Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence saying what you like, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar for depend/depends and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer clothes with interesting designs rather than focusing on the material. For example, I collect T-shirts released by musicians because their graphics and logos reflect my taste.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference immediately, then explain why with one or two precise reasons. Avoid unfinished sentences and repetition; use linking words like because and so.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they suit my lifestyle and are easier to mix and match. For instance, I often buy musician-branded hoodies and T-shirts because they feel relaxed and express my interests.

Gợi ý: Answer directly (Yes/No) then support with specific examples. Use correct phrases (released by musicians, bands) and avoid long awkward clauses. Mention why they make you confident.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially ones released by my favourite bands. For example, I have a Pink Floyd T-shirt and a metal band T-shirt from an Indonesian group; they make me feel confident and reflect my music taste.

Gợi ý: Provide a concise topic sentence (Yes/No) and then give specific details about what you consider (design, material) using linking words like because or for example. Avoid incomplete endings.

Ví dụ: Yes, I spend time choosing clothes because I treat it like an art or curatorial process. For example, I consider the design and material carefully to ensure items match my style and last a long time.

Gợi ý: Be specific about differences and use clear linking language (on weekdays vs at weekends). Avoid awkward phrasing and repetition; give one or two concrete examples of outfits for each time.

Ví dụ: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I usually choose formal clothes like shirts and chinos for work, but at the weekend I prefer casual outfits such as jeans and band T-shirts because I want to feel relaxed.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer naming your favourite colour, then explain why with a brief reason or example. Use correct grammar (released by musicians, predominantly) and avoid repeated phrases.

Ví dụ: I mainly like black clothes. Most of my band T-shirts are black, which I prefer because black is versatile and matches most outfits.

× I usually wear the clothes are not depend on the raw materials of the cloth, but actually it depend on the design of the clothes.

✓ I usually wear clothes that do not depend on the raw materials, but actually depend on the design of the clothes.

The original sentence uses an incorrect clause structure and verb agreement. Use a relative clause 'that do not depend' for plural 'clothes' and 'depend' to match plural subject. Also remove redundant words like 'the cloth'. Grammar problem type ID:16

× Such as I really like to wear the brand of one of the musicians, so I really like to collect the clothes.

✓ For example, I really like to wear clothing from one of my favorite musicians' brands, so I like to collect those clothes.

Begin with a connective 'For example' and correct noun phrases: 'brand of one of the musicians' is awkward; use 'one of my favorite musicians' brands'. Use 'those clothes' to refer back. Ensure agreement and clearer possessive form. Grammar problem type ID:27

× I really enjoy to wear the casual clothes because it usually can be collecting by the brand, especially by the musician.

✓ I really enjoy wearing casual clothes because they are usually produced by particular brands, especially those run by musicians.

Use gerund 'enjoy wearing' instead of 'enjoy to wear' (verb + -ing). Also correct passive phrasing: 'can be collecting by the brand' is incorrect; use 'produced by' or 'made by'. Adjust pronoun agreement ('they'). Grammar problem type ID:8

× So I think it it relate to the MU musician brand.

✓ So I think it relates to the musician's brand.

Fix pronoun and verb agreement: 'it it' is a duplication; use 'it relates' for third-person singular. Use possessive 'musician's brand' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:12

× So I think I'm very.

✓ So I think I feel very confident.

Original sentence is incomplete ('I'm very' missing adjective). Add appropriate adjective 'confident' to complete the sentence and match context. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I am very confident when I wear a T-shirt, especially the T-shirt that publishes by the course of the musicians that I really like, suggests I wear the T-shirt of the Pink Floyd, or I wear the T-shirt from the Pure Pure Red, one of the band metal from the Indonesia.

✓ I am very confident when I wear a T-shirt, especially those published by the musicians I like; for example, I wear Pink Floyd T-shirts or T-shirts from Pure Pure Red, a metal band from Indonesia.

Use plural 'those' for multiple T-shirts and correct passive 'published by' instead of 'publishes by the course'. Remove 'suggests I wear' and restructure examples. Correct article and word order: 'a metal band from Indonesia'. Grammar problem type ID:21

× Choosing a cloth for me is like something or process to make an art.

✓ Choosing clothes, for me, is like a process of making art.

Use plural 'clothes' or 'a piece of clothing'; 'something or process' is unclear — use 'a process'. Use noun phrase 'a process of making art' for clarity and correct article usage. Grammar problem type ID:27

× Especially because when I choose the clothes, it's like a curatorial process.

✓ When I choose clothes, it feels like a curatorial process.

Remove redundant 'especially because' and use 'choose clothes' (no 'the') for general statement. 'Feels like' is more natural than 'it's like' in this context. Grammar problem type ID:12

× You have to choose the design, you have to choose the raw material of the clothes.

✓ You have to choose the design and the raw materials of the clothes.

Combine clauses with 'and' for smoother sentence. Use plural 'raw materials' to match typical usage. Avoid repeating 'you have to choose' unnecessarily. Grammar problem type ID:26

× So I think that choosing the clothes is like a process you.

✓ So I think that choosing clothes is like a creative process.

Original ends with 'process you' which is incomplete and lacks proper meaning. Replace with 'creative process' to convey intended idea and include a verb earlier. Grammar problem type ID:23

× I wear the different style of clothes because of when I'm in a weekday, I think that I prefer to make a or to wear the formal clothes especially.

✓ I wear different styles of clothes because on weekdays I prefer to wear formal clothes.

Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'different style' and 'clothes'; use plural 'styles'. 'On weekdays' is the correct time expression. Remove 'make a or to' which is incoherent. Grammar problem type ID:22

× But for the weekend, it's my freedom to choose all the style. All the style of clothes that I wear suggested I free and freely to choose.

✓ But on weekends, I have the freedom to choose any style. I feel free to choose whatever clothes I want.

Use 'on weekends', 'freedom' noun and 'any style' for generality. 'Suggested I free and freely to choose' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I feel free to choose whatever I want'. Adjust adverb placement and word choice. Grammar problem type ID:20

× Because I really like the clothes that publish by the musicians, especially the musician.

✓ Because I really like clothes published by musicians, especially certain musicians I admire.

Use plural 'clothes' and passive 'published by'. Remove redundant 'the musician' and clarify referent. Fix article usage. Grammar problem type ID:12

× It's all almost of my clothes, especially T-shirt predominantly is black.

✓ Almost all of my clothes, especially my T-shirts, are predominantly black.

Correct word order 'Almost all of my clothes'. Use plural 'T-shirts' and subject-verb agreement 'are predominantly black'. Grammar problem type ID:14

× I really like to wear the black.

✓ I really like wearing black.

Use gerund 'wearing' after 'like' for habitual preferences. Remove unnecessary article before color 'black'. Grammar problem type ID:8