Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
I would like to wear comfortable clothes such as baggy pants and T-shirts. Since I'm trying to lose weight, I try to wear the closet that makes it easier to move.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I'm trying to lose weight and it makes it much, much more easier to move. Smart clothes, on the other hand, I like to see people wear it, but that's not my cup of tea.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because it's very easy to wash.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
No, I don't. I don't like spending time to choose growth, so I usually put them on whatever.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 答えは直接的で内容も分かりやすいですが、いくつか改善点があります。文法ミス(closet→clothes)、語の繰り返しや不自然な表現("I'm trying to lose weight"を繰り返す必要はない)を避け、支持文には具体例や理由を加えて流れを良くしてください。文を5文以内に収め、接続語(for example, because, so)を使って論理的につなげるとより自然になります。
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable clothes like baggy pants and T-shirts because they allow me to move freely. For example, loose trousers make exercising and walking easier. I also choose breathable fabrics so I don't get too hot when I'm active.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 良い対比を試みていますが、表現に冗長さ("much, much more easier")や文法の誤り("see people wear it")があります。意見のトピック文を明確にし、理由を1〜2文で具体的に述べ、不要な繰り返しを避けてください。また、コロケーション("my cup of tea"は口語的に良いが文全体を整えて使う)に注意してください。
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they let me move easily, especially when I'm exercising. Smart clothes look nice on other people, but I rarely wear them because they feel restrictive and less practical for my daily routine.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 76.0Gợi ý: 短く直接的で明確ですが、詳細が少ないので具体例や理由を一つ追加すると良いです。また、主語と代名詞の一致(T-shirts → they)や複数形に注意して自然な表現にしてください。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are easy to wash and dry quickly. For instance, when I travel I usually pack several tees since they don't take up much space and can be washed by hand.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: 回答は短いですが複数の言い間違い("choose growth"→choose clothes、"put them on whatever"→wear whatever)と不自然な語順があります。まずは正確な単語を使い、理由や習慣を1文で補足すると良いです。接続語(because, so)で論理を明確にしてください。
Ví dụ: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer a simple routine. I usually pick whatever is clean and comfortable, which saves me time in the morning.
× Since I'm trying to lose weight, I try to wear the closet that makes it easier to move.
✓ Since I'm trying to lose weight, I try to wear clothes that make it easier to move.
The word 'closet' is incorrect in this context; 'clothes' is the correct noun. Also, after 'that' the verb should be base form for present simple relative clause with plural antecedent: 'make' not 'makes'. Use plural agreement because 'clothes' is plural. Suggestion: replace 'the closet' with 'clothes' and change 'makes' to 'make'. Note: This explanation is in English as requested.
× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I'm trying to lose weight and it makes it much, much more easier to move.
✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I'm trying to lose weight and it makes it much easier to move.
The phrase 'much more easier' is ungrammatical; 'easier' is comparative so it should be modified by 'much' or 'much more' with a non-comparative form. Use 'much easier' or 'a lot easier'. Suggestion: change to 'much easier'. Note: This explanation is in English as requested.
× Smart clothes, on the other hand, I like to see people wear it, but that's not my cup of tea.
✓ Smart clothes, on the other hand, I like to see people wear them, but they're not my cup of tea.
'Clothes' is plural, so the pronoun must be plural 'them', not 'it'. Also 'that's' refers to singular; use 'they're' (they are) to refer to 'clothes'. Suggestion: replace 'it' with 'them' and 'that's' with 'they're'. Note: This explanation is in English as requested.
× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because it's very easy to wash.
✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they're very easy to wash.
'T-shirts' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they're' (they are), not 'it's' (it is). Use plural agreement: 'they're very easy to wash.' Note: This explanation is in English as requested.
× No, I don't. I don't like spending time to choose growth, so I usually put them on whatever.
✓ No, I don't. I don't like spending time choosing clothes, so I usually put on whatever is available.
Several issues: 'spending time to choose growth' is meaningless; likely intended 'spending time choosing clothes'. After 'spend time' the gerund form 'choosing' is used (verb + -ing). 'Put them on whatever' is ungrammatical; correct structure is 'put on whatever is available' or 'put on whatever I have'. Suggestion: use 'spending time choosing clothes' and 'put on whatever is available.' Note: This explanation is in English as requested.