Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Replace vague phrases like "classical" with clearer terms (e.g. "traditional" or "formal") and remove repeated ideas.

Ví dụ: I usually wear traditional, classic clothing because it’s comfortable and part of my family’s style. However, in hot weather I prefer T-shirts because they are lightweight and practical for summer activities.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first, then explain with a brief reason and an example. Use linking words like "but" or "however" correctly and avoid repeating the same word (convenience/convenient).

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I value ease of movement. However, if an event requires a smart outfit, I can dress smartly for work or formal occasions.

Gợi ý: Avoid exaggeration and repetitive phrases. Make one clear point and support it with a specific reason and example. Correct grammar ("T-shirts have" not "has") and reduce fillers like "uh".

Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I often wear T-shirts when I go to the park or meet friends in summer because they keep me cool.

Gợi ý: Be concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Provide a short reason and a brief example of your routine. Use correct verb forms and clear linking words.

Ví dụ: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually prioritize comfort. For instance, I pick a T-shirt and jeans quickly each morning so I can leave the house on time.

Gợi ý: Clarify and organize your answer: state the general pattern, then give contrasting examples for weekdays and weekends using linking words like "if" or "but". Avoid hesitations and correct tense/forms.

Ví dụ: It depends. On weekdays when I have classes, I often wear more formal or traditional clothes, but on weekends I usually choose comfortable T-shirts and casual shirts because I stay at home.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference and explain why, with one or two specific colors as examples. Avoid excessive hedging and fillers. Use precise adjectives (e.g. "navy blue" not "Navy blue like").

Ví dụ: I usually prefer dark colours, especially navy blue and black, because they are easy to match and don't show stains. I rarely wear bright white because it gets dirty quickly.

× I like to wear classical style clothes because they are very comfortable and uh, I can say that it's very, it's the tradition of our family because my uncle and brother wore it and I like to wear T-shirts too that are very comfortable and convenient in the summer.

✓ I like to wear classical-style clothes because they are very comfortable, and I can say that it is a tradition in our family because my uncle and brother wore them. I also like to wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable and convenient in the summer.

Incorrect or missing articles and determiners and inconsistent reference: 'it's the tradition of our family' is better as 'it is a tradition in our family' to use the article with 'tradition' and the correct preposition. 'wore it' is incorrect because 'clothes' is plural, so use 'wore them'. Also combine sentences for clarity and add missing articles where needed. Improve by matching singular/plural and using appropriate articles and pronouns. Suggestion: Use 'a tradition in our family' and replace 'it' with 'them' for plural noun agreement.

× Actually I'm the type of person who prefers convenience over smart clothes and so I wear convenient clothes.

✓ Actually, I'm the type of person who prefers convenience over smart clothes, so I wear comfortable clothes.

Subject-verb agreement is correct for 'who prefers', but the original used 'convenient clothes' which is an adjective misuse; 'convenient' describes things that make tasks easier, 'comfortable' describes clothing. Also punctuation improves clarity. Suggest using 'comfortable' to describe clothes.

× But if smart clothes is required, I mostly I can wear smart clothes too.

✓ But if smart clothes are required, I can usually wear smart clothes too.

'Clothes' is a plural noun, so use 'are' instead of 'is'. Also streamline phrasing: 'mostly I can' is awkward; use 'I can usually' for natural word order.

× Absolutely yes uh, T-shirts has a crucial role on my life because they are very comfortable and easy and uh, to wear and you can wear it everywhere and you can be comfortable with it, especially in the summer, which uh, when the weather is very hot.

✓ Absolutely. T-shirts have a crucial role in my life because they are very comfortable and easy to wear; you can wear them everywhere and be comfortable, especially in summer when the weather is very hot.

'T-shirts' is plural so the verb should be 'have' not 'has'. Preposition 'on my life' should be 'in my life'. Use plural pronouns 'them' not 'it'. Remove redundant words and fix clause order for clarity.

× No, I don't spend a lot of time on choosing clothes.

✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary after 'spend time' when followed by a verb in -ing form. Use 'spend time choosing' instead of 'spend time on choosing'.

× As I said earlier, I just choose the comfortable ones and just wear them.

✓ As I said earlier, I just choose the comfortable ones and wear them.

Redundant use of 'just' and awkward repetition. Remove the extra 'just' to improve sentence structure and conciseness.

× I'm not the type of person who chooses uh, who spend, uh, time on, uh, clothing.

✓ I'm not the type of person who spends time choosing clothes.

Subject-verb agreement: 'who spend' should be 'who spends' to agree with 'who' referring to 'person'. Also restructure to 'spends time choosing clothes' for natural phrasing.

× And I just take one and pick one and just read it.

✓ I just take one and put it on.

The original sentence is confused: 'pick one and just read it' lacks clear meaning and verbs appropriate to clothing. 'Read it' is incorrect; likely intended 'put it on'. Replace with a clear verb 'put on' to complete the sentence.

× If it's, uh, the week that I study, I sometimes wear, uh, classical clothes to school.

✓ If it's the week when I study, I sometimes wear classical clothes to school.

'The week that I study' is understandable but 'the week when I study' is more natural. Maintain simple present 'study' and 'wear' for habitual actions.

× And uh, yes, on the weekends I wear comfortable clothes, which are T-shirts, maybe shirts too, because most of my weekends spend, uh, spent on my home.

✓ And yes, on the weekends I wear comfortable clothes, such as T-shirts or shirts, because most of my weekends are spent at home.

Incorrect passive construction: 'most of my weekends spend, spent on my home' is wrong. Use passive 'are spent' and correct preposition 'at home'. Also adjust 'which are' to 'such as' for examples and remove redundant words.

× Most of the time I don't choose any color, but if I must choose, I would probably choose the dark ones, uh, Navy blue like, or dark blue, uh, dark black and uh, but I will never wear like very, very, uh, white and something like that.

✓ Most of the time I don't choose a specific color, but if I must choose, I would probably choose dark colors, such as navy or dark blue or black; I would never wear very bright white.

Incorrect quantifier and adjective use: 'any color' is vague; 'a specific color' is clearer. 'The dark ones' should be 'dark colors'. 'Navy blue like' is incorrect phrasing; use 'such as navy or dark blue or black'. 'Very, very white' is awkward—use 'very bright white'. Provide concise parallel structure.