Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Сократите повторения, улучшите структуру ответа и используйте связки. Начните с общей темы, затем приведите одну-две конкретные причины с примером. Уберите лишние слова и исправьте грамматические ошибки (например, 'I feel myself like in a damp' → 'I feel uncomfortable and hot').

Ví dụ: I usually wear shorts and T-shirts at home because they are very comfortable and breathable. For example, I like cotton T-shirts that keep me cool when I relax. I don't like wearing school uniforms, especially the white T-shirt and black skirt, because they feel stiff and make me feel hot and uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: Упростите и уточните мысль, избегайте повторов и незаконченных фраз. Дайте чёткое контрастное объяснение с примером, используя связки (for everyday / however / when). Попрактикуйтесь завершать предложение полностью.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes for everyday wear because they are practical and easy to move in. However, when I attend formal meetings or visit organizations, I choose smart, classic outfits such as a blazer and trousers because they look professional and make a good impression.

Gợi ý: Сформулируйте причину кратко и грамматически правильно, избегайте незавершённых фраз и двусмысленности. Употребляйте корректные выражения для описания предпочтений и последствий (например, 'even if they might tan').

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer sleeveless T-shirts because I find them cooler and they don't restrict my arms. I also like how they let me get some sun, although I know my skin might tan if I wear them often.

Gợi ý: Используйте правильные времена и сократите повторения. Чётко разделите ситуации (покупка vs выбор дома) и объясните почему. Применяйте связки (when I shop / at home).

Ví dụ: I spend a lot of time choosing clothes when I go shopping in supermarkets because I like to compare styles and prices. However, at home I rarely have trouble deciding what to wear because I usually pick a familiar outfit quickly.

× Well I usually wear shorts and T-shirts in my home because they are really comfortable that's why I like them.

✓ Well, I usually wear shorts and T-shirts at home because they are really comfortable, so I like them.

The sentence had issues with preposition choice and sentence connectors rather than verb tense. Use 'at home' not 'in my home'. Add a comma and a coordinating conjunction ('so') instead of 'that's why' to connect clauses smoothly. Also add commas after introductory words for clarity.

× And I don't like school uniforms like white, white T-shirt and black skirt.

✓ And I don't like school uniforms, such as a white T-shirt and a black skirt.

Use 'such as' to give examples and include articles 'a' before singular countable nouns. Remove repeated 'white'. Place a comma before the example phrase for clarity.

× They are very uncomfortable. I feel myself like in a damp already.

✓ They are very uncomfortable. I feel like I'm already damp.

English does not use 'feel myself' in this context; use 'feel' with a complement. Use the contraction or full form 'I am' after 'feel like' and place 'already' after the verb or before 'damp' depending on emphasis.

× I prefer comfortable clothes and casual clothes in my daily to wear in my daily life, but sometimes when I have to go to some organizations or other meetings, I prefer smart clothes classic classic in classic style because they look very.

✓ I prefer comfortable and casual clothes in my daily life, but sometimes when I have to go to organizations or meetings, I prefer classic smart clothes because they look very professional.

Removed repetition and corrected word order: 'comfortable and casual clothes' is more natural; use 'in my daily life'. 'Organizations or meetings' is sufficient and concise. 'Classic smart clothes' or 'classic, smart clothes' conveys the idea; added 'professional' to complete the opinion 'look very...'. Ensure tense and habitual preference is in present simple.

× I like wearing T-shirts without sleeves because sleeves.

✓ I like wearing sleeveless T-shirts because I don't like sleeves.

'Without sleeves' is better expressed as 'sleeveless'. The original fragment 'because sleeves' is incomplete; complete the clause with 'I don't like sleeves'.

× I don't like sleeves, they hide my arms, but I like when my arms are all are open and they see the sun even if they can get black.

✓ I don't like sleeves because they hide my arms, but I like my arms to be exposed to the sun even if they might get darker.

Replace the awkward structure 'I like when my arms are all are open' with 'I like my arms to be exposed'. Use 'darker' not 'black' to describe tanning; use modal 'might' for possibility. Combine clauses with 'because' for clarity and correct punctuation.

× I spent a lot of time to choose my garments in supermarkets while I am choosing while I am buying them, but at home I don't have any problem with selecting one type of clothes to go somewhere.

✓ I spend a lot of time choosing clothes in supermarkets when I buy them, but at home I don't have any problem selecting what to wear to go somewhere.

Use present simple 'I spend' for habitual action rather than past 'I spent'. Use 'choosing' (verb+ -ing) after 'spend time'. Remove repetition 'while I am choosing while I am buying them'. Use 'what to wear' instead of 'one type of clothes' and correct noun phrasing 'clothes' without 'type' when unnecessary.