Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence stating the style you prefer (e.g., street style), then give one or two specific reasons and an example. Use correct word choices and simple grammar (e.g., "street style" not "St. style"). Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer wearing street style clothes. I feel more confident and relaxed in jeans, oversized jackets and trainers. For example, I like pairing a denim jacket with a white T‑shirt when I go out with friends because it is comfortable but still looks stylish.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and organize with linking words. Start with a clear statement of preference (or say it depends), then give distinct reasons and a short example. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like "all audience can focus on yourself."

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation: I usually wear smart clothes to university because I want to look professional and make a good impression. However, when I meet friends at the weekend I prefer casual clothes because they are more comfortable and relaxed.

Gợi ý: Be specific and use natural descriptions. Say why you like T‑shirts with concrete reasons (comfort, versatility), and give a short example of how you wear them. Avoid vague phrases like "feel more impression."

Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable and easy to match. For example, I often wear a plain T‑shirt with a skirt or jeans when I go shopping because it keeps me comfortable while still looking neat.

Gợi ý: Make your answer coherent: give a clear yes/no or "sometimes," then explain briefly why and include a concrete detail or example. Correct word choice and tense will help. Avoid repeating or unclear fragments.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often spend some time choosing clothes because I like to look appropriate for each occasion. For instance, I usually decide between a smart outfit for university or a street‑style look for meeting friends, so I check my options before leaving.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and organize: state the difference between weekdays and weekends, then give specific examples of items you wear on each. Use correct noun forms (holidays/weekdays) and clearer linking phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I usually wear smart or casual work‑friendly clothes like blouses and skirts, while on weekends I prefer casual or home clothes such as V‑neck T‑shirts, long‑sleeve tops and comfortable skirts when I spend time with family.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence naming the colours you prefer, then briefly explain why and give a specific example of outfits. Avoid hesitations and repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer pink and white clothes because I have liked those colours since childhood and they suit my style. For example, I often wear a white T‑shirt with a pink skirt or a pink blouse with a white cardigan for a simple, feminine look.

× Every day I prefer to rest up St. style because when I dress up still St. style, I feel more confident and that I can relax at doing something task with street style.

✓ Every day I prefer to dress in street style because when I dress in street style I feel more confident and relaxed when doing tasks.

The student used awkward adjective/adverb phrases ('rest up St. style', 'dress up still St. style') and unnecessary words. Replace them with the adjective phrase 'dress in street style' and use concise verbs 'feel more confident and relaxed' and the gerund phrase 'when doing tasks' for clarity and grammatical correctness. Use consistent preposition 'in' with 'dress' and avoid redundant words.

× It will situational choosing for every day because when I go to university, I always choose smart clothes.

✓ It depends on the situation; for university I always choose smart clothes.

'Situational choosing' is incorrect quantifier/phrase. Use 'depends on the situation' to express conditional choice. Also simplify sentence structure to match natural English.

× It's all like, it's, uh, seems so beautiful and uh, all audience can focus on yourself.

✓ They seem so nice and they help other people focus on you.

Pronoun reference was incorrect ('all audience', 'yourself'). Use 'they' to refer to clothes and 'other people' or 'others' instead of 'all audience'. Use 'focus on you' not 'yourself' because 'yourself' is reflexive and not appropriate here.

× Umm, And when I meet, when I will meet with my friends, I always choose casual.

✓ When I meet my friends, I always choose casual clothes.

The future 'will meet' is unnecessary; use simple present 'meet' for habitual actions. Also add 'clothes' for clarity.

× Yes I like wearing T-shirts because T-shirt is so good and when I dress up T-shirt I feel more impression and it's helped me to do all task easier.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable, and when I wear a T-shirt I feel more confident and it helps me do tasks more easily.

Use plural 'T-shirts' and clearer adjectives ('comfortable'). 'Feel more impression' is incorrect; use 'feel more confident'. Change 'helped me to do all task easier' to 'helps me do tasks more easily' for correct verb form and adverb placement.

× I have many colors T-shirts and every day I wear many own T-shirts with skirts.

✓ I have many colored T-shirts and every day I wear my T-shirts with skirts.

Use 'colored T-shirts' or 'T-shirts in many colors' and possessive 'my T-shirts' instead of 'many own T-shirts'. Ensure noun-adjective order is correct and plural forms match.

× Yes, every day I spend more time choosing a new dress because it's so difficult situation for me.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because it is difficult for me to decide.

'More time' and 'a new dress' are inappropriate here. Use 'a lot of time' for frequency and 'choosing clothes' to match context. 'Difficult situation' should be 'difficult to decide'.

× I have many own clothes but every day I must choose comfort style.

✓ I have many clothes, but every day I choose comfortable styles.

'Many own clothes' is ungrammatical; use 'many clothes'. 'Must choose' is replaced with simple present 'choose' for habitual action. Use adjective 'comfortable' and plural 'styles' to match 'many'.

× For example I owe I have to wear it's St. style and smart.

✓ For example, I sometimes have to wear street style or smart clothes.

'I owe I have to' is incorrect. Use 'sometimes' to indicate occasional requirement. Replace 'it's St. style and smart' with 'street style or smart clothes' for clarity and correct nouns.

× Yes on holiday I prefer to wear casual style and the home clothes.

✓ Yes, on holidays I prefer to wear casual clothes and loungewear at home.

Use plural 'holidays' or 'on holiday' consistently and more natural nouns: 'casual clothes' and 'loungewear' or 'home clothes'. Adjust tense/usage for habitual preference.

× Home clothes is V-neck or long sleeve and skirt.

✓ Home clothes are V-neck tops, long sleeves, and skirts.

Subject 'home clothes' is plural, so use 'are' not 'is'. Also list items clearly and use plural forms where appropriate.

× And on weekends when I go to with my family I everyday choose dress.

✓ On weekends when I go out with my family, I usually choose to wear a dress.

Fix word order ('go out with my family') and adverb placement ('usually' before verb). Use 'choose to wear a dress' for natural phrasing.

× Hmm most of them I choose pink color clothes and white because uh in my childhood I always choose what a pink with a white and I have a more dress and skirt.

✓ I mostly choose pink and white clothes because in my childhood I always chose pink with white, and I now have many dresses and skirts.

Use 'mostly' for frequency, say 'pink and white clothes' rather than 'pink color clothes and white'. Use past tense 'chose' when referring to childhood. Replace 'what a pink with a white' with 'pink with white'. 'I have a more dress and skirt' should be 'I have many dresses and skirts.'

× I choose skirt with T-shirts and the next the next long sleeve.

✓ I choose skirts with T-shirts, and sometimes long sleeves as well.

Original has repeated phrase and poor conjunction use. Use 'and sometimes' to connect options and correct plural 'skirts' and 'long-sleeve tops' for clarity.