Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms (e.g., "I usually wear my work clothes because I work five days a week").

Ví dụ: I usually wear my work clothes during the week because I work five days. Outside work, I prefer Western-style dresses, especially in pink, which is my favorite color.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first, then one or two concise reasons with clearer linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea. Use correct pronouns and verb forms.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed and focused. For example, when I wear soft fabrics and loose cuts I can work and move more easily without feeling distracted.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct grammar: use subject-verb agreement and precise vocabulary. Explain briefly why with a specific reason and avoid confusing words (e.g., "cozy" often has positive meaning; use "too tight" or "too informal" if that’s what you mean).

Ví dụ: To be honest, I don't like wearing T-shirts because I find them too informal and sometimes too tight. I prefer looser tops that feel more comfortable for long periods.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give specific details and a linking word. Remove filler phrases and correct grammar (e.g., "As a girl, I love shopping"). Give a realistic time estimate and one reason why you spend that time.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I enjoy shopping. For example, if I go to the mall I can spend two to three hours deciding which items suit me best, since I like to try many styles before buying.

× Mostly I'm wearing the clothes of my work because I'm working moment I'm working 5 days of the week.

✓ Mostly I wear my work clothes because I am working five days a week.

The student uses present continuous incorrectly for habitual actions. Use simple present for routines (I wear, I work). Also remove redundant phrases and correct word order.

× But mostly I prefer to wear western or the dresses which I love it like in a pink color, my favorite one.

✓ But I mostly prefer to wear Western clothes or dresses that I like, for example a pink one, my favorite.

Use simple present 'prefer' for habitual preference. Remove redundant pronoun 'it' after 'which'. Capitalize 'Western' (cultural adjective). Reorder for clarity and natural phrasing.

× Mostly I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because if we wear the comfortable clothes we will make ourselves happy and good and doing everything in a joyful mood.

✓ I mostly prefer to wear comfortable clothes because when we wear comfortable clothes we feel happy and do everything in a good mood.

Use simple present for general truths ('prefer', 'wear', 'feel', 'do'). Replace 'if' with 'when' for habitual situations. Correct verb forms and remove unnecessary words ('make ourselves good' -> 'feel happy').

× But if we wear the uncomfortable suits or anything, we will destroy our day.

✓ But if we wear uncomfortable suits or other clothes, it can ruin our day.

'Or anything' is vague; use 'other clothes'. Use 'ruin' instead of 'destroy' for natural collocation. Use 'can' or simple present to indicate likely result; 'will' is acceptable but 'can' softens certainty.

× Mostly I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes.

✓ I mostly prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes.

This sentence mainly needs word order correction: place 'mostly' before 'prefer' for natural phrasing. Verb form 'prefer' is already correct for first person.

× To be honest, I not like to wear the T-shirts because I'm wearing the comfortable clothes and the T-shirt I'm feeling too much cozy, which I really not want to.

✓ To be honest, I do not like to wear T-shirts because when I wear them I feel too cozy, which I do not want.

Use auxiliary 'do' for negative present simple ('do not like'). Use 'when I wear them' instead of continuous 'I'm wearing' for habitual statements. 'Too much cozy' is ungrammatical; use 'too cozy'. Replace 'not' with 'do not' for negative clause. Use plural 'them' to refer to T-shirts.

× That's interesting question excuse as I'm girl, I'm love to do shopping and I spend my if I go to shopping, I spend my half day to choose clothes like what I want and I'm choosing a lot like I'm a choosy person.

✓ That's an interesting question. Excuse me, as I'm a girl, I love to go shopping and if I go shopping I spend half a day choosing clothes because I am choosy.

Multiple issues: missing article 'an' before 'interesting question'; 'excuse as I'm girl' is ungrammatical—add 'Excuse me, as I'm a girl'. Use 'love to go shopping' or 'love shopping'. Remove repetition and simplify 'I spend my half day' to 'I spend half a day'. Use gerund 'choosing' after 'spend time' and correct adjective 'choosy'.

× So I take like two or three hours to choose one clothes. That's funny.

✓ So I take two or three hours to choose one item of clothing. That's funny.

'One clothes' is incorrect: use 'one item of clothing' or 'one piece of clothing'. Remove filler 'like' for formal correction. Keep 'two or three hours' as a correct quantifier.