Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
Teachers is my kind of clothes I like to wear because is it a basic and I can wear it on daily on daily and it comfortable when I hung out with friend and I prefer print this T-shirt.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I think I put preferable because on a daily I were comfortable and Kazoo closed the because it's make me feel comfortable and easily to To me, I can do housework or exercise and on a holiday I.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Absolutely. I say yes because I wear T-shirt everyday and I think it's the bad. It's the bad. Cloth on my clothing and dessert make me feel comfortable when I when I do house. How how?
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
No, I, uh, I'm, I am a person who don't care about clothes. Umm, usually when I uh, hang out, I often draw, uh, comfortable clothes like T-shirt.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Sửa ngữ pháp, dùng câu chủ đề rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (vì sao, khi nào). Tránh lặp từ và câu dài lủng củng; sử dụng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý (because, so, when).
Ví dụ: I like wearing T-shirts because they are simple and comfortable. For example, I usually wear printed T-shirts when I hang out with friends because they are easy to combine with jeans and sneakers.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Cần cấu trúc rõ ràng: nêu quan điểm ngay đầu (I prefer...), sau đó giải thích với lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ. Sửa lỗi thì (tense) và từ vựng (comfortable, casual). Hạn chế câu dang dở; dùng liên từ (because, so, for example).
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes for daily wear because they allow me to move freely and do housework or exercise easily. For example, I often wear a sweatshirt and joggers when I spend a day at home or go for a walk.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và giải thích tại sao; tránh những mệnh đề mâu thuẫn và từ không phù hợp (ví dụ 'bad' không đúng ngữ cảnh). Nên đưa ví dụ thực tế và kết luận ngắn gọn. Dùng tối đa 3–4 câu.
Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical. I wear them almost every day at home or when I do chores. For instance, a cotton T-shirt keeps me cool while cleaning or cooking.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và mạch lạc: bắt đầu bằng Yes/No rồi giải thích lý do với một hoặc hai chi tiết. Sửa ngữ pháp (I don't care, I often choose). Tránh tiếng thổn thức (uh, umm) và dùng từ phù hợp (choose, wear).
Ví dụ: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer comfort over fashion. Usually I choose simple outfits like a T-shirt and jeans when I go out.
× Teachers is my kind of clothes I like to wear because is it a basic and I can wear it on daily on daily and it comfortable when I hung out with friend and I prefer print this T-shirt.
✓ Teacher-style clothes are my kind of clothes because they are basic and I can wear them daily. They are comfortable when I hang out with friends and I prefer printed T-shirts.
The sentence had multiple singular/plural mismatches (teachers -> teacher-style clothes; is -> are; it -> them; friend -> friends). Use plural forms for countable nouns when referring generally (clothes, friends) and match verbs to plural subjects. Also split into clear clauses for fluency. Suggestions: use 'teacher-style clothes' or 'school-uniform-style clothes', use plural pronouns 'them' for 'clothes', use 'print(ed) T-shirts' for the noun form.
× I think I put preferable because on a daily I were comfortable and Kazoo closed the because it's make me feel comfortable and easily to To me, I can do housework or exercise and on a holiday I.
✓ I prefer them because on a daily basis I am comfortable in casual clothes; they make me feel comfortable and allow me to do housework or exercise easily. On holidays I also wear them.
The original used incorrect tense forms (were -> am) and awkward phrasing. Use present simple 'I prefer' and 'I am' for habitual states. 'Make' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject 'clothes'. Clarify fragmented sentence 'on a holiday I' by completing it. Suggestions: use 'prefer' for habitual preference, 'on a daily basis' for frequency, and ensure subject-verb agreement.
× Absolutely. I say yes because I wear T-shirt everyday and I think it's the bad. It's the bad. Cloth on my clothing and dessert make me feel comfortable when I when I do house. How how?
✓ Absolutely. Yes, I wear T-shirts every day and I think they are the best clothes for me because they make me feel comfortable when I do housework.
Problems: 'everyday' (adjective) -> 'every day' (adverbial phrase) when meaning each day; 'it's the bad' is incorrect word choice and form; 'Cloth on my clothing and dessert' is unclear and incorrect. Replaced with 'they are the best clothes for me' and 'housework'. Suggestions: use 'every day' to express frequency, use appropriate adjectives ('best' instead of 'bad' if positive meaning intended) and use 'housework' for chores.
× No, I, uh, I'm, I am a person who don't care about clothes. Umm, usually when I uh, hang out, I often draw, uh, comfortable clothes like T-shirt.
✓ No, I am a person who doesn't care much about clothes. Usually when I hang out, I often choose comfortable clothes like T-shirts.
Error: 'who don't' should be 'who doesn't' to agree with singular subject 'person'. 'Draw' is wrong verb here; use 'choose'. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. Suggestions: ensure verb agrees with subject (doesn't for he/she/it), use 'choose' for selecting clothes, and use plural nouns for general statements.