me feel comfortable and allow me to move easily. For example, I often choose soft T-shirts and sweatpants when I relax at home because the fabrics are breathable and comfortable.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence and include a clear reason plus a specific example. Remove hesitations and finish the sentence. Use one linking word like 'because' or 'so'.
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes at home because they help me relax and move freely. For instance, I usually wear soft cotton T-shirts and loose shorts because they keep me cool and comfortable.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and refine wording to be natural and polite. Give a reason and a short example, avoiding slang or broken phrases.
Ví dụ: Yes, I wear T-shirts almost every day because they are casual and easy to wash. For example, I wear a plain cotton T-shirt when I go shopping or meet friends because it’s low-maintenance and comfortable.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Provide a clear, concise estimate and a specific reason. Use linking phrases like 'because' and 'especially' correctly, and avoid repetition.
Ví dụ: It depends, but usually it takes me about ten minutes because I consider the weather and the occasion. For example, I spend more time choosing an outfit for a formal event than for a casual day out.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: Structure the response: state the contrast clearly, give a reason and a specific example. Use linking words like 'whereas' or 'however' correctly and avoid vague phrases.
Ví dụ: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual office clothes, such as blouses and tailored jackets, because I need to look professional at work. Whereas on weekends I dress more casually or feminine when I meet friends, for example wearing a floral dress and flats.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Be specific about colours and explain reasons clearly. Avoid unclear words (e.g., 'capacity') and filler words. Use linking words like 'because' and provide a short example of outfits.
Ví dụ: I like pastel colours and neutral tones because neutrals are easy to mix with other items, while pastels lift my mood. For example, I often pair a beige sweater with pastel pink accessories to create a soft, coordinated look.
× I prefer wear casual garments because I feel at ease and move around me. Move easily. Uh, especially I like uh, soft T-shirts and like sweatpants because I'm made of.
✓ I prefer wearing casual garments because I feel at ease and can move easily. Especially, I like soft T-shirts and sweatpants because they are comfortable.
The verb 'prefer' is followed by a gerund (verb + -ing) when expressing general preference; 'prefer wear' should be 'prefer wearing'. 'Move around me. Move easily.' is ungrammatical and should be combined into 'can move easily' to show ability. 'Because I'm made of' is incorrect and unclear; use 'because they are comfortable' to explain why those garments are preferred. Suggestion: Use 'prefer' + gerund and combine short fragments into a complete clause to clarify meaning.
× I prefer to wear casual wear in at home because I like to feel relax and move easily. Uh, I especially I like, uh, wear soft cotton T-shirts because it makes me feel relaxed and.
✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes at home because I like to feel relaxed and move easily. I especially like to wear soft cotton T-shirts because they make me feel relaxed.
Use 'at home' not 'in at home'. 'Feel relax' needs the adjective 'relaxed'. The pronoun agreement: 'it makes me feel relaxed' refers to 'T-shirts', which is plural, so use 'they make'. Also avoid unnecessary repetition. Suggestion: Keep prepositions simple ('at home') and ensure subject-pronoun agreement with verbs.
× Yes, I almost wear T-shirts every day because it is very casual and I could, I don't care if the T-shirts uh, get dir dirty. So I it's very daily clothes for me.
✓ Yes, I almost wear T-shirts every day because they are very casual and I don't care if the T-shirts get dirty. So they are everyday clothes for me.
Pronoun 'it' used for plural 'T-shirts' is incorrect; use 'they' and plural verb 'are'. 'Dir' is a typo for 'dirty'. 'It's very daily clothes' mixes singular 'it' with plural 'clothes' and unnatural 'daily'; use 'they are everyday clothes'. Suggestion: Match pronouns and verbs in number and choose natural collocations like 'everyday clothes'.
× It depends on the day, but choosing clothes takes me about 10 minutes because it is difficult to decide the different different clothes, especially on different weather or occas.
✓ It depends on the day, but choosing clothes takes me about 10 minutes because it is difficult to decide between different outfits, especially in different weather or on different occasions.
Phrase 'decide the different different clothes' is ungrammatical and repetitive; use 'decide between different outfits'. 'On different weather' is incorrect preposition use; say 'in different weather' or 'in different weather conditions'. 'Occas' is incomplete; use 'occasions'. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and use correct prepositions for contexts ('in' weather, 'on' occasions if needed).
× Yes, on weekdays I like to wear casual, but in the business I like to wear office casual like blouses and tailored jackets. However, on the weekends I like to dress up like feminine or dress up when I meet friends.
✓ Yes, on weekdays I like to wear casual clothes, but for business I prefer office-casual outfits like blouses and tailored jackets. However, on weekends I like to dress up, for example wearing more feminine styles when I meet friends.
'In the business' is incorrect; use 'for business' or 'at work'. 'I like to wear casual' needs 'clothes' or 'styles'. Repetition 'dress up like feminine or dress up' is awkward; clarify by saying 'wearing more feminine styles'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions for purpose ('for business') and complete noun phrases ('casual clothes').
× I like pastel colours and also monotone because a monotone is very easy to uh get together with other garments, so I could uh it is very easy to mix. However, uh, capacity colours makes me feel better.
✓ I like pastel colours and also monotone shades because a monotone outfit is very easy to coordinate with other garments, so it is very easy to mix and match. However, pastel colours make me feel better.
'Monotone' as a noun is awkward; use 'monotone shades' or 'a monotone outfit'. 'Get together with other garments' is unnatural; use 'coordinate with' or 'mix and match'. 'Capacity colours' is incorrect—likely 'pastel colours' was intended. Verb agreement: 'colours makes' should be 'colours make'. Suggestion: Use collocations like 'mix and match' and ensure subject-verb agreement.