Clothing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dasar dan susunan kalimat. Gunakan kalimat topik langsung, perbaiki penggunaan kata kerja dan preposisi (mis. “I like to wear jackets because they protect me when it’s cool”). Tambahkan satu detail spesifik jika perlu. Hindari redundansi.

Ví dụ: I like to wear jackets because they keep me warm when the weather is cool. For example, I often wear a denim jacket in the evenings because it’s light but still protects me from the chill.

Gợi ý: Sederhanakan dan perbaiki struktur: mulai dengan pernyataan langsung, lalu beri alasan yang jelas dan satu contoh. Perbaiki bentuk kata kerja (prefer to wear), artikula (the) dan hilangkan klausa tidak jelas. Contoh: “I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and suit my style.”

Ví dụ: I prefer to wear casual clothes because they are comfortable and match my personal style. For instance, I usually choose a plain T‑shirt and jeans from a brand I like when I go out with friends.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki repetisi dan tata bahasa. Gunakan satu kalimat topik singkat lalu jelaskan alasan dengan detail spesifik (mis. cuaca), dan gunakan linking word jika perlu. Pastikan kata jamak/singular tepat (T‑shirts).

Ví dụ: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable and suitable for hot weather. In the afternoons, I usually choose a cotton T‑shirt because it keeps me cool and dries quickly.

Gợi ý: Jawaban tidak jelas dan berulang. Berikan pernyataan langsung apakah Anda menghabiskan banyak waktu atau tidak, lalu jelaskan alasan singkat dan contoh kebiasaan (mis. memilih cepat karena rutinitas atau memilih lama untuk acara khusus). Perbaiki tata bahasa dan urutan kata.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I usually pick simple outfits quickly. However, I sometimes take more time when I need a special outfit for an event, like a party or a job interview.

× I like wear clothes of jacket because jacket is too protect me in cool.

✓ I like wearing jackets because a jacket protects me from the cold.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the -ing form (present participle): 'like wearing' not 'like wear'. Also use plural 'jackets' or 'a jacket' depending on general statement; here 'jackets' fits. 'Protect' needs third person singular agreement 'protects' because the subject is 'a jacket'. Use preposition 'from' with 'protect' and 'cold' (noun) rather than 'in cool'. Use 'the cold' (specific condition). Suggestion: practice structures 'I like + gerund' and subject-verb agreement for present simple verbs.

× I so prefer to wearing casual clothes because the casual clothes is my style and I like so the casual clothes and the brand in casual clothes. I will ring is.

✓ I prefer wearing casual clothes because casual clothes are my style and I really like casual brands.

After 'prefer' use either 'to + base verb' or gerund, not 'prefer to wearing'; choose 'prefer wearing' or 'prefer to wear'. Remove colloquial 'so' misplaced; use 'really' instead. 'Casual clothes' is plural, so use 'are' not 'is' (subject-verb agreement). Simplify redundant phrases. The final fragment 'I will ring is' is unclear and should be omitted or clarified; here it is removed. Suggestion: learn correct combinations: 'prefer + gerund' and match subject and verb number with plural nouns.

× Yes, I like wearing shirt because in every day and every place I like wearing shirt because the weather is so hot in. Afternoon.

✓ Yes, I like wearing shirts because every day and everywhere I wear shirts since the weather is so hot in the afternoon.

Use plural 'shirts' for general statements. After 'like' use gerund 'wearing'. 'Every day' is two words when used adverbially. 'Every place' is better as 'everywhere'. Place adverb 'in the afternoon' should follow 'hot' or be 'in the afternoon' at the end, not 'in. Afternoon'. Also use 'since' or 'because' to connect cause. Suggestion: practice adverb placement and use of gerunds after 'like'.

× In every choosing clothes I am not to spend much, spend a lot of time in.

✓ When choosing clothes, I do not spend much time.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary words. Use a subordinating clause 'When choosing clothes' or 'When I choose clothes' and the correct auxiliary 'do not' for present simple negative. Remove contradictory phrase 'spend a lot of time' which conflicts with 'not to spend much'. Suggestion: practice forming conditional/time clauses and negatives in present simple.

× I choose clothes because in choosing clothes I use or I will.

✓ I choose clothes carefully because when choosing I consider comfort and style.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear ('I use or I will' is not a complete thought). Provide a clear reason and objects of the verb, e.g., 'consider comfort and style'. Use 'when choosing' for the time clause. Suggestion: plan complete sentences with subject, verb and object and avoid fragments.