Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be slightly more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid minor grammar slips (use plural 'them' or 'casual clothes' consistently), and add one specific example to enrich content. Use linking words only if adding detail.

Ví dụ: I prefer casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed and comfortable. For example, I usually wear jeans and a soft sweater when I go out with friends because they’re easy to move in and low-maintenance.

Gợi ý: Avoid hesitations and repetitions. Use a clear present-tense statement (I prefer...) and complete your supporting detail with a reason or example. Remove filler words and finish the sentence. Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me relax. For example, at the weekend I usually wear jeans and a hoodie since they’re warm and comfortable for walking around town.

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and correct small grammar mistakes (use 'they're' or 'they are'). Avoid vocalized hesitation. Provide one brief reason or example to support your answer and use a linking phrase like 'because' or 'since'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. T-shirts are very practical and comfortable, since they’re lightweight and easy to move in when I exercise or run errands.

Gợi ý: This answer is unclear and too short. Respond directly with a full sentence, then add a short explanation or frequency detail. Use linking words if you give more than one sentence.

Ví dụ: Not really. I usually pick my clothes quickly — about five to ten minutes — unless I have a special event, in which case I spend more time choosing an outfit.

Gợi ý: Make the structure clearer: give a direct topic sentence, then support with specific contrasts. Correct small grammar issues and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' and 'whereas' to make contrasts clearer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. On weekdays I dress more neatly because I go to school and meet people, whereas at the weekend I wear much more casual clothes like jeans and hoodies to relax.

Gợi ý: This is a strong answer. To improve further, add a brief personal example of how you use those colours or mention a favourite item in a neutral colour to make it more specific. Keep it concise and natural.

Ví dụ: I prefer neutral colours like gray, black, and white because they’re versatile and easy to mix. For instance, I often wear a black jacket with different shirts because it goes with almost everything and looks neat.

× I like casual clothes because I feel relaxed and comfortable when wearing it.

✓ I like casual clothes because I feel relaxed and comfortable when I wear them.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect for the plural noun 'clothes'; use 'them'. Also include the subject 'I' before 'wear' to form a clear clause: 'when I wear them'.

× I will say the comfortable and casual clothes because I I feel relaxed and convenient when wearing them.

✓ I would say comfortable, casual clothes because I feel relaxed and comfortable when I wear them.

Use 'would say' as a polite response rather than 'will say'. 'Convenient' is incorrect to describe a person feeling; 'comfortable' is appropriate. Also remove the extra 'I'. Keep subject 'I' before 'wear' and use plural pronoun 'them' for 'clothes'.

× Uh, I often wear jeans and a a hoodie at the weekend because.

✓ I often wear jeans and a hoodie at the weekend.

The fragment ends with 'because' but provides no clause; drop 'because' to complete the sentence. Remove the duplicated article 'a a'.

× I will say yes because it's, uh, MMM. Because they practical and easy to move in.

✓ I would say yes because T-shirts are practical and easy to move in.

Replace 'it's' with 'T-shirts are' to match plural subject. 'They practical' lacks the verb 'are'. Use 'would say' for polite response and remove filler sounds.

× Yay.

✓ Yes, I do.

'Yay' is informal and does not answer the question clearly. Use 'Yes, I do' to provide a grammatically complete response to 'Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?'.

× Umm absolutely yes, because on weekdays I have to go to school and meet friends and meet other people. So I make I always make sure that I look good but weekends normal.

✓ Absolutely yes. On weekdays I have to go to school and meet people, so I always make sure that I look good, but weekends are more casual.

Remove filler words and duplicate 'make'. Combine clauses clearly: use 'so' to show result. 'Weekends normal' is ungrammatical; use 'weekends are more casual' to complete the comparison and include the verb 'are'.

× I prefer neutral colours such as Gray, black and white because they are versatile and easy to mix with other items.

✓ I prefer neutral colours such as gray, black, and white because they are versatile and easy to mix with other items.

Capitalization: 'gray' should be lowercase unless starting a sentence. Add a comma before 'and' in a list for clarity. The sentence is otherwise correct.

× I find them practical for work and everyday wear, and they always look clean and timeless.

✓ I find them practical for work and everyday wear, and they always look clean and timeless.

No correction needed; pronoun 'them' correctly refers to 'neutral colours' or 'clothes'. This is retained for completeness.