Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự từ, tránh lặp từ. Nên mở đầu trực tiếp, dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (về tiện ích hoặc phong cách). Chú ý dùng mạo từ và tính từ đúng (a T-shirt, affordable price → affordable). Sử dụng liên từ nhẹ nếu cần.

Ví dụ: I usually wear T-shirts because they are comfortable and affordable. For example, I often choose plain cotton T-shirts for casual outings because they’re easy to match and low-maintenance.

Gợi ý: Cần rút gọn câu tránh dài dòng, sửa ngữ pháp (it’s → they’re; doing with high intensities → doing high-intensity activities). Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn với ví dụ cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ hợp lý (because, for example, so).

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, smart clothes because they suit both work and casual activities. For example, I often wear a breathable polo shirt that looks neat at the office but is comfortable enough for a light workout.

Gợi ý: Sửa cấu trúc động từ (keen on + -ing), dùng mạo từ và số nhiều đúng (T-shirts). Tránh lặp từ như really. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể với ví dụ.

Ví dụ: Yes, I’m keen on wearing T-shirts because they’re versatile and affordable. For instance, I wear a T-shirt when I study at home, meet friends, or go running.

Gợi ý: Tránh âm tiết không cần thiết (umm, to be honest) và dùng cấu trúc tự nhiên hơn (I’m a big fan of T-shirts). Nêu rõ mức độ thời gian (a lot / not much) và giải thích ngắn gọn vì sao. Sửa ngữ pháp (closest store → nearby stores; spend time choosing).

Ví dụ: Not really. Although I’m a big fan of T-shirts, I don’t spend much time choosing them because I usually buy from a few nearby stores I trust.

Gợi ý: Trả lời trực tiếp trước, sau đó nêu lý do ngắn gọn. Sửa ngữ pháp (different style → different styles; weekday and weekend → on weekdays and weekends; don’t like to waste). Hạn chế dùng cụm từ thừa như “that’s a good question” trong bài thi.

Ví dụ: No, I usually wear the same style on weekdays and weekends because I prefer simplicity and don’t want to waste time choosing outfits.

Gợi ý: Sửa cấu trúc câu và từ vựng (black color → black; coordinate clothes easy → coordinate clothes easily; bring a luxuries and elegant → make people look luxurious and elegant). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn rồi bổ sung 1–2 lý do cụ thể và ví dụ về hoàn cảnh mặc.

Ví dụ: I prefer black because it’s a basic, easy-to-match colour that looks elegant. For example, I often wear a black shirt to interviews or evening events because it gives a neat and sophisticated appearance.

× From my perspective, the kind of outfit I want to wear is T-shirt because it's really affordable price and fashionable.

✓ From my perspective, the kind of outfit I want to wear is a T-shirt because it's really affordable and fashionable.

The phrase 'affordable price' is incorrect because 'affordable' should modify the noun directly or be used as 'affordable price' with an article; simpler is 'affordable'. Also 'T-shirt' requires an article 'a'. Suggest using 'a T-shirt' and 'affordable' as an adjective without 'price' here. Suggestions: add the indefinite article 'a' before 'T-shirt'; use 'affordable' rather than 'affordable price'.

× From my perspective, I prefer to wear comfortable and smart clothes because it's very flexible for people who want to play sports or doing with a high intensities and it's not only have a affordable price but also very flexible in many case.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer to wear comfortable and smart clothes because they are very versatile for people who want to play sports or do high-intensity activities, and they not only have an affordable price but are also suitable in many cases.

Multiple issues: 'it's' refers to a singular subject but 'clothes' is plural, so use 'they' (pronoun error). 'doing with a high intensities' mixes verb forms and number; correct to 'do high-intensity activities' (verb and singular/plural agreement). 'it's not only have' is incorrect verb structure; use 'they not only have' and parallel structure 'but are also'. 'a affordable' should be 'an affordable' but better to use 'affordable' after 'have'. Suggestions: match pronouns to plural nouns, use base verb 'do' after 'want to', correct adjective-noun forms and maintain parallelism.

× To be honest, I really keen on wearing T-shirt because it's really convenient for people and have a affordable price and we can use in many case.

✓ To be honest, I really enjoy wearing T-shirts because they are very convenient and affordable, and we can use them in many situations.

'I really keen on' mixes verb forms; correct is 'I am really keen on' or 'I really enjoy'. 'T-shirt' should be plural or with an article; 'T-shirts' fits general preference. 'it's' wrongly used for plural 'T-shirts' — use 'they are'. 'have a affordable price' incorrect article and verb agreement; use 'are affordable'. 'we can use in many case' needs object 'them' and plural 'cases' or 'situations'. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement, proper pronoun reference, and correct article usage.

× Umm, to be honest, I am a lover T-shirt so I spend a lot of time to choose a suitable T-shirt from closest store.

✓ Umm, to be honest, I am a lover of T-shirts, so I spend a lot of time choosing a suitable T-shirt from the closest store.

'a lover T-shirt' is incorrect; use 'a lover of T-shirts' or 'I love T-shirts'. 'spend a lot of time to choose' should be 'spend a lot of time choosing' (verb pattern). 'closest store' needs the definite article 'the closest store'. Suggestions: use 'lover of' construction or 'I love', use gerund after 'spend time', and include appropriate articles.

× That's a good question. To be honest I don't usually wear different style of clothes and weekday and weekend because I don't like waste my time to choose.

✓ That's a good question. To be honest, I don't usually wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends because I don't like to waste my time choosing.

'different style of clothes and weekday and weekend' has multiple errors: 'style' should be plural 'styles'; missing preposition 'on' before 'weekdays and weekends'; pronoun/verb forms 'don't like waste' should be 'don't like to waste' or 'don't like wasting'. Also 'weekday and weekend' should be plural. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general statements, include prepositions for time expressions, and use infinitive or gerund correctly after 'like'.

× From my point of view, I am a big fan of black color because this is the most basic color in the world and it can coordinate clothes easy and it's bring a luxuries and elegant for people.

✓ From my point of view, I am a big fan of the color black because it is the most basic color and it can coordinate outfits easily, and it makes people look luxurious and elegant.

'black color' is better as 'the color black'. 'coordinate clothes easy' needs adverb 'easily' not adjective. 'it's bring a luxuries and elegant for people' has multiple errors: 'bring' should be 'makes' or 'gives', 'a luxuries' wrong article and plural; use 'luxurious and elegant' as adjectives. Suggestions: use correct article 'the color black', use adverb 'easily', and choose appropriate verbs ('make') and adjective forms.