Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
I will be completely honest with you. I have no idea how to answer this question properly. Uh, but, uh, if it comes to clothing items, I wear just regular clothes, uh, because, uh, I'm a student right now and I have, uh, a little opportunities to where designer designers.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I definitely prefer to wear casual clothes because it's more affordable, more comfortable to wear and, uh, I have enough money to buy that clothing items, uh, compare with the things that you, I can't afford compare with things, uh, with the. Pricey.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do love wearing T-shirts because it's they are more affordable and they're comfortable to wear in everyday life.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
No I don't. I spend only a few minutes to choose my favorite outfit, uh, for my outings and uh, for example, I wear T-shirt and a regular trousers for a walk and for special events.
Giám khảo
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Thí sinh
No, I don't. I have only two outfits for weekdays and for weekends and it really doesn't matter for me because I'm I'm still student and I think it's a it's not a good thing to choose special things when it comes to.
Giám khảo
What colour clothes do you like?
Thí sinh
As for me, I like to wear different color clothing items uh, but I I would prefer uh black, white, brown colors because it is more affordable for me and very convenient.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating the kinds of clothes you prefer, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and repetition. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like because or so.
Ví dụ: I usually wear regular, casual clothes because I’m a student and prefer practical, affordable items. For example, I often choose jeans, simple T-shirts and sneakers for everyday activities.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: Give a clear, structured answer: state preference, then give 2 specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid contradictory or confused phrasing about money. Use concise vocabulary (affordable, comfortable, formal).
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are more comfortable and easier to afford. For instance, I usually buy simple T-shirts and jeans rather than expensive suits or formal shoes.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Good direct response. Improve by correcting small grammar (they are) and adding a brief specific detail or example to enrich the answer. Keep it to 1–2 sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are affordable and comfortable. For example, I often wear cotton T-shirts for classes and weekend walks because they’re easy to wash and match with jeans.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Answer directly then give a coherent example. Avoid filler words and contradictory phrasing (special events vs. casual outfit). If you wear casual clothes even for events, say so clearly or differentiate. Use linking words like for example or so.
Ví dụ: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes; usually a few minutes. For example, I normally pick a T-shirt and trousers for a walk, and only dress more carefully for truly special events.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence then support with a concise reason. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. If you have limited outfits, explain briefly why (budget, convenience).
Ví dụ: No, I don't change styles much between weekdays and weekends because I’m a student with a limited budget. I tend to wear the same casual clothes for studying and relaxing to keep things simple.
What colour clothes do you like?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: State your preference clearly then explain briefly why, with correct grammar. Avoid hesitation and give a small specific example (which items you own in those colors).
Ví dụ: I like wearing different colours, but I prefer black, white and brown because they’re versatile and easy to match. For example, I often wear a black jacket, white T-shirt and brown shoes because they go well with most outfits.
× I will be completely honest with you. I have no idea how to answer this question properly. Uh, but, uh, if it comes to clothing items, I wear just regular clothes, uh, because, uh, I'm a student right now and I have, uh, a little opportunities to where designer designers.
✓ I'll be honest: I have no idea how to answer, but when it comes to clothing, I just wear regular clothes because I'm a student now and I have few opportunities to wear designer clothes.
The original contains redundant fillers, awkward phrasing and wrong collocations ('a little opportunities to where designer designers'). This is a sentence structure error: unclear connectors and incorrect word order make it hard to understand. Suggest removing fillers, using correct collocation 'few opportunities to wear designer clothes', and simplifying clauses. Use contractions consistently for spoken tone ('I'll', 'I'm').
× I definitely prefer to wear casual clothes because it's more affordable, more comfortable to wear and, uh, I have enough money to buy that clothing items, uh, compare with the things that you, I can't afford compare with things, uh, with the. Pricey.
✓ I definitely prefer casual clothes because they are more affordable and comfortable, and I do not have enough money to buy expensive items.
Errors include incorrect article/number agreement ('that clothing items'), incorrect pronoun/subject reference and broken comparison. This fits article errors and also subject-verb/pronoun misuse; main fix: use plural pronoun 'they' for 'casual clothes', remove unnecessary words, and replace 'pricey' with 'expensive'. Use 'do not have enough money' for clarity.
× Yes, I do love wearing T-shirts because it's they are more affordable and they're comfortable to wear in everyday life.
✓ Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are more affordable and comfortable for everyday wear.
The original mixes 'it's' with 'they are' causing redundancy. This is a third person singular/pronoun agreement problem: 'T-shirts' is plural so use 'they are' not 'it is'. Also simplify 'comfortable to wear in everyday life' to 'comfortable for everyday wear'.
× No I don't. I spend only a few minutes to choose my favorite outfit, uh, for my outings and uh, for example, I wear T-shirt and a regular trousers for a walk and for special events.
✓ No, I don't. I spend only a few minutes choosing my outfit for outings. For example, I wear a T-shirt and regular trousers for a walk, and different clothes for special events.
Using 'to choose' after 'spend' is incorrect; the verb should be in -ing form after 'spend' ('spend minutes choosing'). Also article errors ('a T-shirt and regular trousers') and awkward repetition. Clarify by separating into two sentences.
× No, I don't. I have only two outfits for weekdays and for weekends and it really doesn't matter for me because I'm I'm still student and I think it's a it's not a good thing to choose special things when it comes to.
✓ No, I don't. I have only two outfits for weekdays and weekends, and it doesn't really matter because I'm still a student. I don't think it's necessary to choose special clothes.
Missing article before 'student' ('a student') and awkward/incomplete ending. This is an article error and sentence structure issue; fix articles and finish the idea clearly.
× As for me, I like to wear different color clothing items uh, but I I would prefer uh black, white, brown colors because it is more affordable for me and very convenient.
✓ I like to wear clothing in different colors, but I prefer black, white, and brown because they are more affordable and convenient for me.
Problems: 'different color clothing items' is awkward and 'it is more affordable' incorrectly uses singular pronoun for plural 'colors'. This is an incorrect preposition/phrase and pronoun agreement issue. Use 'in different colors' and plural pronoun 'they are'.