Part 1
Giám khảo
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, uh, the clothes is. And very special because everybody is different. And if, uh, she and he were, uh, social.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Thí sinh
I prefer a comfortable because. MMM. Compulsive Bill is most important for me. Secondly, I love this relax. I love be relaxed.
Giám khảo
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yes, because it is so heavy and very quick rank.
Giám khảo
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Thí sinh
Yes I do, because I don't choose uh, especially in the morning.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: Cevap kısa, belirsiz ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Önce doğrudan konu cümlesi kurun (hangi tür giysileri sevdiğinizi söyleyin), ardından 1–2 destekleyici neden verin. Gereksiz dolgu sözcüklerini (uh, um) çıkarın ve tekil/çoğul ile uyuma dikkat edin. Örneğin ‘I like casual clothes because they are comfortable and suitable for social situations.’ gibi açık bir yapı kullanın.
Ví dụ: I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and reflect my personality. For example, I often choose jeans and a simple shirt when I go out with friends, since they suit informal social events.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Cevap net ama karışık ifadeler ve telaffuzdan kaynaklı bozulmalar var. Önce tercih ettiğinizi açıkça söyleyin, sonra 1–2 neden verin ve bağlaç kullanın. Gereksiz tekrarları ve anlamsız kelimeleri çıkarın. Dilbilgisine dikkat ederek ‘I prefer comfortable clothes because…’ ile başlayın.
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because comfort is my top priority. For instance, when I'm studying or meeting friends I choose soft fabrics and loose fits so I can relax and move easily.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Cevap anlam açısından tutarsız ve yanlış kelime seçimleri var (‘heavy’, ‘rank’ uygun değil). Kısa ve doğrudan cevap verin, sonra gerçek nedenleri açık ve spesifik kelimelerle söyleyin. Örneğin T-shirtlerin hafif, çok yönlü ve kullanışlı olduğunu belirtin.
Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are lightweight and versatile. I often wear them with jeans or shorts as they are easy to wash and comfortable for everyday wear.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Cevap çelişkili ve eksik. Önce net bir cevap verin (evet/hayır), sonra neden açıklayın. Sabah hazırlanırken zaman kaybettiğinizi veya aksine hızlı karar verdiğinizi belirtin ve bir örnek verin. Dolgu kelimelerini azaltın ve cümleleri tamamlayın.
Ví dụ: Yes, I do spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes, especially in the morning. For example, I often try several outfits to make sure they match and look appropriate for the day's activities.
× 'In my opinion, uh, the clothes is.'
✓ 'In my opinion, uh, clothes are.'
'The noun clothes is always plural in English, so it requires a plural verb. Use clothes are rather than clothes is. Suggestion: treat clothes like the plural word they are (e.g., "Clothes are important to me").'
× 'And very special because everybody is different.'
✓ 'They are also very special because everybody is different.'
'The original fragment lacks a clear subject and verb. Starting with They are clarifies the subject (referring to clothes) and completes the sentence. Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a subject and a verb (e.g., "They are very special because everybody is different").'
× 'And if, uh, she and he were, uh, social.'
✓ 'And if people are social, they may dress differently.'
'The original is unclear and ungrammatical. "She and he" is awkward when meaning people; use people or they. Also use present tense are for a general condition. Suggestion: rephrase unclear pronouns and complete the thought (e.g., "If people are social, they may dress differently").'
× 'I prefer a comfortable because.'
✓ 'I prefer comfortable clothes because...'
'The adjective comfortable cannot take the indefinite article a when it modifies an unspoken plural noun. You need a noun: comfortable clothes. Suggestion: include the noun after the adjective and remove the article (e.g., "I prefer comfortable clothes because...").'
× 'Compulsive Bill is most important for me.'
✓ 'Comfort and fit are the most important to me.'
'The phrase "Compulsive Bill" is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended ideas are comfort and fit; use nouns that express these qualities. Also use the superlative structure "the most important to me." Suggestion: choose appropriate nouns and use "the most important to me."'
× 'Secondly, I love this relax.'
✓ 'Secondly, I love feeling relaxed.'
'"This relax" is ungrammatical: relax is a verb, not a noun here. Use a gerund or adjective phrase: feeling relaxed or being relaxed. Suggestion: use "feeling relaxed" or "being relaxed" to express the idea.'
× 'I love be relaxed.'
✓ 'I love being relaxed.'
'After love to express enjoyment of a state or activity, use the gerund form (being) not the base verb. Suggestion: use "I love being relaxed" or "I like to feel relaxed."'
× 'Yes, because it is so heavy and very quick rank.'
✓ 'Yes, because it is very comfortable and easy to dry quickly.'
'"Heavy" and "quick rank" do not make sense for T-shirts. Likely intended: comfortable and quick-drying. Use appropriate adjectives and compound adjective quick-drying. Suggestion: choose accurate adjectives for clothing (e.g., "comfortable" and "quick-drying").'
× 'Yes I do, because I don't choose uh, especially in the morning.'
✓ 'Yes, I do, because I don't have time to choose in the morning.'
'The original is unclear and missing words. To say you spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but then contradict by saying you don't choose in the morning, clarify: "I don't have time to choose in the morning." Suggestion: add the necessary noun phrase (time) and prepositional phrase (in the morning) to complete the meaning.'