Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I love to wear a chain and are you running top? Yep. So, uh, the reason why I like wearing the general run laptops because I feel comfortable in them whenever I put them on and it makes me feel absolutely, uh comfortable. Uh, it makes me looks nice and smart always and I enjoy really enjoy putting on something that makes me.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I prefer to wear a comfortable and, uh, and a smart clothes too. And a cashier clothes very well. Uh, because this, uh, comfortable clothes and, uh, casual clothes makes me, like I said, I, I, I enjoy myself whenever I'm in them and it makes me look really smart and nice. And so anytime I put them on, I get a lot of compliments from people that whole you look smart, you look nice and you look awesome. So I really enjoy putting them pretty.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yes, I absolutely enjoy wearing T-shirts. T-shirts are nice T-shirt of different color most special. I prefer T-shirts in blacks, red and white, uh, with a combination of uh, a grey pants and a a a black, uh, pants. If I'm putting on a a white T-shirt, I prefer to have the pants in grey and whenever I put.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
With, uh, no, I don't really have, uh, spend a lot of time whenever I'm teaching, uh, choosing my clothes, uh, because I, I have my styles arranged in my wardrobe and in my closet. So whenever I'm about to go out, uh, I just go to my closet and I pick, uh, the type of, uh, clothes that I want to put on depending on the occasion I'm going out for. If I'm going for a birthday, I have the style arranged in my.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
No, I don't wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekend. Uh, I mostly, like I've said earlier, I mostly wear, uh, put on the casual clothes. Uh, the only reason why I do wear, uh, a corporate dress is if I'm going to my place of work, which is my office that require me to put on a, a, a smart, uh, wheels and requirements to put on the.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
Yeah, my best color clothes is a red, a red pants and a white tshirt. I love a red pant and a white T-shirt very well. We cut it makes me looks bright and makes me looks more feasible whenever I'm coming or going out. And I tend to mix among people a lot whenever I put on this.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Speak more clearly and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence. Avoid filler words (uh, um) and repetitions. Use correct vocabulary for clothing (e.g., “casual clothes,” “sportswear,” “jeans”) and one or two concise supporting reasons with linking words (because, so). Keep to 2–4 sentences.
Ví dụ: I prefer casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I often wear sports tops and sneakers when I go out, as they make me feel relaxed and look neat.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Give a clear preference in the topic sentence (either casual or smart) and then give 1–2 specific reasons. Reduce repetition and use linking words (because, however). Use precise adjectives (comfortable, professional, neat) and one brief example.
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable casual clothes because they suit my daily routine and make me feel relaxed. For example, I wear a neat T-shirt and jeans to work on most days, but I choose a suit when I have formal meetings.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence saying you like T-shirts, then add specific details about colors and matching rules using linking words (for example, because, so). Correct grammar for color names and plural/singular (e.g., “black, red and white T-shirts”). Keep to 2–3 sentences and finish your thought.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they are versatile and comfortable. For example, I like black, red and white T-shirts and usually pair a white T-shirt with grey trousers for a smart casual look.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Answer directly (No, I don't) then explain briefly why using coherent linking (because, so). Use one specific example of how you organize clothes and finish the sentence. Avoid filler words and repetitions.
Ví dụ: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I arrange outfits in my wardrobe by occasion. For example, I keep casual sets, office outfits and party clothes in separate sections, so I can choose quickly.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Give a clear yes/no and then give a reason and one specific condition when you change style. Use linking words (but, however, only when) and correct vocabulary (formal/corporate attire). Keep it concise and finish the thought about when you wear smart clothes.
Ví dụ: No, I usually wear casual clothes on both weekdays and weekends because they suit my lifestyle. However, I wear formal or corporate attire only when I have to go to the office for important meetings.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: State your favourite colours clearly and give a specific reason why you like them using linking words (because, so). Use correct grammar for count and agreement (e.g., “My favourite colours are red and white”). Avoid unclear phrases like “feasible” and explain the effect (e.g., bright, eye-catching).
Ví dụ: My favourite colours are red and white because a red pair of trousers with a white T-shirt looks bright and eye-catching. I often wear this combination when I want to stand out in a crowd.
× Yeah, I love to wear a chain and are you running top? Yep.
✓ Yeah, I love to wear chains and running tops.
The original sentence uses incorrect pronouns and word forms. 'a chain' vs plural 'chains' depends on meaning; context suggests general liking so plural is natural. 'are you running top?' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'running tops' (noun phrase). Use correct noun forms and remove misplaced question words. Suggestion: decide singular or plural meaning and use consistent nouns like 'I love wearing chains and running tops.'
× So, uh, the reason why I like wearing the general run laptops because I feel comfortable in them whenever I put them on and it makes me feel absolutely, uh comfortable.
✓ So, the reason why I like wearing general running clothes is that I feel comfortable in them whenever I put them on and they make me feel completely comfortable.
Multiple issues: 'general run laptops' is incorrect vocabulary—likely 'general running clothes' or 'casual clothes.' 'Because' should be part of a clause; better to use 'is that' for clarity. Subject-verb agreement: 'it makes me feel' should be 'they make me feel' to agree with plural 'clothes.' Use 'completely' instead of repeated 'uh comfortable.' Suggestion: choose correct nouns, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use 'is that' for explanations.
× Uh, it makes me looks nice and smart always and I enjoy really enjoy putting on something that makes me.
✓ They make me look nice and smart, and I really enjoy putting on something like that.
'makes me looks' is incorrect: after 'make' the base form 'look' is required; also subject should be plural 'they' if referring to clothes. Remove duplicate 'enjoy' and finish the thought — 'something like that.' Suggestion: ensure verbs take correct base or inflected form and avoid repetition.
× I prefer to wear a comfortable and, uh, and a smart clothes too.
✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and smart clothes too.
'a' should not be used before uncountable or plural noun 'clothes.' Remove unnecessary articles and extra conjunction. Suggestion: use no article before plural 'clothes' and avoid repeating conjunctions.
× And a cashier clothes very well.
✓ And casual clothes fit me very well.
'cashier clothes' is likely a mishearing of 'casual clothes.' The phrase needed a verb like 'fit' and pronoun/object 'me.' Suggestion: use correct vocabulary 'casual' and include a verb and object: 'casual clothes fit me well.'
× Uh, because this, uh, comfortable clothes and, uh, casual clothes makes me, like I said, I, I, I enjoy myself whenever I'm in them and it makes me look really smart and nice.
✓ Because comfortable and casual clothes make me feel good, as I said, I enjoy myself when I'm in them, and they make me look really smart and nice.
Subject 'clothes' is plural so verb must be 'make' not 'makes.' Use consistent pronouns: 'they' to refer to clothes. Avoid repetition and use 'feel good' instead of vague 'makes me.' Suggestion: ensure plural subjects take plural verbs and maintain consistent pronouns.
× So anytime I put them on, I get a lot of compliments from people that whole you look smart, you look nice and you look awesome.
✓ So anytime I put them on, I get a lot of compliments from people who say 'you look smart, you look nice, and you look awesome.'
Use 'who' for people, not 'that whole.' To report speech, use 'say' and enclose the quoted compliments. Maintain correct relative pronoun. Suggestion: use 'people who say' when reporting what people tell you.
× Yes, I absolutely enjoy wearing T-shirts. T-shirts are nice T-shirt of different color most special.
✓ Yes, I absolutely enjoy wearing T-shirts. T-shirts of different colors are the most special to me.
Original has repetition and wrong order: 'T-shirts are nice T-shirt of different color most special' is ungrammatical. Use plural 'colors' and structure 'are the most special to me.' Suggestion: use plural nouns and clear adjective phrases.
× I prefer T-shirts in blacks, red and white, uh, with a combination of uh, a grey pants and a a a black, uh, pants.
✓ I prefer T-shirts in black, red, and white, combined with grey or black pants.
Use color adjectives in singular form (black, red, white). 'Pants' is plural so do not use 'a' before it. Simplify 'a combination of ... and ...' to 'combined with.' Suggestion: use color adjectives (black, red, white) and correct article use with plural nouns.
× If I'm putting on a a white T-shirt, I prefer to have the pants in grey and whenever I put.
✓ If I put on a white T-shirt, I prefer to wear grey pants.
Duplicate 'a a' and unfinished clause. Use simple present or present continuous appropriately: 'If I put on' or 'If I'm wearing.' 'Have the pants in grey' is awkward; use 'wear grey pants.' Suggestion: avoid duplicated words and finish sentences; choose appropriate conditional tense.
× With, uh, no, I don't really have, uh, spend a lot of time whenever I'm teaching, uh, choosing my clothes, uh, because I, I have my styles arranged in my wardrobe and in my closet.
✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing my clothes because I have my outfits arranged in my wardrobe and closet.
Original mixes tenses and has extra words. 'I don't really have spend' is ungrammatical; use 'I don't spend.' 'My styles arranged' better as 'my outfits arranged.' Remove filler words. Suggestion: streamline sentence, use correct auxiliary plus base verb 'don't spend,' and use consistent nouns.
× So whenever I'm about to go out, uh, I just go to my closet and I pick, uh, the type of, uh, clothes that I want to put on depending on the occasion I'm going out for.
✓ So whenever I'm about to go out, I just go to my closet and pick the clothes I want to wear depending on the occasion.
'Put on' is acceptable but 'wear' is more natural here. 'Occasion I'm going out for' is redundant; 'depending on the occasion' suffices. Remove filler commas. Suggestion: simplify phrases and use natural verbs like 'wear.'
× If I'm going for a birthday, I have the style arranged in my.
✓ If I'm going to a birthday party, I have an outfit arranged in my closet.
Sentence is incomplete ('in my' what?). Use 'going to a birthday party' and complete with 'closet' or 'wardrobe.' Include article 'an outfit.' Suggestion: complete thoughts and include necessary nouns.
× No, I don't wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekend.
✓ No, I don't wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends.
Use plural 'weekends' to match plural 'weekdays' and generalize the time frame. Suggestion: maintain parallel plural forms for paired time expressions.
× Uh, I mostly, like I've said earlier, I mostly wear, uh, put on the casual clothes.
✓ As I said earlier, I mostly wear casual clothes.
Remove unnecessary repetition and the incorrect phrase 'put on the casual clothes.' 'Wear casual clothes' is concise and correct. Suggestion: avoid redundancy and use correct verb collocation 'wear clothes.'
× Uh, the only reason why I do wear, uh, a corporate dress is if I'm going to my place of work, which is my office that require me to put on a, a, a smart, uh, wheels and requirements to put on the.
✓ The only reason I wear formal clothes is if I'm going to my workplace, which is my office and requires me to dress smartly.
'Corporate dress' ok but 'wear' should be followed by 'formal' or 'smart clothes.' 'Office that require' should be 'office that requires' (singular subject). 'Put on a smart, uh, wheels' is meaningless; use 'dress smartly.' Suggestion: use 'workplace' and 'requires me to dress smartly,' ensuring subject-verb agreement.
× Yeah, my best color clothes is a red, a red pants and a white tshirt.
✓ My favorite outfit is red pants and a white T-shirt.
Original mixes 'color clothes' awkwardly and misuses articles before plural 'pants.' Use 'favorite outfit' and the correct singular/plural forms. Suggestion: say 'red pants and a white T-shirt' or 'a red pair of pants and a white T-shirt.'
× I love a red pant and a white T-shirt very well.
✓ I love red pants and a white T-shirt very much.
'Pant' should be 'pants' and 'very well' is awkward — use 'very much.' Suggestion: use correct noun forms and appropriate adverbial phrases.
× We cut it makes me looks bright and makes me looks more feasible whenever I'm coming or going out.
✓ It makes me look bright and more noticeable whenever I go out.
'We cut it' is meaningless here. 'Makes me looks' should be 'makes me look' (base form). 'More feasible' is wrong meaning; likely 'more noticeable' or 'more confident.' Also use 'whenever I go out' not 'coming or going out.' Suggestion: use verbs with correct base forms after 'make' and choose adjectives that fit intended meaning.
× And I tend to mix among people a lot whenever I put on this.
✓ And I tend to stand out among people a lot when I wear this.
'Mix among people' doesn't match context; likely intended 'stand out' or 'fit in.' 'Whenever I put on this' should be 'when I wear this.' Suggestion: choose correct verb phrase for intended meaning and use 'wear' for clothing.